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soni4eva

@soni4eva

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#451

awsum update luv it

cnt w8 2 read more

plzz cont soon x fanx 4 da pm 😊

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trishy13

@trishy13

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#452

wow that was very well written. You write like a real novel...very detailed and explicit!

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vaishali

@vaishali667

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#453

thank for amazing update

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kavya

@Kavya.S

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#454

wow that was wonderful...from the beginning of the update till the end it was fabulous...shilpa ben ur an amazing writer...the way how u have written ahem and gopi becoming one is just wonderful...
waiting for the next update...

-kavya

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savvi

@savvi

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#455

wish you a happy diwali and happy new year...

oh my god... i am speechless and its so heart warming i cant say... actually i read all the updates in the night , in the dark... and this one can u imagine my state of mind...😉 no worries i am married .😆

but really each and every word is mind blowing and so intimate, as if your words and story are just meant for ahem and gopi (couples like them)... i read like three times... very bad of me

thanks alot for your dhamaks...

already ready for another update

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641345

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#456

👍🏼thanks for the PM, shilpa ben...it's so mind blowing...😍👏

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_Precious_

@_Precious_

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#457

Woww what a great update. It was a breath holding description of Ahem-Gopi becoming one. Absolutely loved it. I want to read it again (feeling bad about me, but I am married)

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angelirebelli

@angelirebelli

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#458

Bravo S.. that was some update... even at the risk of sounding repetitive *superlikes* - (Don't think I should use that anymore..its kind of become the scheme of things) 👍🏼

So now we have all the cards on the table.. and the clock is ticking.. what next?? I hope they aren't planning something really vile...😒

Gohem front .. things are definitely rosy and I hope there isn't much trouble in paradise...

Definitely looking forward to the next installment...

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Rafeal

@Rafeal.

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#459

Awesome update...Just loved it. And the best part was..um..u know..what !!☺️

😲Dhawal and Anita? Rashi and Umang?😭... I want RaJa😆... and DhIlpa🤣...

"She looks ravishing"😲... Thats exactly what i always think of my kate😳... Extremely Ravishing😃... Oh she has a similar looking saree but in black. The first time i saw her in that😆... And wow.. I was dumbstruck !! Not like some ppl who cant even drape saree🤣

(not you ben😃)

@Ahem's arms still held her possessively as he buried his face against her neck Katie loves this😆... I must oblige !!

@Inexperienced as she was, her own body moved instinctively to his rhythm in a communication that was old as time and as new as an undiscovered star, until with an explosion of unimaginable pleasure the star burst into a million shining, scintillating fragments and she began the slow, weightless floating back to earth. wow !! Gurlzzz😛.. tell u something?, Some inexperienced girls are full of fantasies.😆... They imagine these things like they are experienced🤣...literally speaking !!

I wish you had paired Rashi with someone better.. feel pity for Anita too.. Nick is the typical hero here😃... he is awesome !!

Overall ben , this was a fantastic update⭐️... There i gave u 5😃