FF: SAATHIYA [part 15 updated] - Page 7

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Posted: 14 years ago
#61
Fantastic part realy loved it!😃
Posted: 14 years ago
#62
that was a lovely update!!
tahnks aavni ( guess this is ur name :P)

read the whole FF in 1 go!!

love rashi's change for good..
ahem :gopi i want a daughter likhe khushi

:P

wow!!

plzz do cont soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
#63
Wow! That was an amazing update!
He will soon come to terms with this war of inner words. Update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64

thats nice, ahem losing control infornt of gopi, thats very good

i like inner voices of ahem a lot

good pls update soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
#65

loved it😛 ... love the inner voices 😉...

pls continue ... looking forward to see how Aham confronts his true feelings😉 ...

btw cannot blame u for the late update ... u do have a solid reason 😆...

but dr pls continue as SNS FFs are like drugs the more u read the more u want ... i / we are addicted i guess ... so keep it coming ...




- - badra

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Posted: 14 years ago
#66
wow, a very nice update.
great one.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67

PART 10

Its after dinner and Ahem is working on his laptop, just then Gopi walks out of the bathroom towel drying her hair and in a baby pink night saree. Ahem looks up at her and is dazzled by her beauty. He doesn't even realise that he is now standing and staring at Gopi with mouth wide open. Gopi who I shy but also confused by Ahem's reaction clears her throat "is there something you want Ahemji?"

Ahem still dazzled: Yes…..I want you

Gopi's eyes wide open: …I didn't understand

Ahem coming back to planet earth: uhhhmmm…. Nothing… why the need to shower at this hour, I mean you usually don't.

Gopi: its just that im really tired and its really hot too. Do you want anything?

Ahem IV1 *yes I want you so freaking bad!! I wish I could just eat you right now!!* IV2 *so who exactly is stopping you??* IV1 *you are right. I have all rights over her, afterall she is my wife and I can do whatever I want with her. I can………*

Gopi: ahemji are you okay? Do you want me to get you something?

Ahem laughs a bit and tells her not to worry leaving Gopi more worried. Ahem resumes working on his laptop while Gopi is doing tidying up her closet. Ahem is watching her work and is having a very hard time controlling his inner voices. They seem to team up against him and are pressurising him into Gopi. He looks at gopi thinking that she looks the same as she always does but what is it today that he just cant stop being attracted to her this bad. Its an hour past and Gopi is putting her bedding on the floor preparing to sleep. Ahem still on the laptop staring at her without her knowing. Ahem decides to sleep too as he cant resist much longer. Both are laying on the beds thinking about eachother. Gopi thinking about ahem's words about having a daughter like khushi while ahem is turning sides trying to stop his dirty mind from thinking about Gopi. Another hour has passed and they both are still laying there thinking just then ahem gets up like a ninja while gopi hearing the sudden noise gets on her toes too. Ahem walks up to her and without a second delay kisses Gopi so deeply and passionately. Gopi not being able to resist gives in. after a good session of passionate kissing, they let go to get some air. Ahem stares at Gopi while Gopi is all pink and is staring at her feet not daring to look up.

Ahem: Gopi, I love you!

Gopi blushing even more, fully pink looks up finally and says : I love you too!

Ahem takes her to the bed and they both spend the night loving each other.

Its morning and ahem wakes up to the sound of clinging bangles. He opens his eyes to see Gopi getting dressed. He remembers last night and sits up looking at her.

Gopi: ahemji, uhhh…are you ok?

Ahem giving her the 'doesn't she know what happened last night' look and about to reply when he realises something……he realises that he is still clothed! He was dreaming! He was dreaming about making love to Gopi last night! He just sat there not being able to come to terms with how bad his mind is playing up with him. Gopi is giving him the concerned look whereas Ahem is just frustrated.

Gopi: ahemji…

Ahem gets up in full blown temper and yells: what ahemji?!! What is your problem? Cant you just stay away from me? Cant you stop behaving so innocent and nave? Ever since you've entered my life, you have only made it hard for me. Don't you get it that I don't love you. cant you just back away from me. You've spoilt my life and today you are messing with my mind. I cant think straight, logical and practical with you around. Just get out of my life. Get out of my mind. Get out of my system! I don't want you near me, you hear that Gopi, I don't want you near me! With those harsh words ahem walked out of the room leaving Gopi thunder struck and crying mercilessly into bits. Ahem storms out of the room only to find that kokila, hetal, jigar and rashi are standing out the door dumb struck. Ahem not caring about anyone speeds out of the house. Gopi falls to the floor and is crying so hard. Rashi runs to her side and hugs her little sister trying hard to hold her together. Hetal also comes to her side and is trying to console Gopi. Jigar is standing by their side and looking helplessly at gopi whereas Kokila is unmoved and is staring at her gopi vau scattered on the floor like a broken glass. She just stands there while rashi and hetal are consoling her. Rashi is so angry and Jigar and see straight through her that she is not at all going to leave Ahem without giving him her peace of mind. They finally manage to get gopi off the floor and onto the bed. Gopi stopped crying and now she looks as if she is in coma, she isn't reacting and is just resting her head on rashi while rashi is still hugging her. Hetal gets up to get her water but gopi refuses. Hetal decides to leave gopi alone for a while so she and jigar walk out of the room leaving rashi with her and kokila still unmoved outside the door. Kokila is looking at Gopi's lifeless and broken self and she doesn't know what to even say. She is thankful that rashi is there with her because kokila doesn't know what she is supposed to do. She leaves from there and into hetal's room where hetal is sitting on the bed worried.

Kokila: mota bhabhi, I cant see Gopi like this. I thought that Gopi's good nature and honestly will finally make a place in Ahem's heart and life but I was wrong. He didn't see any of this. He doesn't want my Gopi vau.

Hetal: kokila so what have you thought? We cant let gopi to live like this. Broken. Hurt. Unhappy. You are her mother kokila and she needs you right now. What are you going to do?

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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
Rani...I've just read your part 9 it was excellent, jealousy is coming in and realisation that she is his wife and he should be thinking of starting a family.

I like it...well done👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
Just read part 10, yes your Aham is in love and that scene where he shouts abuse at her and runs out he was doing that before the education track came, when she looked beautiful after her makeover, brought him tea and he wanted to hurt her so she would stay away and stop enticing him...you are doing similarly except with your story you are telling us what Aham is thinking which is great...thanks for that.

I also want in the serial to see her coming out of the bathroom dressed but her hair still wet she looks really nice like that, and I want Aham to be in the room, awake to see her.

So what is Kokila thinking, doesn't want Gopi hurt possibly she is thinking to marry her off to someone else? Aham is really not going to like that, it's definitely going to make him act and accept her as his wife.

Great Story, please continue...it's good...👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70
very nice dear...
keep it up...👏

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