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. Why are the CV's brainless. Aham said it too many times he hates Gopi, Don't want to stay with her, but Koki she does what she thinks she can do. Bring them together.


Recollect that day, on 23rd august 2010, when Gopi severe ties with Aham just before Kinjal marriage.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PaIIcqaTCrg[/YOUTUBE]


Well Koki allows her to stay at home? my question is why? She is now a stranger. Koki allowed her to stay at home as a stranger, making it difficult for aham to survive. dunno what u all feel but main cause is Koki. She the one who made them married, when she knows her son doesn't stand illiterate people. What was the main reason for that.? Koki knows but we don't. Why can't the CV's just split them up so that they can breath fully. the relationship of Goham is just a pretense in front of everyone. Too annoyed with the show, especially with the current track.



Producers i think the show has to change either by softening the confusing Aham's heart to accept the way Gopi is. not the way she getting educated. We all know she perfect the way she is. There nothing wrong with her. Gopi don't need education.

There is a lot of ways this show can progress, but why are the CV's too dumb and dragging the whole epi and leaving in incomplete. This is the proper time where as the video above where Gopi stood up for herself, otherwise she wouldn't have.

Anyone agree with me, that koki is the cause? I can tell that Koki is the main cause due to she forced the relationship to build up between two people who are exact opposite.

How can it build?

a girl like Gopi who has low self esteem, courage, afraid of strangers,can't speak up, how can she be loved by a guy who is a major successful business man and has a spectacular talent.

Seems pointless i hope. Maybe perhaps i am wrong. There are no right and wrong answers, maybe i guess the show needs a major turning point in the relationship between them. There no life, justice, both can't live or breath properly and peacefully, hatred in aham eyes for her and aham's enmity against Gopi

Dunno exactly whats wrong with Gopi? whats she lack of which aham can see which we can't? Talent i bet? or perhaps aham way read and write. I don't think so. I think he ashamed to have a wife who has no goal, no self esteem, no future planning of what to do? who always clueless, well thats what i think?

So many scenes we have had. Good and bad. Both gave us hope, that there will be a turning point that min, but doesn't happen? Again the Producers dragged it and left it incomplete.

So far we have had like dandiya scene, cricket match (twice), boiler/cooker incident, snake incident, laptop incident, lets not forget that Kinjal/umang fake pregnancy incident and running away, Rain scene, bedroom scene(14th June) the scene after dandiya the aarti scene where aham looked at her angry taking the aarti away from her,gopi asking money, gifting gifts to parag and koki, waving at Gopi, also Cow Dung in car incident.

We had many more which gave us hope, do u all agree. we need more of them.Why are we seeing this.

Lets go back to breaking vows on 23rd august..

Yeh the video above,

Gopi breaks marriage, she is a stranger, After kinjal got married she still a stranger. She shouldn't be staying in Modi Bhavan that long now.She should be living seperate. She broke her vows. No life between them. But what happens in the end, everyone forgets it except Aham and left it incomplete

Stupid.

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Now Education Track? Do we need this.. Why bring in this track. What stupidity the producers done to bring it in. What going to happen, evil will win against good. Rashi winning Gopi ending up crying. God..

Same going to happen in school Children making fun of her, gopi crying thats it...

Xmas tree take that for example.

In the end i believe will happen, Gopi ending up cryin like as usual and going to give up education..

We all want aham to educate her. Turns out false. She goes school. Too boring.

What the story behing this saathiya saath nibhana, i don't get it.. There are so many things left incomplete, CVs jumping from one track to another, take the bhoot track, sandooq track, etc etc

Take the bhoot track why can we forget this

Who wanted to see this bhoot and the track..I certainly didn't. Perhap u all didn't

can't believe wasted to much time watching that track which ending up same as always rashi not caught and not exposed to everyone in MOdi bhavan

Sick and tired now

Sandooq track?? nani gave the sandooq to rashi which has the idol in god in it, she wasnt inot it, but still nani gave it, she needed more protection

Gopi didn't get it due to the there was no relationship between her and aham. She hasn't even fulfilled a wife duty properly.Nani never gave it to Gopi due to there was no proper relationship between her and aham

Although we hope for a new girl to come and destroy rashi and bring her into place. Rashi in my eyes is a devil no a queen or something.How can she do this to her sister. She read the letter wrong and got her married to Aham and ruined her life. I stil remember Gopi Refusing to marry him as he loved Anita but ended marrying him cause of rashi..


I hope one day Rashi is caught, jigar knowing her reality Gohhem reuniting and loving together as a married couple. Will that happen maybe or maybe not.

But i think track abhi baaki hai mere dost, well i hope my fanfic turns out with all the info above in more detail, there no right and wrong answers. Its just a show, its a fake show which doesn't exist in reality, except the way aham treats Gopi..

Ah well i think i should stop and start my fanfic now

lets see what u all say about this,,

i will start from where Gopi breaking marriage vows and then take it smothly and properly in my way. Rewind the serial..

Heres my Take for 11 months.. that we wasted.. for nothing. We still at the same plot. Slow story, losing and gaining TRPs... Catch me after wards with my 1st installment just after a while.



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Part 1


Gopi breaks the marriage. She takes all the vows back leaving Aham and everyone shocked. Behind everyone was Rashi smirking. She was happy that she was no to rule the Modi House finally but it wasn't going to happen. God had something stored for her.


Aham goes up in a fit of rage, doesn't know what to do. Gopi leaves the house, the same night after Kinjal got married to dhawal.


Gopi left the house as kinjal has got married to the person she never wanted. She had to leave, leave for her Aehem ji and she remembered the vows she broke as aham never wanted to accept her as his wife because she was an unpar, gavar. What could she do? Her happiness lies in this as well as everyone else. It was 12am everyone had gone to sleep and she was walking down in the middle of the road in the heavy rain, unknowingly she forgot that where she was going to go. She had no one in this world except from her mahma and mahmi and Dhawal bhai. Her mahmi refused to let her in the house, her mahma kept on watching her and was helpless. She was crying, asking kanha ji why he did this to her? What life did he give her. All she got is unhappiness, sadness and that's it. kyun kanha ji kyun, kya main itni burhi(bad) hoon, kya main insaan nahi hoon

The rain was pouring really heavily, the cars horning loudly telling her move at aside, but Gopi never heard anything. The cars drove really fast but thankfully Gopi got saved. It was 2pm, the rain gone heavier and the thunder started to happen. Gopi started to stride, with a black bag in her hand, and knew nothing about Rajkot. Gopi was likely to vomit as she hadn't ate since morning. She was all in pain and was lonely. She barely never told anyone her feelings and never had a mother's love.

Gopi: kyun kanaji, kyun, pehle aap nai mujse merai ma bab to laye gaye aur aj Aehemji aur sasural ko. Why did I have to see this, why am I repenting all this, kya maine koi bap kiya pechle janam mein is liye aj mein os ki saza laye rahi ho.

Gopi was all in pain but suddenly a car hit her and she met with a accident. The car stopped. A guy came out from the car and went to Gopi body in a hurry to see if she was alive. Gopi was unconscious, bleeding heavily from her head, all injured. The guy took her to the hospital and no doctor was taking her as they said the police was to get included. They called the police and the police came and saw her in a terrible state. She wasn't breathing, blood coming out continuously, heart was beating. She was still alive.

The doctors took her to the ICU while the police took information of the guy who brought her. The guy was no other that Kinshuk Mahajan, the famous businessman in Rajkot after the Modi's. Kinshuk was a tough guy, a guy who has been finding his sister for the past 4 years. His sister was no other than Gopi, Gopi Modi, the girl in the ICU. Kinshuk felt pain in his heart but didn't know why.

On the other hand the doctors came out and wanted to talk to Mr Mahajan.

Doctor: the patient is very critical, she has lost a lot of blood, she needs o positive. Unfortunately we have ran out of blood but don't know where to get it so can we ask u for permission if we can publish this on newspapers and on television, but don't worry we won't show the patients face.

Kinshuk: don't worry doctor, publish it, as I don't know this girl, and found her in the middle of the road due to the accident, you have my permission to announce it, but will she be safe?

Doctor: Don't worry Mr Mahajan , we will try our best to save her, right now we have put her in a lot of medication and put her unconscious.

The doctor goes, and reports to the police and says to them can you please post this on television and newspaper as a patient needs o positive blood and needs someone with that blood to come in and give some to the patient as she is very critical and might not be saved.

Back to the Modi house, everyone was tensed as where would have Gopi went, went without informing everyone and looked at Aehem angrily as he had broke all the ties with her. Aehem was feeling pain inside him and something was telling him that Gopi is hurt and badly needed him. Aehem had tears and Kokila looks at him and says

Koki: dikra now why are you crying, now gopi has left due to what u wanted, Isn't that enough.

Someone was at the door, a newspaperman and gives them the newspaper and says: put the television on Modi maam as some serious incident has happened last night at 2pm and the police and the doctors are asking something from everyone.

The newspaper man goes and the modi house puts the t.v on and the news reporter was saying.

'Welcome to the Star news, myself neelam and will be telling you the incident happened last night. Last night about 12 ' 2pm a girl was walking in the middle of the rood and got knocked down by the car and now she is in the hospital in a critical condition and is badly needed blood o positive. Anyone who has the blood o positive , can u quickly come and give the blood to the patient who is fighting life and death. She can die anytime.

The doctor comes and say: aap sab ki meherbaani ho gi agar aap apna khoon is patient ko day kyunki oski jaan kisi bhi halat mein ja sakti hai, jo insan is ko lekar yahan ponch chadiya hai, vo khud nahi janta os ko. Aur aap sab kanhaji say prathna ki jiyay kai vo bach jay. Shukriya.

Myself Neelam and will come back soon after the break.

Gopi was behoosh and was remembering everything what happened to her after kinjal marriage, and what Aehem did to her. Aehem had slapped her due to breaking the marriage to her cousin Dhawal who was a greedy man. Everyone was upset due to what Gopi did.

Everything was echoing in her head but suddenly Gopi life has gone critical again, the nurse ran to the doctor and told him that the patients halat has gone bad and the doctor came and gave her injection and made her go to sleep.


The doctor came out and saw Kinshuk waiting outside and kinshuk said: what happened to her? Is she alright? Did anyone gave her blood yet?

Doctor: some many questions at one go? Ok , the patient halat went bad so I gave her injection, no-one has gave her blood yet and I made her go to sleep put giving her an injection

Kinshuk sat down and waited for the Police to come.

On the other hand, Aehem was feeling lonely, but why he thought so. He hated that gavar so much that he couldn't face her and stand her a minute. He went to his room and lied down on his bed. Koki: bechari kis halat mein ja rahi ho gaye, kanaji us ko buchai. What blood does she need again?

Hetal: o positive koki o positive, pur ab hum Gopi se kahan dhoonday, where would have she been. What if that patient is her.

Everyone was feeling lonely after Gopi has left, but then suddenly Rashi has said

Rashi: mummyji, shall I say something?

Hetal: ha bolo?

Rashi: mummyji I am o positive shall I go and donate the blood to that patient. Bechari she is fighting her life and can die anytime, if I donate the blood and save her will Kanhaji be happy?

Chirag: why didn't you tell us before, go quickly to the City Hospital and donate her blood and do let us know how she is

Rashi : jee

Rashi is all set to leave and left the house. She went to the driver and told him to take her to the city hospital. They went to the hospital and rashi told the driver to go back home and she will call him when she wants to come.

Rashi goes to the reception and says : last night some accident had happened, and a patient needs blood o-positive, I am here to give blood to the patient.

The Police heard this and went up to her : ma'am come this way and we show you the way to the ICU.

Rashi follows the way and reaches the ICU and the Doctor comes and says : thank you for coming along and giving the blood to the patient come inside with me

Rashi goes in and goes beside the body and couldn't recognize who it was at first as gopi face was covered in bandage and then suddenly she recognizes her by the mungalsutra and says: Gopi, what happened to you? .. she burst out crying. The doctor says do you know the patient and how?

Rashi: she is my cousin, my dad's sisters daughter. She is a wonderful sister, bechari she never had any love since her parents passed away and I was the only on who helped her since childhood.

Rashi then lies beside her and gives her blood and she goes outside and talks to the Police and notices a man with Black suit on and was fit. She goes across to him and says: are u th one who saved my sister and brought her here?

Kinshuk replys: yes I brought her here, I am kinshuk Mahajan, naam to suna hi hoga, aur tum Modi khandan sai hogi

Rashi: haha yeh I am from modi family, am jigars wife. Thank you for saving my sisters life.

After a while Rashi phones home and says : kakiji the patient is still critical, I have gave her blood, and the doctor told me to stay until she might need more

Koki: theek hai, if you need anything let me know.

Kinshuk turns around and says: why didn't you tell them its ur cousin who is critical, why did u lie?

Rashi : I had to lie because , my sister was the older daughter in law in that house ans she left the house because her husband didn't love her as she wasn't educated and she was a gavar, I used to get hurt seeing him shouting and abusing her, but then gopi broke all the vows with him so that he can change and be politer to her but nahi it got worse, then after kinjal his sisters marriage, he told Gopi to leave as per the vows she took and she left. Now this what happened. Kinshuk I will tell you the whole story another time, because I trust you. But can u please do me a favour, I am going to leave and go back home but can u take Gopi and let her stay at your house whenever she gets discharged. I will come to meet her tomorrow chup chup ke without telling anyone in the house its Gopi if I do then Aehem ji will not leave me

Kinshuk: don't worry Rashi, I will take care of her until everything is better between Aehem and her don't u worry go back home and ill take care of everything.

The doctor comes out while rashi had left. The doctor confirms that the patient is out of the danger and she needs completely rest. She will have to stay here for 15-20 days or maybe more.

It was 12pm everyone in the modi house was extremely upset, Koki, Hetal, Mani and Kamla were in the Kitchen while Chirag Jigar and Aehem were away to office. Aehem was feeling lonely, and thought : " that gavar is so scared of me, just because I told her to leave she went and now shes away am so lonely and was feeling bechain.

Rashi comes home and goes and sit beside Baa and Parag and tells them the patient is fine out of danger, but she is badly wounded. Baa and parag prayed for her and rashi goes to the Kitchen and sees Hetal and Koki cooking and tells them to leave it and she will do it. They move aside and sit down while Rashi had cooked everything. The men were about to come back home and koki asks how is the girl now

Rashi: she is better now, completely weak, badly injured and out of danger. And the doctor even told her to come back again in two or three days.


Although Rashi was trying to act as if she was really hurt to see Gopi, but infact she was. She was starting to realize her mistakes. But was it too late.. Why??


Thats all for today..


This part is originally from my old fanfic - tanhayee dard dil ka rishta... so will be using the 1st chapter from my old fanfic then continue with my new concept

Enjoy




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Prologue

Part 1 - Page 1

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hey read your last ff, it was awesome :)
looking forward to ff, the first chapter is amazing !
continue soon :)
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Love your new ff! Looking forward to the next update 😃
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wowww siiss u can write loll
i could neva write this much lmao
took me tym to read but loved reading it thankss 4 pm bless ya
love ya
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your 1 chapter is very nice u had taken Kinshuk is perfect to situation he is just a super star u rock i cant wait for next part plz plz plz plz plz plz
update soon
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Originally posted by: nilli_r

hey read your last ff, it was awesome :)

looking forward to ff, the first chapter is amazing !
continue soon :)


thanks Nilli

Originally posted by: SNS_fan101

Love your new ff! Looking forward to the next update 😃



thanks Mandy


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Originally posted by: Minnie.

wowww siiss u can write loll

i could neva write this much lmao
took me tym to read but loved reading it thankss 4 pm bless ya
love ya

thanks minnie😃
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Ayeshaaa...this is so lovely..i love Kinshuk Mahajan...

pls pls update it sooon...

love u

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