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Posted: 13 years ago
Once again I thank you all for your wonderful comments and to all those who took time to read.

PART 30:

They headed to the park feeling down and drained and could not believe their luck. " How could that not be my brother and could two people look so similar in every aspect" thought Jigar, first his hopes were high seeing the man thinking that now things are going to happen for the better but nature always has its surprises to give.

" Jigarji please don't beat yourself down...think positively and maybe things will turn out for the better...but I must say I find the whole thing creepy and do not trust that woman... she seemed so dominating and it looks to that she has her hand on Ram if that is his name." " What are you trying to say" Jigar asked confused "Look the way that woman keep a firm grip on Ahe... I mean Ram and keeps interrupting him as if the words are not his but he was made to believe that." " Kajal the man confirmed that it's his family.." " But Jigarji am just saying that I do not trust that woman and I think we should have followed her and know where they live and all. I've studied psychology and people's behaviour and actions speaks louder than what they say... anyway for now lets forget what happened today and concentrate on how to bring Di and Angad here." Kajal said trying to shift the focus on something else other than today's incidents and besides she is there to comfort him and not make him pin his hopes on some psychological instinct.

When she still felt him disarrayed she added " so what's was the plan you had in mind and please don't put it off now...okay since you are tongue tight hear my idea and then compare it with yours...Am thinking we should use the same method that bhai used to get Di out of here to bring her back." Now Jigar's mind is concentrated on her and the tension seems to have lessened. " Di has always spoken so warmly about your family and most of all her immence love for Baa and how she love to spend her time listening to her read and her love for her husband..."" Kajal am still not getting what you are on about so please come to the point."

"I have a friend in Australia who likes Di a lot..." " It this some joke you are coming up with...to hook my bhabi with some Australian punk..." " Jigarji why do you jump to conclusions without listening to me first?... I know that I've let you down badly and broken your trust but am doing this for Di as well and hoping one day she will forgive my part in this whole fiasco even though she said am not to blame for my part...so you see Jigarji am with you on this no matter how our relationship is."

He sigh " am sorry Kajal it's just that after what happened am on the edge of a break down and it's not like I don't trust you...I love your company and comfort and the calmness you bring to me...am just too stressed out at the moment to make sense of anything but I will hear you out." " It's okay and I do understand and if our plan works then things can only get better from here...anyway my idea is to write a letter to Di through my friend Angie and tell her how frail Baa is getting and that her wish is to see a Modi great grand child...I will not tell her about our meetings or that you told me so and the reason being if bhai happens to get a hold of the letter at least he will know that am not in touch with the Modis but only made enquires...we can both speak to Angie and tell her of our plans in advance and hope Di will take over the rest."

Jigar was amazed at her idea and sounded so perfect and can easily be well executed. " You do have a an awesome mind and to be frank my idea sucks where yours is concern." Now they stirred at each other for seems like eternity with her blushing and him pleasing himself with the effect he has on her but wanted more and pulled her ever so lightly towards her and bent his head too close to her and saw her eyes shut anticipating his next move and waited till she felt his lips on her forehead and immediately opened her eyes and saw him smirk and wishper " not now sweetie as we have company" pointing to the passers-by and grab her hand and led her out there and to their car. "It's late and at the moment I have very hyper family waiting at home who question my every move but I love your idea and we will implement it soonest so I will call you to discuss the details of the letter and huh Kajal It's being a pleasure having you back...I appreciate your help since you came." You are welcome she said and opened her car door to leave but felt him grab her hand and swung her around holding her around her waist and said " we still have an unfinished business and my sleeping pill." He saw the twinkle in her eyes and brought his lips and kissed the corner of her mouth and lingered there for a while then went for her cheeks, then eyes and nose and skip her lips and went for her neck, kissing her there before moving to the corner of her ears. She was now burning with desire and clutched the front of his shirt and pulled him closer and encouraging him to please her by licking her lips seductively. The move was so sensual and Jigar gave in and took her lips at first kissing her gently but as she responded driving him insane by opening her mouth, he increased the pressure and wanted more but pushing her against the car and digging into her mouth enjoying the pleasure radiating from her moans and her breasts against his hard chest was increasing his desire for her and was calling her name in her mouth without breaking the kiss. He was so arouse that he felt if he continue he will actually take her there and with that realisation,he broke it off abruthly. Both were breathing heavily and he just hugged her until they both calmed and kissed her forehead and allowed her to drive off. " Wow that was hot ans intense, careful Jigar before you loose it." he talked to himself and drove off.

After intense meetings,planning and phone conversations, they but their work to the test and sent the letter. It was not easy for Angie to get Gopi by herself and hand her the letter and in the privacy of her place she opened the letter and began reading:

My dear Di,

Am sure by now you are aware of my absence there but I will be surprised whether you know where I am at. Let me guess you have been told that I being on a business trip but do not know where and please do not worry as am fine and well taken cared of. Well for your information an in RAJKOT
and do not panick as this is more of a business trip for three months.

I have called many time there but was always told that you are in the privacy of your room and that my message will be conveyed but am sure it has not. Please convey my love to my dearest little kittens ( Angad and Shalini )and is missing them so much.

Di I know you do not blame me for what we have done to you but there is not a day that I do not feel your pain and wished the hand of time could be converted and all this mess would not have been.

The purpose of my letter is serious and of urgent and important and confidential nature. Di whatever you read from this please do not share it with bhai or bhabi as am certain they would not allow it. Whilst I have been here I have hired a person to check on your family and update me of any serious matter and that's the main reason am writing this letter.

Di the point of the matter is that BAA. I know the mare mention of her will shake you to the core as you have on many occasion have told me of your concern towards her and her health. Well to put it simple to you, she has not being able to handle the news of both you and Ahemjiju's death well and is in COMA AND LIFE SUPPORT and doctors do not know how long she has. The information I got from my source is that before she went into coma, her wish is to see her great grand child before she breath her last.

Well Di as she thinks you are no more like Ahemjiju, she is now pinning her hopes on Jigarji who is now a divorcee and no intention of marrying any time soon even with pressure from the family. Well the fact of the matter is that even if he agreed to marry soon, how long is can BAA hold on before Jigarji produces an heir.

Di this is going to be hard on you and Modi family but it's better for the truth to be out now and you will be with your family and share their grieve on loosing Ahemjiju. This is your chance to put things into perspective and take contol of your live and especially Angad. He needs to know his family and as he starts to grow he will want to know about his father and his family. We both know that he already asked questions when he saw fathers picking their children from school.

I know you hate to lie but at the same will do anything for your love ones. So this is about uniting BAA with Angad. Di when you and Ahemji separated for two years, he never gave up looking for you nor did you give up on your love and care for him and your two worked out your differences and your love blossomed into Angad but unfortunately for him it was too late but you owe it to his family.

Di my solution for you to come here is written in another letter explaining the details and to assist your case when you argue it out with bhai.

You have my fullest support and achieve the desired success and please be strong and firm and fight nature to gain happiness if you have to.

You little sister
Kajal

Two weeks passed and no news from her Di either a return mail or call and both Jigar and Kajal gave up on their idea. They sat in their restaurant and started making another plan thinking where to make amends. After finally agreeing on how to execute it both slumbered on their seats looking out of the window and also hoping to catch upon Ram and is family but since that day they seems to have avoided the area. " So did your brother give you any indication of any conversation with Gopi bhabi...I mean ..." Her phone ringing distracted them and when she checked it, she muttered " I don't know this number at all but then again it could be from the office...Hello...What!!..How!! I mean that's awesome..Okay,okay,I will be there...Ahhh Jigarji, it worked... Jigarji, am so happy.." "Are you going to put me out of my misery" " Di is at the airport".

Well FF lovers I leave you at a cliff hanger and enjoy

shajnaii thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh no..u jst left it in a very twisted point...

i hope u will update sooon...its a very nice FF
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow!!! Super.. but not fair u left us @ such point.. please do continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanx for the pm Kamjal and thanx for updating so quickly or the suspence is gonna kill me...have a feeling Ahemji has lost his memory and Radha is taking adv...😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
m a silent reader of ur ff its amazing with twists. thank u so much kajal for this nice ff pls update soon.
MereMahiyaa. thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing Update Cant wait to read the next part!
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow amezing but also sad as ahem is lost memory i must say im sure the other woman is anita i think whem ahem will met gopi he will remember of her
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update ...glad gopi is back ... waiting for Ahem now 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
Great update,thanks for the PM!😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow finally Gopi is back to be with her family...waiting for the next part !!!

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