FF She's Like The Wind, Chapter 12, p109, 11th Feb

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sukri

@sukri

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#421

This was awesome !!!! you made my weekend..

Just love the way you described Ahem's thoughts for Gopi..

Wish I could see this story instead of whats actually happening in SNS, though was already imagining this happening in my mind...

looking forward for the next part.. please don't get Gopi suffer, dont want her to cry or feel ashamed of herself in any way. I want Aham to now fight with Kokila for Gopi.

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Jammona

@Jammona

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Posted: 13 years ago

#422

tinker11 loved the update so much had to read it twice.great work and waiting for the next

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NRChau

@NRChau

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#423

Hola gurl... Sorry for this delay... Wanted to comment right away but I had to be rushed to the emergency! No worries, all good now.. Now let's get back to what I m here for... For me this update was what cocaine is to an addict!! You wrote their first kiss so beautifully that I could actually visualize each n everything... It was as if I was the one being kissed ... It must have been that very moment I had stopped breathing n lost consciousness... Lol, if Ahemji could perform some CPR on poor me!! I am gonna hold my breath until ur next update... Dont worry m quite used to being out of breath by now, thanks to ur wonderful story telling skills... ;) btw thank you for giving me my Diwali fireworks, so what if it arrived a couple days late!!

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Raunika

@rsk16

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#424

I am totally speechless.Just totally perfect.loved each n every incident of this update.loved the awesome romantic scene.plz just don't make gopi regret what happened .all in all, i totally am your fan for this.

Raunika

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savvi

@savvi

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#425

oh my god i like this ahemji and gopi , chori chori shaadi se pehle bathroom mein 😳 i dont know how much i liked this chapter...

thank thank thank so much...

i am reading all the ff's but i shoudl say EK SE BADKAR EK HAI"

EACH ONE OF THE LINES TAKES MY BREATH AWAY AND LEAVE ME SPEECHLESS

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_Precious_

@_Precious_

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#426

that was a wonderful update. I liked your Ahem, possessive about Gopi, well Ahem deserves her more than Jigar. I am just too curious to know if anita and jigar will see them both together in the bathroom. If so what will be Gopi's fate. Their first kiss was beautifully depicted, I can imagine it now. Well done.

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Traxy101

@Traxy101

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#427

That was an amazing chapter!

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ANJ4

@ANJ4

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#428

WOW ... Just read this ... WOW ... yesterday I went to see RA.ONE ... so I missed you upday...

Thank you so much ... this is better than Disneyland...they say it is the happiest place on earth. I but think your chapter was the happiest place to be. Tink you out did yourself...The bathroom scene could not be better describe, than how you did... WOW...I want to go back and read it again, coz as I was reading it I felt I was there in the bathroom with ahem and gopi.

What a wonderful present for the new year.

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Shagun

@sweet_shagun

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#429

Beautiful update yet again i just read it u have a amazing skill do continue... m glad am here today again:) on time:D do continue soon:)

I am indeed enchanted to read this magical love story:)
PS- thanks for using my GoHem sig😳n let me knw abt updts if possible on my fb 😳

Luv,

Shagun

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ANJ4

@ANJ4

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#430

This is the 3rd time I have read it ... I think this time ws even better than the first time... Really I guess you had to be there...LOL I read the bathroom scene , one word at a time...OMG.

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