FF She's Like The Wind, Chapter 12, p109, 11th Feb - Page 34

Originally posted by: bhavya

hey waiting fort he next update

Originally posted by: swasthi

Tink, just read your latest update. Thanks for the length, it made up for the previous one.

Well the story is moving on and and the mystical story is unfolding into reality. I loved your wiry perceptive natured Ahem towards Gopi, especially when his temper flared and he lost total control of himself. You brought it to a natrual end too with them parting ways as friends and a strengthening sense of magnetism between each other.

I wonder whether the green outfit would mistakenly be sized to Gopi and sent to her to wear.

Looking forward to the garba scene in the update soon.

Originally posted by: SNS_fan101

hey this is a great chapter
update soon

Originally posted by: tina_1234

its more thn a week now,,,plzz updt

Originally posted by: stary_kajal

hey tinker bell it was amazing sweety

u did a great job dear

well i m impressed with this different concept

and yeah i must say that you are a good writer sweety

one thin i want to say that try to put some romantic scene between gopi and ahem as we all are waiting to have these scene actually in serial also

I loved your ff.. and yeah please pm me whenever you update sweetheart

dont make it long...as we cant wait so longer

god bless you

take care

and update soon

kajal

Originally posted by: bhavya

hey waiting for update where Aham feels he cant let gopi out of his hand...