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shaina

@shaina.sharma

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#391

once again a fab update by u shilpa ben.

gohem romance was filled with passion and feelings and i loved the combination.

their potray of a well understanding couple is brilliant.

2 days of gohem being alone. waiting.

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aNsHu

@aNsHu_tEjPaL

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#392

ooohhh mmmyyy goooddd!!!!!!!!!!!! i think i just died...omg!!!!!!!!!!!! what a droolworthy update!!!!!!!! absolutely loved the part...loved loved how close they coming to each other...my fav was the kitchen scene...lolll it was just hilarious!!!!!!!

they're going to be alone for two days????????????????? yayyy!!!!! i am sooo doing happy dance!!!!!!!! can't wait for more close moments b/w the two...

amazing chemistry u have built up b/w the two...pls update the next one sooon...can hardly wait!!!!!!!!

amazing update!!!!!!👏

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Simra

@Simz786

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#393

Luved It, Update Soon 👍🏼

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swasthi

@swasthi

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#394

The pleasure is mine.

That was a marvellous update - Ahem's revenge is tactically played with his operative words being "I can't help it mom, her sweets are the best, what can I say?" and he finally told her how he feels. Now there is no stopping.

Will we get to know what Jigar's problem is as this is distracting her mind from him?

I am looking forward to their time alone.

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#395

Originally posted by: queenyuks
This was a lovely part.
Im so glad to see the closeness growing between Gopi and Ahem

But I know there is a storm brewing still on the horizon

See, I told you, you write out emotions so well. I love your writing

Waiting for more...

Yuks

Thank you Yuks.
I am so glad you enjoyed the part. Storms brewing, did I give myself away again? Lets see what comes up.
Update coming up.

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#396

Originally posted by: soni4eva
wondaful update luvd it
relii reliii cute n swt
luvd all da ahem n gopi scenes
eagerly w8in 4 da nxt update plzz cont soon x
fanx 4 da pm 😊

Thank you so much. I am glad you loved the update, thanks for the feedback.
You are welcome for the PM.

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#397

Originally posted by: sks21
that was wonderful...loved the gohem scenes...loved the wholething
waiting for next update...

Thank you so much, glad you liked the update.
Next part coming up soon.

Originally posted by: rsk16
Awesome update.really very nice .
love the romance b/w gopi n ahem .
too cute.
great job.

Thank you so much, glad you enjoyed the update.
More Gohem coming right up.

Originally posted by: ANJ4
Thanks for the PM ... Lovely update ... Love the kitchen scene , I went back and read that a couple of time... Again the kitchen scene was the best... Thanks again

Thank you so much Anju. I also loved the kitchen scene,😉 always wanted to write something like that, and my wish was fulfilled.

You are welcome for the PM.

Edited by sbp1971 - 13 years ago

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#398

Originally posted by: Eesha2
Shilpa thanks for the pm! I loved your update. I especially loved the last scene. So cute. You showed the love they have for each other and their comfort level amazingly. Wonderful update. Can't wait to read the next part when they are alone together! 😳

Thank you so much Eesha.

The last scene was special, and I promise to make their alone time special just for you.

You are welcome for the PM. Hope school is going well.

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#399

Originally posted by: taniks
Loved the update , nicely done especially the gohem interaction ,they are so much in love , ahem very passionate about his wife that is wot I loved the most about this chapter .thank you shilpa and swasthi

Thank you so much taniks.

And thank you also for mentioning Swasthi, she got me thru my little block.

I want to see Gohem just like this on screen, so I will keep dreaming.

Originally posted by: savvi
wonderful update... thanks for giving this fun filled and emotions filled update. Hope in real sns also they show gopi and ahem interactions of the day...

Thank you so much savvi. Glad you enjoyed the update.

I also hope SNS Gohem is just like this in the future. Lets keep out fingers crossed.

Originally posted by: kaka.lg
hmmm...so romantic and emotional...thanks Shilpa ben for this wonderful update. u are a talented writer.

Thank you so much kaka. Thanks also for taking the time to give me a feedback. I am glad you liked the update.

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#400

Originally posted by: angelirebelli
Res.

**Edit**

Bravo S..that was simply fabulous... well worth the wait I must say.. *superlikes*

Thank You Swasthi for helping S out.. this update is definitely dreamy and yet natural, sets high expectations for the two days..

Loved the bold Gopi but more than that *superlike* an open S, who not only took me on the challenge for mush but has come very long way now... An agents dream.. 😈 *standing ovation* ⭐️

Yeh dil definitely mangey more...and as always cant wait for the next installment !!

P.S. - One line I cant stop ROFLing over - "her sweets are the best".. pervy Ahem...🤣

Thank you *Supergirl* that is my new name for you also, although you will always remain my angel for all your encouragements and motivations.
This one required a bit of a help, and I had a wonderful friend like Swasthi to help me thru this one.
I granted you your request for the more mush, so watch out, I might ask something in return.😆
As my agent, that should give you enough to get us more money.
To him her sweets are the best, and you know it.😛

P.S. Thanks for the standing ovation, but as I said I had a wonderful helper.

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