FF She's Like The Wind, Chapter 12, p109, 11th Feb - Page 45

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: hanaGoHem

its wonderful here also her kalakari did not work where she wanted but it happen anether place i like gohem part what will happen next jigar or anita see gopie hahem together t or hahem will say to gopie he love her .i cant too know wat will happen once again well done come soon yaar 😊👍🏼

Thanks very much, I can see a lot of readers were happy that the kalakari didn't work, so it's nice to give you something to smile about I guess. Well as for Gohem in the bathroom and Anita being outside, well I guess you're just gonna have to wait..😉.
I'll try to be out with the update soon. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: gmjudv

great update. thanks.

Thank you. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tina_1234

its amazin...i read it agn...nd m speechless...i just donno wat to say...i hate urshi more...nd nd i LOVED d kiss...i luv ur ahem more thn d original one...nd nikhil well no comments for him...panna is sooo adorable...well last but not d least...dyin to knw wat happns next...how will ahem cancel d engagements coz gopi wont engaged to jigar aftr tht kiss...m sure of tht...plz not let gopi bare any insults frm any1...nd dont let ppl question her char...i dnt want ahem being her rescuer but i want him to fight for her nd realize her worth...well waitin for d next part :)

Hey girl nice to see you back, and you are speechless, seriously, that's actually quite amazing! Just kidding. 😆
Well I'm defo glad you liked the kiss lol, aaawww and you like my Ahem more - wow, that's really nice of you - although he is actually Gopi's Ahem😉. Well I can see why no comments for Nikhil, he's a little background decoration at the moment innit. I agree Panna is cute, I do miss her in the show.
Well Ahem's reaction to the kiss will be revealed in the next chapter of course, and don't worry babe, Ahem had more than a fair idea of Gopi's worth. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Bloem123

Very nice. Loved it 😳
Fantastic like always 😃

Thanks so much hun 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sukri

This was awesome !!!! you made my weekend..

Just love the way you described Ahem's thoughts for Gopi..
Wish I could see this story instead of whats actually happening in SNS, though was already imagining this happening in my mind...
looking forward for the next part.. please don't get Gopi suffer, dont want her to cry or feel ashamed of herself in any way. I want Aham to now fight with Kokila for Gopi.

Oh glad to hear that babe. 😳😳
Well than I guess that's as good as seeing! If you can imagine it tha what more could I possibly ask of a reader as a writer!
Don't worry Gopi won't suffer, well not for the wrong reasons anyway, Ahem will be in for a surprise after this, I can't say a good one, but one that will definitely put up a fight for Gopi. 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kamjal

tinker11 loved the update so much had to read it twice.great work and waiting for the next

Wow you read it twice! Thanks😳, will try my best to be out with the next one soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: NRChau

Hola gurl... Sorry for this delay... Wanted to comment right away but I had to be rushed to the emergency! No worries, all good now.. Now let's get back to what I m here for... For me this update was what cocaine is to an addict!! You wrote their first kiss so beautifully that I could actually visualize each n everything... It was as if I was the one being kissed ... It must have been that very moment I had stopped breathing n lost consciousness... Lol, if Ahemji could perform some CPR on poor me!! I am gonna hold my breath until ur next update... Dont worry m quite used to being out of breath by now, thanks to ur wonderful story telling skills... ;) btw thank you for giving me my Diwali fireworks, so what if it arrived a couple days late!!

Hey my desigirl !! Ooops if you're delayed than what am I lol???😆😳 Wait what emergency????😲😲😲😲😲 (I'll msg u).
OMG you addict!!😆 Oh thanks babe, so glad you liked their first kiss, was it as good as the other one, or you think I was slack with this one??😳 Hahaa omg you felt like he was kissing you, you jokerrr! CPR oh man don't don this lol, I've had this convo before about Gaurav lol, there was three of us fighting over him!!!!!! Well a piece of advice would be don't hold your breath babe, I really don't know how long I'm gonna be with the next update, I am trying to make time to get it done though.
Aaw hun don't flatter me with praise😳😳, you know me! ☺️ Well you always for Bonfire night babe, so real glad this update was pataka-fied for you! 😉😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: rsk16

I am totally speechless.Just totally perfect.loved each n every incident of this update.loved the awesome romantic scene.plz just don't make gopi regret what happened .all in all, i totally am your fan for this.

Raunika

Thanks so much hun, glad you liked all the details. Gopi won't regret as such, but there will be some doubt at the very least. Aaaw thanks that's such a lovely thing to say! 😊😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: savvi

oh my god i like this ahemji and gopi , chori chori shaadi se pehle bathroom mein 😳 i dont know how much i liked this chapter...

thank thank thank so much...
i am reading all the ff's but i shoudl say EK SE BADKAR EK HAI"
EACH ONE OF THE LINES TAKES MY BREATH AWAY AND LEAVE ME SPEECHLESS

Lol for a minute there I thought you was gonna sing that song from the movie chori chori chupke chupke😳😳😳, but I'm glad that you liked this chapter a lot.
Oh babe you're most welcome!
I know the feeling, there was a time I used to read so many ff's that I was confused to say which ff is better, it happens to the best of us.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: _Precious_

that was a wonderful update. I liked your Ahem, possessive about Gopi, well Ahem deserves her more than Jigar. I am just too curious to know if anita and jigar will see them both together in the bathroom. If so what will be Gopi's fate. Their first kiss was beautifully depicted, I can imagine it now. Well done.

Thanks a lot hun, and yes I also agree, I do truly believe that Ahem deserves Gopi more than Jigar. Aah well that's something you'll find out in the next chapter itself. Gopi's fate will without doubt always end up with Ahem, but for the moment she is bound to the morals set by the elders of her household. Glad you appreciated their first kiss, and even glad that you could visualise the whole thing. Thank you. 😊

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