FF:Ahams feelings for gopi LAST PART at pg 62

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Raunika

@rsk16

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#431

awesome ending.just love the way you wrote about the mischief of the kids .loved it .too good.do write more in future.

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hana_y

@hana_y

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Posted: 13 years ago

#432

THANK VERY NICE BEST OF LUCK FOR YOUR EXM .👍🏼👏

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swasthi

@swasthi

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#433

Bhavya you have done yourself well. You have brought an interesting story to a good end.

Looking forward to another story from you some time soon.

Good luck with your exams.

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Fatima

@cute7

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#434

Wow!!! Aww it is so cute kids. I Like it. I am sad you end the story. I hope you will write update in the future. I like your story. Good Luck for the Exams. 😛

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#435

Great Job Bhavya, finally caught up on all the last part. It was very good.
Good luck with your exams.👍🏼

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_Precious_

@_Precious_

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#436

Awesome update Bhavya. Can't imagine Ahem taking care of small babies and playing with children. GoHem parents of three kids! and Kokila has become soft with the arrival of grand children. Very well done! All the best for your exam!

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Mandy

@Mandy20

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#437

great ending!
overall an excellent FF!!

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vaishali

@vaishali667

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#438

hi superb ending it was fabulous one in dawal language it is bestem best i hope u will come up with next ff ss very soon till then enjoy our current track it very much interesting