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Rafeal

@Rafeal.

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#411

So now i know!!! Its Dhawal and Shruti 🤣 ... And Rashi's brother is the one with revenge on his mind? *wonders*

😒 so Rashi is bad again... Sigh! You should just pair up J with R...lol... They are match made in heaven...lol

did you ask my gf to run? ROFL...dont worry.. She currenttly running as far as she could...from one end of the globe to another. I got a time chart with me now. To keep track of her times..see your wish is granted 😭

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Queen.Bee

@Queen.Bee

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#412

nice update.. rashi is eww... she never change even in an ff...

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kavya

@Kavya.S

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#413

wonderful update...nice to see that ahem's and gopi's relationship is very strong in ur ff...loved the update...waiting for the next one...

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641345

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#414

thanks so much for letting me know ur update...ur story is very interesting since the beginning. Awesome Shilpa ben

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ANJ4

@ANJ4

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#415

Great update ... ahem and gop,i love thier interaction with one another... so sweet.

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taniks

@taniks

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#416

Brillant , I love how magical u make every little interaction between gohem even a basic phone is filled with so much emotion . you write so beautifully ,you have knack of capturing your readers undivided attention and drawing them into this romantic spell that you have created. Pls update asap , thank you

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tina_1234

@tina_1234

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#417

love ur story it just gets bettr bettr

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shaina

@shaina.sharma

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#418

wow silpa ben

i feel i am watching sns season-2

god so many pbms and so many confusions.

hope everything is sort out before the gohem are left alone at home.

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Yuks

@-Yuks-

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#419

I saw the update last night but pretty much passed out before I could read it.

I loved this part. See? I tolf you I kne there was a storm brewing.

Atleast in your fic Gopi believes Jogar and knows Raashi is at fault. I love this update juxtapposed to friday's update.

Im witing for the party and the engagement. And of course, the alone time that lies ahead

Yuks

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swasthi

@swasthi

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#420

There was so much to deal with and discuss with his problem. Now the stage is nearly set.

What worries me is this one line of yours:

They knew that as long as they were together nothing could hurt them. This is bothering me. I sense that there may be a possible moment of loss and despair between them.

The story is moving at a good pace and looking forward to the party and will look out for the potential suspect.

Excellent write up Shilpa.