FF:First Love~LAST PART~ page 81 12/9/11 - Page 44

Originally posted by: JakeR

So now i know!!! Its Dhawal and Shruti 🤣 ... And Rashi's brother is the one with revenge on his mind? *wonders*

😒 so Rashi is bad again... Sigh! You should just pair up J with R...lol... They are match made in heaven...lol



did you ask my gf to run? ROFL...dont worry.. She currenttly running as far as she could...from one end of the globe to another. I got a time chart with me now. To keep track of her times..see your wish is granted 😭

Originally posted by: rashi.krishna

nice update.. rashi is eww... she never change even in an ff...

Originally posted by: kaka.lg

thanks so much for letting me know ur update...ur story is very interesting since the beginning. Awesome Shilpa ben

Originally posted by: taniks

Brillant , I love how magical u make every little interaction between gohem even a basic phone is filled with so much emotion . you write so beautifully ,you have knack of capturing your readers undivided attention and drawing them into this romantic spell that you have created. Pls update asap , thank you

can ya plz tell ur approx tym to updt??

Originally posted by: vaishali667

i really loved part

Thank you Vaishali, glad you enjoyed the update.

Originally posted by: tina_1234

love ur story it just gets bettr bettr

Thank you Tina, update coming up soon.

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan

great update...

Thank you so much!

Originally posted by: shaina.sharma

wow silpa ben

i feel i am watching sns season-2

god so many pbms and so many confusions.

hope everything is sort out before the gohem are left alone at home.

Thank you Shaina.

SNS season two, that sounds good, let write the story ourselves, the way we want to, without all the kalakari's.

Let's see if the all the problems are solved by the time they are alone.

Originally posted by: queenyuks

I saw the update last night but pretty much passed out before I could read it.

I loved this part. See? I tolf you I kne there was a storm brewing.

Atleast in your fic Gopi believes Jogar and knows Raashi is at fault. I love this update juxtapposed to friday's update.

Im witing for the party and the engagement. And of course, the alone time that lies ahead

Yuks

Thank you so much Yuks.

Yes you did tell me the storm was brewing, and everything will have to be put right soon.
Party scene coming up, hope you like it.

Originally posted by: swasthi

There was so much to deal with and discuss with his problem. Now the stage is nearly set.

What worries me is this one line of yours: They knew that as long as they were together nothing could hurt them. This is bothering me. I sense that there may be a possible moment of loss and despair between them.

The story is moving at a good pace and looking forward to the party and will look out for the potential suspect.

Excellent write up Shilpa.

Thank you so much Swasthi.
Well all the players are now exposed, lets see how Ahem deals with them.
I truly believe that as long as they are together nothing could hurt them, lets see what twists fate throws at them and how they deal with it.
Party scene coming up, and yes the last piece of puzzle is revealed, now its up to Ahem to deal with it as he wants to.
Thank you so much for the comments and the feedback.

Originally posted by: Simz786

Cant Wait To See What Happens

Thank you Simz. Glad you liked the update.

Originally posted by: sinak

Loved the update. Hope Sonal listens to Gopi.

Thank you so much.
Sonal will sort everything out once she hears what Gopi has to say.

Originally posted by: Bloem123

Lovely Update very nice

Thank you so much, glad you enjoyed the update.

Originally posted by: soni4eva

awsum update luvd it so much

fanx 4 da pm plzz cont soon x

Thank you so much, glad you liked the update.

Originally posted by: angelirebelli

Res.

**Edit

Another great update S.. **superlikes**

Love the dynamics of Gopi-Ahems relationship.. Love the bond the siblings share and the ease that has settled in..👍🏼

Despite the storm brewing, I am hoping the party will be eventful, where not all but something will be revealed and things become clearer..and yes being home alone for two whole days definitely sounds promising..

Yeh dil mangey more.. looking forward to the next installment..

P.S. - Cant help but think that these grudges/issues go way back...

Thank you so very much Angeli!
I have no words show my appreciations for your comments, encouragements and motivation.
I love this Gopi-Ahem myself, little different from the actual SNS characters.
I do believe you will enjoy the next update, despite the brewing storm.
A blast from the past, did you say? Let's see who drops in on the party, and see what Gohem is upto.
I think you better find our publisher soon.