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Nazma

@NazmaJ

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: shinyclassic
😉👏oh WOWWW,,I read it first ,,then read it again,,then i imagined it how will it happen,,and i realised it was very very very beautiful,,,,thanks to ur writing,,,,it is really amazing,,if this really works out how u have depicted it,,this particular thing will work wonders for the show,,,,👏

Thankyou so much for you comments!!! I tried to keep it quite gentle.

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Nazma

@NazmaJ

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: kitty.pooni
Wow well done your os is awesome

Well done 👏

Thankyou!!

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Nazma

@NazmaJ

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: zee10
fantastic OS...well written...
well done..

Thankyou!! Wasn't sure if the writing was any good as it's my first time but I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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Traxy101

@Traxy101

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

AMAZING OS, I loved it so much, you portrayed everything so beautiful and I love that line "If ever I was forced to choose between you and mom I would always choose you"

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Nazma

@NazmaJ

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Traxy101
AMAZING OS, I loved it so much, you portrayed everything so beautiful and I love that line "If ever I was forced to choose between you and mom I would always choose you"

Thankyou!!

I thought I needed to put something that would show exactly how strong Ahem's feelings for Gopi are!

Edited by NazmaJ - 13 years ago

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annu.ac

@annu.ac

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

this is so awsome.i really like it.well done.

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taniks

@taniks

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

That was so beautiful , I loved the gentle and romantic way in which he told her he loved her.

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AamiraWilson

@AamiraWilson

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Marvelous. 👏 I love your OS. Beautifully done.

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641345

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

great OS Nazma...😳 love it

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smithasrk

@smithasrk

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#20

👏I liked what you have written but i donot think their union is going to be as simple as this. A Lot have happened between them Ahem should truly understand gopi , her past, her life with urmi and rashi, wht she have suffered , wht kinjal had done etc etc.

Aham have a long way to go

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