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Posted: 13 years ago

A superb update. A plan that worked ... Gopi is back home.

It will be a shock for Jigar at first and more so for the Modi famiily. Looking forward to her reuniting with Koki and family. Hope Ram is Ahem.
Looking forward to the next update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
finally jigar and kajal are together...thank god...and i really wish it was not that stupid ram and it is ahemji...pls pls dont leave us like this..now that gopi is back in india..i wish ahem aka ram sees gopi and everything comes back to his memory like a flash and gohem unite...and then with family...god kamjal...u r so good at leaving us in tension..pls pls update fast...😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank you to everyone that inspired me to continue with this FF and for your incredible comments. Well decided to update as it seems we are all being bullied by kokila and her tantrums.


PART 31:

"Oh Kajal this is the best news ever to be seeing bhabi after so long and and...Angad...just the joy of knowing that she is here is great news. Thank you Kajal for your support as without you by my side, this would not have been possible. Anyway let go we cannot keep her waiting...Kajal! are you listening?...What are you waiting for, we need..." He was so emotional already tears forming in his eyes.

"Jigarji am sorry but you cannot come to the airport with me." What! " Be reasonable Jigarji, how is Di to handle the shock of seeing you at the airport and that too with me. Jigarji we have to thread carefully by thinking of her heart condition and the pain she has been through. Obviously you too will eventually meet as through you she will meet your family."

"You are right but am coming with you in a different car and I can at least see them at a distance so lets not waste more time." Kajal understood his restlessness to see his family and agreed but seem as nature has other challenges for them. As they headed towards their car, they saw te small girl who was with Ah... Ram all by herself begging. " Kajal you go ahead and pick bhabi up I will have to find something about this family since that day after listening to you I thought it won't hurt to find the truth of Ram and his family."

Jigar was silently following the little girl as her gets on with her task of getting alms " how can people be so mean and not help such an amazing child. May be her parents are not well and was forced to do this all by herself.Ohh my this detective work is so hard for me and by the looks of it I will be sleeping on the streets tonight. let me call Kajal and find out if bhabi is now at home...no ..what if bhabi picks up the phone... or over hears us... no Jigar wait till you are called but now I have to do some thing with Radha it's might be my best chance." He thought and went towards the girl who now out of exhaustion was sitting by the edge of the temple with her empty bowl and look weak. He quietly put the food he bought on her plate and when she looked up, at first excitement was written on her face and after a lot of thank you, she seems to have recognised him and went silent and looked scared and even wanted to run away from him only to be stopped.

He took her to a nearby Daaba and sat down. " Look please don't be scared I just saw...I mean you looked tired and I thought you needed some food so that's why I gave you so please you can sit here and eat quietly." " No no no we always share food we get or anything else uncle that's why I have to go." "Listen you can eat what I have given you and then I will buy more for your parents." " My paren..ts! okay uncle." She replied and ate her food in silence but Jigar senses some tension in her but did not want to scare her so when she finished and he ordered more for her to take but she refused to take his lift offer and headed home. Jigar decided to walk on foot and followed her. After walking for what felt like the edge of the world, they reach their destination but he was confused as the little girl was not sharing the food with her parents but three other smaller children. He could not understand...may be the couple has more kids...but how can they leave the little ones and go on about there job... who takes care of the others whilst they are gone... I have to find out but it's too late and I want to know about bhabi and mum will be worried as well...I have the whole day tomorrow ( Sunday ) so I will handle this matter then.

"My Kitten is tired huh Angad. Di you go up and freshen up and I will take care of Angad. Di you just go up I'll send your luggages up and come down after freshening up to ave dinner." Later after dinner and putting Angad to sleep the two of them decided to stay and chat for a while and discuss how to best make the family meet Angad.

"Di your medicines you have to take them and don't worry Angie will order your prescriptions for you when these are done...and so..." " I don't feel right not telling Sanjay bhai and Saraben the truth...I think we should call them and..." " please Di you have not lied to them but we just kept them away from what we are doing and Di this for you as well as Angad so please don't even think of that now. Listen Di this life is yours and for you to deal with, am just helping you but the final decision is your. If you do not want this then it should be your decision too and for how long are you going to allow bhai and bhabi run your life, am not saying they are bad people but they have made wrong choices for you and that's why you are in a dilemma now but like I said if you want them involve tat's fine but don't let them stop you from doing what is right. Look no one has been happy since that unfaithful day and only innocent people like you, Angad and jiju's family are suffering and paying the price and it time to put things right if you want to. I will leave you for now to think things through and whatever you want to do then we will speak about it tomorrow and Di one more thing, you are doing this for Ahemjiju...Good night."

" Jigarji I don't know if Di want to go through this any more as she is more worried about bhai being kept in the dark...am sure she is scared as well as to how to face your family after so many years" Kajal was tell him when he called to enquire. " Kajal what you told bhabi is right but we need to give her time to come to decide for herself so I suggest we let her be until she is ready but tell me Kajal tell me how did she convince Sanjay to let her come here without accompanying her." " Ohh that sorry I forgot to tell you...I know Di would not lie to bhai that she is coming here and if she did then bhai would not have let her come so I got a friend in Mumbai to right a letter telling her that her maamaji is on his death bed and that he was calling her name all the time. You know just like the letter we wrote regarding Baa and Di promised bhai that she will wear burka and that no one will know it's her. I gave her all the details of my friend but she did not go there rather stayed at a hotel and then came here from there."

" Wow bhabi has changed and am happy for her...anyway I meant to tell all that happened with the kid and am not suspicious of that woman as well." He went on to explain all that happened with his findings and before they hang up they discussed thier new plan of him meeting his bhabi.

Gopi lay in bed with a photo of her Ahemji like she has done for the past five. She still could not believe that he life would be spent without him to share it.Tears were rolling down her cheeks " Ahemji! why did you leave me, why Ahemji...do you not love me any more... our lives were going great and you left me in such a state without asking my permission. I MISS YOU AHEMJI, my life has been so incomplete without you...see Angad is so much like you but the fatherly void in his life I cannot fill and I can't allow anyone else to touch me like you did Ahemji as am yours so why did you leave me." She cried pressing her mouth on the pillow so as not to wake up her son and after her tears died away with her sobs she then went into thinking mood as to what Kajal told her " yes she is right. I cannot change the past but can definite do something for my son and what if something happens to then who will take care of him...Bhai and bhabi will do a good job but Angad deserve to know his dad's family but how...kanaji please give me strength to face my family and give Angad his rightful family where love for him will be in abundance and to also bring back Rashiben and devarji back together. I cannot let Rashiben suffer for my mistakes...Ahemji where ever you are please be with me and give me your support in fulfilling my wishes."

Next day breakfast was quiet and when Angad went up to help his new nanny to unpack, Gopi seize the opportunity to speak to Kajal. " Am going to do this but I do not want to get you involved...don't argue with me...you are right I need to take control of my life and therefore have decided to not to tell Sanjay bhai or bhabi anything yet...so you concentrate on the work that bhai handed to you and I will find a way to sort something out... let me guess nothing is wrong with Baa and that was just an excuse to get me here, right...anyway it does not matter now that I have to face them" She got up and went to her room leaving a stun looking Kajal who was wondering what to do now and how is their plan to work now that Di want to do it all alone.

After spending the night chatting with Kajal,Jigar was determined to get some information on Raja and his family so he went to the place where he saw Radha and those kids but did not find them there. "Please God help me today...I need a closure on bhai...my family needs to know the truth and get the happiness they so deserve in so many years." He prayed and hope Kajal was able to persuade her bhabi. As he was heading back to his car he saw them on the other side of the road with their bowls and asking for alms when cars stopped. He saw one man beating..."Radha!" he rushed to her aid and the man was saying that she stole something from his store. Jigar paid the man and took the children from there and bought them food and other necessities and took them to a place they will be taken care of and was leaving when " uncleji thank you." One of the children said and hug him leaving him so emotional that he decide to let them be for now before he get so attached.

On his way to meet Kajal at the usual place, he was bombarded with so many emotions that he did not know whether to laugh or cry, to feel relieve or grieve but one thing he was sure of was that his family will not be the same any more.

" Jigarji are you okay...what happened to you... did you meet the family...Jigarji!" He was so lost that he fail to notice his guest and when he looked at Kajal, his eyes was full of emotions which she too did not understand and was staring at him confused and waited for him to speak.

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As he was leaving "Uncleji!" he turned round to see Radha as he was about to enter his car. He came down to her level and wipe away the tears smearing her face. " Beta why are you crying?" "Uncle woh..woh... they are not my parents." Jigar felt slapped with this news but controlled himself and encourage her to talk. " Wow auntyji paid me money for food for my siblings and said I have to pretend to be their daughter and leave my siblings here. Uncleji are you okay...that day when you met us and said Ramji is your bhai, Raniji told me to leave my family here and go with them far away but I refused...I came there many times and saw you but did not have the courage to come close to you and tell the truth...we have been going on as a family for six months and to stop people taking my brother and sister that's why we said we are family...Everything changed that day because auntyji looked scared and said if I meet you she will make sure that they take away my siblings...am sorry uncleji...my mum died one year ago looking after us and doing what am doing now...we do not know our father because my mum said he was evil and since she died I look after my brother and sisters...yes uncleji we are ophans and on the streets some people take advantage of our situation and that's why we stayed as family with her...I do not know the man but one day she took me to her place and told me that he is her husband, Ram and that time he was not well and she was begging to get medicine for him...after a month he was fine and started to work with us... Uncleji I do not know the couple but there is gossip that the man is not her husband but I do not know...am telling you the truth." Jigar was too stunned to speak, if what this kid is saying is true then could that be "MY...AH..EM..BHAI". Oh God what is this you are testing my family.

Jigar left the children at the orphanage where his family give sponsor and told Radha they will be save there and will not be separated from her family and that he will visit them.

" Jigarji now you are scaring me...look who I brought with me." " Angad!!" He grab the little boy into his arms without a thought and cried and was kissing him all over " Ohh my ...Angad...Bhai...Kajal...I...oh God" Jigar was trying to form sentences but keep on choking on his word as if his tongue was cut off. " Jigarji please control yourself and you need to leave now as..." " what!!" "Jigarji wow..DI..." " DEVARJI! AAP!" " BHABI!!".

Well that's all for now as I need to sleep as I have work to go to. Hope you enjoy and leave your comments please
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Posted: 13 years ago
Well, well, well, goo update.
Jigar is surely bringing everything together with the help of Kajal. We now know where Ahem is and, just in time, Jigar met with Gopi.
Looking forward to the coming together of Ahem and Gopi, and him meeting their child.
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update im sure now the lady is anita hope next update will know it so gopi meet jigar but dont let gopi to take rashi with jigar please
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Posted: 13 years ago
wonderful episode pls pm me n update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
That was an amazing update kamjal, sorry my like button is not working now, but i really liked your update. Atlast Jigar meets his nephew and babhi and the most important information about his bhai. Eager to know what happend to Ahem to become Ram and husband to that lady. So if ahem met with an accident which made him lose his memory and this lady saved him and made him believe that he is her husband. Feel really sorry for Ahem and all the family. Please update soon dear. thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
A big thank you to all those who likes and commented on my update ans sorry for the delay in not updating. The reason was that I was so hooked with the many beautiful os,ss and ff being written or updated this past week and weekend. So without further a do here is the next part.



PART 32:

They both stared at each other shock and grieve radiating between them and neither was able to move and inch from their position. Angad was looking from the stranger that held him a while ago to his mum and as for Kajal she wished the floor would swallow her as she set the whole thing up and was going to tell Jigar about Gopi joining them but did not get chance as he came late and now " ohhh God save me from their wrath." she silently prayed but realised that both were not moving but each waiting for the other to speak and then silently pulled Angad faraway to table with the promise of an ice cream of his taste. From where she is sitting she could see the two stilll in their shocked positions and wished an earthquake will come and move them.

The silent emotions running between them was so tense that te questions on their lips are asked through their teary eyes but the arrival of a waiter for their orders brought them to reality. He went an pulled a seat for her and she took it smiling weakly and not looking at him.

" Bhabi! Devarji!" they both said once again. "You first" they again said " Five years bhabi five years it's being and did you not once miss your Devar. God know how much I have miss you bhabi. Am mad at not because you left without informing me because I know it was not your fault but because in all these years you did not think I can handle the truth and... and... bhabi you made me a stranger. Am mad because you did not think we have a relationship without bhai...I know it's because of him that we got our first relationship but bhabi I thought we have become friends and bhai behen relationship...know...Ah..em...bhai is no m...ore you cut me from your life too...why bhabi..why...I mean...I thought you trusted me and as much as I love and care for you...you too felt the same for me and our...no my family...Bhabi when we learnt of your death, the whole family was shattered and has not recovered...we felt double blow when we fou..nd about bhai but bhabi when I learnt that you are alive...I was ecstatic and elated and thought how you could have helped ou..r...am sorry...my family to see through all the pain." Jigar could not hold back the pain that Gopi did not trust him enough to help her through her dilemma and in process help their family through the loss of bhai. He was angry for going through all the pain without his closest people to share with and he knows his bhabi was hurting for Ahem bhai but at least she had Angad with her to remember him by but him... and his family.

" Devarji am sorry and you are right even though I was married to Ahemji, you were the one who welcomed me whole heartedly and made me comfortable...you supported me first in my first stumble in MM... your humour kept my smiles alive when I was going through rough marriage...you..ammm...you were there for me at all times and when you lost the only brother you looked up to and grew up with I could not share your pain or grieve...De..vra...ji when I learnt of Ah...emji,then I was not fit to travel or help anyone as I...myself could not be consoled and when I was able...reality hit me... that...that I too am supposed to be...de...ad." She could not look at Jigar whilst explaining herself as she knew he was right but what happened she could not change but can definitely try and rectify it. " Devarji because of me two families have been hurt and separated...because of me Angad does not know his wonderful Kaka...be..cau...se of me you..you lost your...love. Am to blame in all this and many lives have and are suffering because of me Devarji...you see maami always said am manhoos..."

"Bhabi! please don't even go there and why are you blaming your self for destiny's ways...did you know bhai would go missing..no..or that your brother would take such drastic measures...no so please don't ever say such bhabi and at least think of Angad how will he feel when e hears his mum say such and bhabi as for loosing my love...don't worry everything is fine now that I have found you...wish..never mind. Am not as angry with you as I was before Kajal explained to me everything you have been through and bhabi you problem and loss is no less a grieve as our so please you need not worry your self...and..."

"Mamma! you are crying why?" both turned and saw Angad with a worry on his face and for the first time Jigar looked at him properly and saw his bhai's image in the little boys face and could not hold the tears streaming down his cheeks and gave a boy a huge smile when their eyes met and was about to say " am not troubling your mummy but I missed her and am yo...ur..."but stopped as he did not want to startle the boy and when Gopi wanted to tell Angad, he stopped her too.

All ordered their meals after calming the boy and telling him that his mum was just happy to be back in Rajkot. They ate in silent and called it a night with Jigar promising to keep in touch and to get to know Angad a lot more. Before leaving, he cornered Kajal and thanked her with hugs and kisses and asked her not to tell Gopi about them yet.

Jigar has forgotten when he last had a great sunday but today he is in his happiest mode as now he has a part of bh..ai..ohhh yes if only he could find that woman and her...hus..band...that is if he is her husbandd...anyway he was not ready to spoil his mood and buzz the door bell and was surprised to see his mum open the door. He smiled at her and took her blessings and as he proceeded inside he realised they have guests whom he did not know of or about but he greeted them and sat down.

His Kakiji as always is the one that gives him the heart attack new and said " Jigar this is the family we were telling you about and we all thought why waste a good oppotunity. The Sharma's came to visit there relatives here and decided to come and meet us and we agreed. By the way their daughter Preeti could not come with them but we promised them that we will go and see the family and you and her will officially meet and talk." He was so stunned to speak and only noded and excused himself before they fix his marriage date or him bursting about his found love.

Later in the evening, after dinner Hetal came to his room to give him milk and put water in his room but before leaving she turn to him and said " Jigar we only want your happiness and know that you will not be forced into it if you do not approve but let me assure that the girl is good and her family are very noble but if you have anyone in mind tell me before it's too late to turn back spoiling many lives...I hope you understand what am saying...this is a life long decision so think carefully...in a couple of weeks we might go and see Preeti...by the way her family approves of you...just think when your wife comes she will free your mum of doing your every need...and there are other needs which only a wife can fulfil...finally Jigar I know we had our disagreement regarding your divorce to Rashi but I love you and will always support you even though you did not confide in me as to you reasons for divorcing her...am telling you this because even though Rashi was your wife but I made her my daughter and it was not easy for me to let her go so just you know that I will still love any woman that comes to your life but the pain of separation will be too much for me to handle and that's why am giving you all the freedom to choose your bride so that in times of difficulties, you will not let her go but work at it...and Jigar your papa and I are not perfect and had our differences but we worked them out and fought together whatever life brings us and so did your Kaka and Kaki even with Kokila's tough exterior...so think about it and give us an answer." Jigar felt his mum's pain and understood her lecture and went and hugged her and kisses her head before wiping her tears and nodding his head in affirmation.

For weeks Jigar will go and visit Gopi and was now very comfortable with Angad. They do a lot together when he is there...in fact Angad only plays with him when he is around and has even asked him on many occasion to take him to school when he starts and he agreed with his bhabi's approval. On the other hand, Gopi too was busy trying to find her Maamaji and mostly Rashi but still fail but she did not give up but she could also sense a growing feeling between Jigar and Kajal but thought that they are working together to help her and Angad to get their family again so she brush that thought aside. " Devarji ahhh I just want to ask you whether you are free this weekend..." "Bhabi please try not to be formal with me and speak to me like before and stop acting strange around me..so tell me what you need." " Well am just cutting cake for Angad on his sixth b'day and am sure he would want you to be here." "Bhabi I've missed so many of his b'days so... so...bhabi...uhhh... I will celebrate his b'day this time as bhai would have done..." " No Devarji am not ready for..." " Until when bhabi... until when...this is the best opportunity for the family to meet you both..ple..." " No Devarji I can't do this...I cant face the family now...not now...I can't handle the pain that they will go through."

" May I suggest some thing." Both turned and looked at Kajal as to say butt out but still let her speak. "Di let Jigarji celebrate Angad's party and you can watch from a distance and can see how the family will react to his resemblance to Ahemjiju and then you can decide whether to come out or not." After she finished both agreed to her idea and proceeded to planning the party. Jigar too has decided to tell his family about the love of his life on that day as well but he has to tell his bhabi now since things seems to be working fine between them.

"Bhabi! Devarji" both laugh but Kajal excused herself to check on Angad as she knew Jigar wanted to tell her Di about them and she was scared and shy as well. " Okay this time you go first bhabi." " Well the thing is Devarji I was not happy when I heard of your divorce with Rashi...ben...I was not happy. Devarji Rashiben made a mistake and you punished her with divorce and not once thinking how that will affect the family...anyway I went behind your back and hired a detective to find her and we will ..."

" Bhabi please just stop covering for her and do you know who you want to bring back here... you are always concern about her happiness,needs, likes, wants everything but did she show you the same love, concern or even help you...Bhabi you have lived with her for all your life but wants to be blind at her deeds but not me and let me tell you my divorce with Rashi is not based on her one evil deed but...never mind you will not understand your sister...but bhabi in all these have you ever thought about my happiness, feelings or thoughts..no it's always Rashiben for you...bhabi the day you find out about your Rashiben even God won't be with you...and finally bhabi it's been more than three years since our divorce and I have moved on...am in love bhabi, am in love and intend of making her mine." With that he left cause Kajal was signalling him not to tell her and he did just that but now he vow to reveal Rashi's true colours to his bhabi before she finds her.

Well readers of saathiya enjoy


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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice going kamjal...waitin for Gopi to meet the rest of the Modi's and Ahem's return
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Posted: 13 years ago
I Like how the story is proceeding...

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