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Posted: 13 years ago

I read both updates. I like it. Thank you for send me. That is nice of you. I can't wait for next update.

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Posted: 13 years ago
that was wonderful...hmm what is this urshi upto now???
want to find out if it is really jigar's baby...loved the update...
waiting for the next one
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Posted: 13 years ago
post soon😲 rashi got baby OMG
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Posted: 13 years ago
fantastic update! so many twists
continue soon
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great update...
but after all the drama created by urshi it is impossible to believe that shagun is jigar's daughter and both the mother daughter duo kept quiet about it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update... thanks for considering request... i thought the flashback will be about rashi since she revealed it's her baby but it's about kinjal... failed to see why??? anyway just my view... rashi maybe bad but not that much bad that kinjal is an angel compared to her.. atleast rashi is like that because of her upbringing by urmila.. eventhough rashi is behaving better than that kinjal...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Is that really Jigar's daughter? If so, he must know it. Eagerly waiting for the next update to know if it is another kalakari by UrShi. anyways, that was a nice and quick update. well done👏
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Posted: 13 years ago

first of all sorry for catching up late.

second of all..god how fast u write the updates.😲👏

third of all..i need to catch up the updates so i wil comment later

so for now i call it


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Posted: 13 years ago

PART 40.

"mummy, mummy, where are you, come soon..."

Rashi was shouting in her house like mad after coming from market...urmila was busy in kitchen to prepare lunch for jetu bhai who was about to come back from work to have lunch in the house...

"kya hua, what happenend dikra why are you angry, did any one said you anything, is the malthi ben told anything to you, or any one humiliated in the colony...i know dikra it has become a routine for the woman to humiliate us, even your papa also does not leave a single moment to humiliate us...dont take it in heart dikra.."

"mummy you told me to go to vrinda's house, but she too humilaiated me indirectly..she was my best friend in college, you know what she is married to an ordinary clerk and she is living in one bedroom house with her husband and inlaws but she had a dare to humiliate me today ...you know what mummy what she told i don't have self respect, if i get an opportunity i am ready to do anything..."

"arrey dikra why did you listened to all these things, you would have given her back properly..."

"mummy do you think i will listen to whatever she says,...i gave her properly. And made her to realize what is her aukaath infront of me, a middle class people are like this only.."

"than why are you sad dikra, "

"mummy woh kinjal ..i met her in market..and she how dare she ...and she sang the song which i sang for her on wedding day...i cant bear this anymore...mummy do something, so that i can go to Modi bhavan, i am married to jigarji legally, lets go there and ask their forgiveness, if they don't listen we wil lodge a complaint against Jigarji for harassement case and if we go along with police they will give me a place in modi bhavan since they die to do anything for Modi's reputation in the society.."

"haaan i thought this will happen ...the mother daughter cannot keep quite without troubling others ...they cant be happy seeing anyone happy...haan rashi go you are free to do anything, you have taken a good decision, go to police station and lodge a complaint against your husband..."

"Rashi ke papa, are you serious i know a father will always look for daughters safety...lets go rashi dikra now itself...i will bring my purse..lets go"

Urmila brought her purse to go to police station, along with Rashi and proceeded towards the door...

"stop you two..where are you going , police station...what will you lodge complaint for,,,,harassement case for dowry.. or which one..."

"wahi tho Rashi ke papa i am still not clear which complaint to lodge,...shall i accuse whole Modi's or only Jigar..."

"no no Urmila lodge a complaint against whole modi's so that they will allow your daughter in to Modis house"

"Haan mummy yeh teek rahega, that kagdi use to dance on my head, and that gawar gopi is pregnant itseems and she is having all the happiness of modi bahu, even let her suffer..."

"haan dikra the way they humiliated us was...i will not leave anyone in the house..."

"haan mummy from the time i came to know that gopi is pregnant , my heart is aching a lot...and i cant stop cursing her "

"yes dikra i got stomach ache , she got such a happiness in her life, if you would have been in Modi bhavan we would have done something about of it...lets not loose hope once you are back to MM, our first aim should be gopi and her happiness to be ruined"

"haan mummy..."

"arrey urmila why are you taking so much time to go to police station, go soon, and lodge a complaint and come back..."

"arrey Rashi ke papa ...you are not coming with us...if you come along with us we will get a support...we two ladies don't know anything about complaint and police station..."

"arrey Urmila, you and your daughter have so much intelligence to ruin the whole society and to even rule the country, than to go to police station is not a big deal for both of you..."

"Rashi ke papa, what are you saying even you are humiliating us...you just told us to lodge an complaint against Modis..."

"correct yourself Urmila, i gave you a suggestion thats it...but i forgot to tell you the consequence of complaining...first of all no one is going to believe you both since the whole society knows how you manipulated to marry jigar...and more over modis have a pakka evidence against you people did you forget about the video tape...instead of dreaming about of being in Modi bhavan you may face the reality of being in Jail...since the Modis may lodge a complaint against you both in cheating case..."

"maaro takurji, jail me and Rashi"

"haan that is the only place where you and your daughter will end up ..."

Urmila and Rashi will run to their room on hearing the term Jail...and will pray to god that he saved them today...

"arrey Rashi dikra there is no hope of going back to modis mahal "

"haan mummy do something right ...think of new kalaakari i cant sit in this house anymore think of kahan modi bhavan and here"

...

"gopi dikra how is your health and how are the babies..."

"kakiji i am fine, babies are fine..."

"mani dhobi dafore get the oil soon..."

"gopi bahu show your foot,, let me apply ...as in pregnancy it wil become tough to handle'

"no maaji i will apply"

"gopi bahu if your mother was there i would have agreed see kitna sujan aagaya hai..'

"dikra do you like to eat anything, before Aham comes back as he wants to take you for check up today as he has taken an appointment with the doctor"

"ji kakiji :"

"mani come with me i will send with you"

"mom you are here, how are you gopi is everything ok..."

"ji ahamji i am fine..."

"Aham i will send black tea with mani "

"gopiji how are you, how is your health, did my babies troubled you, hey babies your dad has come back...how are you both did your mother took good care of you, did you both had food...(Aham kisses her womb, and than plants a kiss on gopis cheeks)"

Mani will come to the room at a wrong time...and will turn her back towards door on seing Aham kissing gopis cheeks...

Gopi will see mani and suddenly pushes Aham from her who was ready to kiss gopis lips...

"Ahamji mani ben"

Aham will be in awkward situation...will walk away for bathroom to freshen up...leaving gopi smiling..gopi will turn towards mani ...

"mani ben get me the food..."

"gopi bhabhi aham bhai loves you a lot these days...i will go nani bhabhi is calling me down."

'Ahamji mani ben has gone"

"gopiji first you have your food, pass me the tea..."

After getting ready both GoHem will come down, for going for hospital...Kokila will get the detail report for aham on gopis pregnancy...

And both of them will leave for hospital for check up...

...

Hetal will be worried for Jigar as he is totally involved himself in office and when he is back..in the house the only reason he is happy to get his bateeja soon..other than that he does not behave the way he was before...he always tries to pretend to be happy infront of everyone...but she is understanding what jigar is going through in his life...

"mota bhabhi why are you sad, ...why are you worrying about of Jigar still he is fine , he has forgotten about of Rashi completely do not worry about of him be happy always..."

"woh kokila i am his mother, i know what he is going through...kokila i wanted to ask you for advice...woh joshna is there na...i am thinking of jigar and joshna's marriage"

"mota bhabhi, i know Joshna is a very good pair for Jigar, but jigar is married to Rashi and they both are not divorced..if you ask for Joshna to marry Jigar she will definitely agree as she is a motherless child and you and mota bhai has looked after her needs after her parents death she repects the Modi's...but i am doubtful of Jigar whether he will agree for marriage or not first of all is it right to think of marriage of jigar at this time..."

"see kokila the Jigar and Rashis marriage was one big mistake in my life, i would have listened to you when you warned me not to agree for their marriage that day but they fooled me and made my son's life hell in my own hands...as far as Rashi as jigar's wife, i will never let her inside this house once more in life...kokila if you support me for joshna's marriage with jigar, my son's life is going to be filled with happiness:"

"mota bhabhi your selection of Joshna as your bahu is perfect choice...i am with you in this"

Jigar will come from the office and will be sitting in the hall along with chirag and parag...

Hetal will raise the topic of marriage of Jigar...

"woh jigar dikra still how many days you will be like this , i cant see you like this anymore...why don't you forget your past and start a new life"

"maa don't worry about of me, i am really fine... i am really happy maa"

"dekhiye jigar ke papa, i am his mother i can understand whats pain my son is going through..."

"maa what you want me to do..."

"jigar you have to give a promise , that whatever i will say you will do it "

"mom its a promise i can do anything to keep my mother happy"

"baa, jigar ke papa, i and kokila have decided for the marriage of jigar with joshna..."

"maa what are you saying , my marriage with joshna , i am already married why will Joshna agree to marry me..."

"stop it dikra that girl cheated you in the name of marriage , as far as i know Joshna will definitely say yes to my proposal..."

"Hetal marriage is not a game , it is a matter of two lifes, and Joshna is still studying, and i don't think we have to force her to marry Jigar..."

"jigar ke papa i will not force anyone for the marriage, i want my Jigar to be happy thats it..."

"but mom please listen"

"nahi dikra i am not listening anything, you have promised me ...and for my happiness cant you just fulfil my wish.."

Jigar will say yes to his mother as he cant see her pleading eyes filled with tears and walk away for his room...

Gopi and Aham will enter the house with listening jigar is saying yes to the marriage of him with Joshna...

Aham notices gopis worry on her face after listening to the news of marriage of jigar with her own ears...kokila notices that GoHem are back from hospital...and without making any delay Kokila takes gopi inside the room and asks her to rest...

Gopi will be looking at Aham, and will be about to ask about Jigars marriage...since it is not even a month after Rashi left for her mothers house...Aham too notices gopi is worried for her sister...and will have a questionable look on his face concerning about of gopi...

"Aham dikra, gopi bahu do not worry about or think of Rashi's fate we should think of Jigar's life first...gopi bahu tell me onething do you want Jigar to suffer whole his life because since Rashi is your sister..."

"nahi maaji i want happiness of devarji, but breaking the relationship of husband and wife is a sin , and marriages are made in heaven who are we to break here...may be Rashi ben took the wrong steps to get married to Devarji, but today she is married to Devarji and her life has been tied to Jigarji for seven births..."

"gopi bahu,i know what is marriage, the base of the marriage has started with a lie and cheat than the god will never bless that relation...you don't think too much, think of the babies and your health...now take rest now"

"Aham dikra what did doctor say is everything ok..."

"yes mom everything fine, doctor asked me to take gopi for scanning day after tomorrow..."

"ok dikra take care of her...i will come with your green tea and juice for gopi bahu"

...

Gopi will call her mami's house in the morning and will ask Rashi to meet her in mandir in the evening so that she can speak to her...Rashi will inform her mummy regarding gopi meeting her in the evening in mandir...

Rashi and Urmila will think to get sympathy from gopi and can easily manipulate her to get back to MM...

Gopi will go to Kokila who was sitting in Mandir making garlands for takurji in mandir along with Hetal and Baa...

"maaji woh, i am thinking of going to mandir today..."

"today gopi bahu its already evening, you would have told me in the morning i would have taken you...lets go tomorrow..."

"nahi maaji i want to go today itself..."

"is anything is there gopi bahu as you want to go today itself...wait for half an hour even i will come with you..."

"no no maaji i will go alone and come back soon"

{kokila will get a doubt that something is cooking in Gopi's head, as she never goes alone anywhere that too in this state when Aham has strictly told her not to go anywhere alone in this stage...}

"teekche gopi bahu , take the driver and come soon"

Gopi will go immediately without even taking the aarthi ki taali this will make Kokila's suspicion to raise to the level high...even Hetal and baa will not support kokila sending gopi bahu all alone for mandir...

Gopi will go to mandir and will not see Rashi anywhere will wait for Rashi after the pooja is over...

Here in MM, kokila hetal, and Baa will be worried for Gopi as it is nearly an hour and no sign of gopi still, as at 5.30 aham will be back from office if he comes to know that gopi is gone to mandir all alone he will get angry...as it 4.45...Jigar will come to the house seeing tension in everyone's face...Kokila will ask jigar to take her to mandir as gopi bahu has not come back from mandir which is just 10.00 minutes from their home...

Jigar will suspect, gopi bhabhi would have gone to meet Rashi or urmila...and will tell kokila to wait in the house...as he will go to bring gopi bhabhi back...

And will drive his car to mandir...he sees his bhabhi sitting all alone at the distance ...and will think of moving towards her...as gopi will see jigar coming towards her...gopi wil get up from her seat to move towards Jigar as he did not see Rashi anywhere in Mandir still...

Gopi was getting down from steps...jigar will see URSHI standing at the corner of the shop watching gopi coming down the stairs...and will also...see a man who is purposefully coming towards gopi...and will push her down and gopi slips the steps...and will get hurt on her head...Jigar will witness this...and will run towards gopi bhabhi...who has slipped...and he also sees Rashi running for helping Gopi in mandir...as Rashi has not seen Jigar still...as she is still far away from Gopi, but jigar will be able to think...what is their new kalaakari...as the man who pushed ran away from jigars hold immediately...and Jigar tried to go behind him...but thought of his babhi...

Jigar will rush to the spot to see urmila and Rashi taking care of gopi who is unconscious and surrounded by bunch of people...Jigar will immediately push Rashi's hand from gopis head..and will tie his handkey and will lift her to take her to hospital...with the help of savitha ben who was in the mandir at that time...

Urmila and Rashi will run behind Jigar to get in to the car to help him...but Jigar will not let them to do so...

"savitha kaki,...please take care of Bhabhi...and will make savitha to sit in back seat with gopi in her lap..."

And will drive very fast...to hospital...while driving he will inform the house about gopis' accident to the family and Aham...

Savitha ben and Jigar will be waiting for the doctor to come out, Aham will come running to hospital and will ask jigar how is gopi is there anything to worry...jigar will inform them , he don't know anything as doctor is checking her still...kokila, hetal, parag, chirag, kinjal will come rushing to hospital...and will see Aham's status who has completely broken...Kokila will curse herself and blame herself for sending gopi bahu all alone to mandir...the whole family will be worried about of gopi bahu's babies...

Savitha ben will tell kokila not to worry everything is going to be fine nothing will happen to her and her babies...

Rashi and urmila will be really worried that they never thought it will turn out to be so bad, as they have hiered a person to push gopi a little on the floor. So that rashi can go to gopi and do a acting of good sister who is worried about of her health and her well being...and that stupid man in a state of hurry pushed gopi near the stairs, and made gopi to slip from the steps, upon that jigarji saw that, and since jigar knows all their tantrums and kalaakari's he would have definitely understood what was their intentions...

Rashi will curse herself for doing such an kalaakari on gopi...and will ask her mummy..."mummy i told you not to do any kalaakari this time, as gopi is pregnant and if anything happens to the babies and if jigarji and Modi's come to know that we made gopi to slip from steps, than mummy my ray of hope to back to MM, will erase for lifetime...i have to stay in this house for longer time..."

"dikra keep quite don't scare me...first of all i am worried for your papa, if he comes to know that i played such a kalakari on gopi , he will push us outside this house..."

"arrey Urmila what is going on in between you and your dikri, tell me also..."

"maara takurji, your papa don't know still, bach gaye"

"nothing rashi ke papa i was discussing about the dinner with your daughter..."

"oh only dinner right, "

'haan haan rashi ke papa"

"urmila get me some tea in my room..."

...

Aham will rush to the doctor and will ask is everything ok with gopi and the babies...

"Mr. Modi your wife is absolutely fine, nothing has happened to her, only her head got an injury this would have been dangerous as she slipped from steps...i think god has saved her babies today...and you have to take care of her, as she have lot of complications in her pregnancy...this much carelessness will not be good.."

"yes doctor thank you can i see her."

"..oh sure Mr. Modi but she is unconscious now do not disturb her..."

Jigar will be relieved to hear that gopi bhabhi is fine, he knows the truth behind the accident and will take his car without informing anyone and will rush to Rajpal nagar...and will enter the house without knocking the door...Urshi will be scared to the core as Jigar knows the truth ...Jigar will not say anything to rashi he immediately goes to her and snatches the mangalsutra which was the symbol of a married woman...

Urmila and Jetu bhai will witness it...

:"damadji what are you doing maari dikri ..."

"urmilaji, you and your daughter planned to kill my bhabhi today, that too in mandir, you people are not worthy to be called as human beings...and today Rashi i am breaking all the relationship with you , how can you be so cruel in this whole world to kill a unborn child that too of your sisters baby"

"jigar beta what are you saying...Rashi and urmila tried to kill gopi's babies"

'haan papaji ask this two ladies they can go to any level for their happiness, i am ashamed to call them as human...today i have lost all hopes on myself that i will be able to believe rashi anymore in my life..."

Jigar will rush out of the house leaving Rashi crying...urmila will break down...as her daughters lost hope is also vanished ...

Jetu bhai will be really hating to the core to see these two ladies inside the house...but since he is father of Rashi will think of her good...and will decide to leave Rajkot before leaving Rajkot, Jetu bhai will go to hospital and will see gopi who is unconscious and Aham sitting next to her holding her hands with tears in his eyes...

"damadji please forgive me if i have done any mistake and look after my baanji well, and she is a child, and there is no one in this world for her who can look after her other than you,i am going to leave for Mumbai with my family, as i wont be there with my gopi in this time, you and kokila ben has to look after her as her family"

"mamaji do not worry gopi is my life now i know her importance in my life i cant live without her for a second also...:"

"jetu bhai do not worry gopi bahu is my daughter now..."

Jetu bhai will take the wishes from everyone before leaving he will apologise to Jigar from his daughters side,...

and will leave for Mumbai...with no other option left...URSHI will decide to leave for Mumbai...

...

After coming to Mumbai Rashi will realize the worth of Jigar and a husband in her life, and she will be pregnant to jigar's baby, but she will be scared to go for Rajkot once more and face Jigar in her life once more, after being caught red handedly by jigar trying to kill gopis babies...but in heart she never wanted to kill or hurt gopi's babies...she just wanted to manipulate gopi by getting her sympathy...but her mothers kalaakari has backfired on her,...

Jetu bhai will also tell Rashi to inform Modis regarding the baby and her pregnancy as he was worried about of the babies future, as Rashi may end up spoiling her babies future too ...as he was able to notice the change of heart in Rashi's as well as Urmila's...

Rashi use to think of the day when Jigar broke the relation with her...and the tone the anger has told everything to her...that there is no hope for her relation to be well with jigar once more in her life...Rashi use to speak with shagun who was the last ummeed of her life...Rashi use to recall all the days she has spent with jigar and the family, the love what she got from gopi...and she never respected the love what she received from Jigarji, instead she always meant to be greedy and always thought money is everything in life...urmila on seeing her daughters state cursed herself to give her death...as Rashi has gone for huge depression in her pregnancy, and upon that Jetu bhai's health condition was becoming weak day by day...and Shagun was born and brought some happiness in Rashi's life...Rashi always thought good things to Shagun...and she became a good mother and started supporting the family financially by taking up a job in the school...and this time she has realized the love for others and the worth of Jigar in her life as a father to Shagun...

...present...

Jigarji please forgive me for all my deeds i have done in the past, i know i was very greedy, and always looked for luxury and money in my life, never even thought that love, and husband is more important for a woman in life, i realized your worth when i came to know that Shagun is in my womb,,,,,and thought of informing you, but jigarji i was scared that you may reject me, and my baby, for the worst thing i have ever done in my life,,,,jigarji believe me i never thought of harming gopis babies ...it was my little effort to get into modi bhavan back...i think god never wanted me to be your wife, thats why that day when i was in mandir doing one more kalaakari on gopi, he would have thought, if i become successfull this time to get back to MM, even he cannot punish himself for letting me win over good...i know Jigarji i was wrong and never loved you and respected your feelings, and have told many lies to you and your family to make my life happy ,...but jigarji today i have realized the worth and the life...i don't want my shagun to go through the punishment in her life because of my sins and mistakes...please accept my shagun as your daughter and get her the life what she deserves...i know jigarji you must be thinking that shagun is my route to MM, i know even i think of coming back with you in my dream also to Rajkot as your wife, i cant come and live in MM, as your wifes place is being filled with another girl, i came to know that Jigarji you are married to another woman in your life, papa told me before his death and he took a promise from me i will never spoil others life for my happiness...but jigarji i know i cant give a life what shagun deserves, after all i am her mother...please forgive me and accept shagun...and give me a chance to wear the mangalsutra of your name...but i don't want anything from you, i will never ask you to accept me back in your life...i want to live my life independently today i can earn money which is sufficient for me and my mother...

Dhawal bhai there is no need to take us with you as i am educated and can take care of me and mummy...i deserve this punishment as i always thought whatever the mistakes i have done are not mistakes , and never realized till i lost the jewel of my life, that is you jigarji...please forgive me gopi i never understood your love always took advantage of your innocence and tried to break your relationship with Aham jiju...thats why god has not left any opportunity for me to be back with my husband...kinjal, dhawal bhai please forgive me for the troubles i have given you...kakiji, mummyji please forgive me...

Kokila---"Rashi ...you have realized your mistakes that is more than enough as far as Shagun's life is concerned she will be taken care of and she will get all the facilities and the status what modis child deserve but Rashi as jetu bhai is not there it is our duty to take care of you and your mother..."

"kakiji please forgive me once again for this...i am living a happy life in this house with mummy, dhawal bhai is our support, but i don't want to come and live with Dhawal bhai, as i don't want to trouble anyone...and i am capable of handling my life alone..i wanted to give good life for my daughter..."

"rashi dikra, shgun is my grand daughter don't worry about of her and i know joshna very well she will accept this nanhi pari in her life...and dikra i promise that shagun will be a apple of our eyes"

Jigar'"Rashi i am very happy that you realized your mistakes , and i am happy rashi that you gave the opportunity to be the father of shagun, even if i wish to take you back in my life as my wife, i think god has not written you in my life..."

"i know jigarji i was not made for you...i wish i will be your wife in my next life"

"Rashi ben aap kaise rahengi akeli "

'gopi do not worry about of me, i am your elder sister i can take care of myself"

All the modis will be very happy to get their another grand child and jigar will be feeling sorry for Rashi's life, and Kokila and Hetal with the heavy heart will leave for Rajkot...there will be a mode of silence in all of them , as no one was unable to tell each other what they were going through,...as everyone was feeling guilty of themselves or sad for Rashi's fate...no one was not getting any answers to their question which was raised inside them...

...

Shagun will be very comfortable in Hetals lap, jigar will be thinking of how to tell Joshna about of Shagun...the moment they reach modi bhavan, mani will come running to open the doors for them, joshna will be handling sanskaar who was crying heavily may be he got a hint that his mother is going to come soon to the house...gopi will run to sanskaar to feed him milk and will take him inside the room, Aham will take Guni in his arms and will take care of her as she will be very happy to see her father...

Joshna will see the new baby in Hetals arms before she asks something, Jigar will tell her about of shagun, and Joshna will tell jigar that she has accepted him as her friend, husband, and love not only him and also his past...and she will be more than happy to get a ready made daughter in hand...and will immediately take the baby in her arm...shagun will see her new mother Joshna with happiness...Joshna will take her to their room...Hetal and Kokila will be knowing that Joshna will play a better mother to shagun , as she has gone through the pain of loosing her parents early in life...

Jigar will feel proud of his wife...Joshna and will feel sorry for Rashi as he could not do anything for her life...but will promise to himself he will give all the happiness of life to Shagun...

AFTER 5 years

"gopi bahu you are 7 months pregnant take care of your health, why are you working in kitchen, where is Joshna call her"

"maaji woh jiya got up just now and she is crying, so Joshna is taking care of her"

"teekche gopi bahu now go to your room Aham might be coming now back from his work, if he sees you working in kitchen at this time he will shout on all of us"

"Gopi bhabhi, this Jiya will make me to cry for myself, you know what gopi bhabhi, from the day she is bborn there is no moment left where she happily plays with her brother and sister"

"Joshna ben please don't make Jiya to be with sankaar he may pinch or hit jiya if he gets irritated with jiya's crying, you know what maaji, Ahamji was telling, Sanskaar fought with sheetal bens son, the reason was he did not spoke to sanskaar that day, and Ahamji was very angery yesterday as he was called by school principal"

"kya gopi bahu Sanskaar fought he is just 5 years old and done this kaarnaame in the house, where is he let me take care of him...sanskaar where are you come here"

"choti dadi i am here why did you call me"

'sanskaar why did you fight with your friend in school"

"no choti dadi i did not do anything he only hit me , thats why even i hit him back, i gave him the way the karate kid gave him back in the movie to that motu..."

"kyaa karate kid, gopi jaldi aao yahan, your son is seeing the movie, who made him to watch the movie in the house, mom why are you asking him so sweetly he is not the one with whom we should speak nicely, he has hit the boy so badly and principal asked me to take care of him"

Little sanskaar will hide behind his choti dadi to save himself from Ahams anger...

"Aham dikra java dena chota baccha hai, samaj jayega"

"mom jab dekho java dena , mom its all your love and pamperin it has spoilt him,..."

Aham will walk away to his room in the ground floor and will tell mani to get send his tea with gopi..who was in kitchen...

Mani will inform gopi to get his tea, to their room, Joshna willsmile at ther gopi bhabhi who was worried because Aham was angry with her for giving him such a naughty kids...

She will start preparing his tea and will ask Joshna ben innocently...

"Joshna ben, i gave a both the kids to Ahamji, but Ahamji will always complain to me that this time i should give them a calm and good babies not like the baby like sanskaar and guni, who both are opposite to their names in character...how can i make this coming baby calm and good"

"bhabhi this is not your work, sanskaar and Guni has inherited their fathers character, when you go to room tell Aham bhai it is not because of you the babaies have become naughty it is because of Aham bhai the babies have become naughty"

As Joshna knows gopi will tell the exactly what she told and gave to Aham...

Aham will see his shabby room with all the clothes and papers all over the room...and will see little guni tearing the papers from the magazine and seeing her papa innocently...

"guni what are you doing why are you tearing the pages"

"papa sneha made boats in her house so that we can play with boats when it rains..."

"kya boats from paper, guni come here "

Aham takes guni in his arms as she is very naughty and mischevious at the same time, as Aham could not help himself to be drawn towards her innocence...

Aham sits on the bed and will teach her how to make boat and aeroplane...

Gopi will bring his tea for Aham and see father daughter playing with the rocket...

"Ahamji aapki green tea..."

"thanks gopi, come and sit here and take rest it is 7 months and doctor has told you to take rest..."

"Ahamji guni got her marks card, i will get for you, guni baby which rank did you get baby tell me"

'papa i don't know, which rank i got"

"Ahamji this is the marks card"

:"gopi this is not marks card it is called as progress report card, give me let me see, which rank my daughter got"

"guni baby, what it is you got less marks this time compared to last time...you got 42 out of 50, 4 marks got reduced compared to last time, why what you are not studying properly in the house"

"papa you only told me to get different marks i always use to get 46, you only said last time to get different marks...so i got different number this time...see papa 1st test 46, 2nd test 46, 3rd test 42, it is different number right"

Aham will be in utter shock to see guni explaining him why she got less marks her answer were innocent same like his wife, but her naughtyness made Aham ato leave his false anger ...and he smiled and kissed little guni, and she immediately jumped out of his lap and went out to play with Shagun, and jiya, and sanskaar who were playing in the hall with Hetal and kokila, Joshna had taken up the responsibility of the kitchen and household work as gopi was expecting her third baby this time...

"gopiji come here and take rest , and how was your day did our little baby troubled you today,..."

"no ahmji, sanskaar and guni are becoming very naughty day by day...you know what guni did after coming back from school...she went to kitchen and pulled up wheat floor kept on the table in plate and she almost took bath in wheat flour, and, shagun went to kitchen and got scared looking in to Guni who was looking like a little ghost in white flour painted around...it took long time for kakiji to calm down shagun, and on seeing Shagun crying jiya screamed too and it became miserable because of guni...and sanskaar broke papaji's glasses today, and see the wall here guni has done drawing today...they both are becoming naughty day by day...and guni calls maaji as kokila or koki...and i don't know who thought her that...Ahamji, i hope our coming baby will be silent like me, and both our babies have inherited the character like you..."

"gopi what do you mean they have inherited by me...see guni's face she looks same like you, and sanskaar has become ziddi like you..."

"Ahamji the baby is kicking me from inside"

"gopi, really may be he got angry that i am scolding you, i think he is going to be your ladla..."

The happiness will start glooming in the modi bhavan...with Jigar and joshna understanding each other after the arrival of jiya...

The modi bhavan will be filled with lot of happiness with the small kids running all over the house...sanskaar has become very naughty and stubborn in behaviour as no one can predict what he is going to do next moment very good in academics and sports...guni is the most mischevious always troubling Kokila by doing one or other thing in the house as she could not sit at one place...everyone in the house has to look after gopi as she has been troubled by both her kids to the core by the time she makes them to eat food ...Aham has to make gopi to eat the food. As Ahams babies cant be handled by anyone, and ...the kids have gone too naughty...and Joshna wil have one more baby named as Jiya who is 3 years old who knows to scream and cry making everyone to put cotton in their ears , but Shagun is the only kid who is silent innocent, good at academics, naive girl, who has inherited all the goodness from her mother Joshna, who has taken care of Shagun as her own daughter...and fulfilled all her duties in life...

Rashi has got all the happiness in her life, and she got the promotion in her job and she always helped the needy and spent her life in helping others and never even thought of going back to MM again, but Joshna did not take a place of Rashi in Shagun's heart, she always made a point to take Shagun to meet her mother every weekends, even though Rashi insisted that not to bring Shagun, as she may get attached to her...Joshna made it clear that she deserved a love of her daughter As we all know the Marraiges are made in heaven..kinjal and dhawal lived a happy life blessed with karan desai...Rashi got her life partner who was written in her fate jigar but she loved him like meera...Jigar was written in Joshna's fate like rukmini.with two babies shagun, and jiya...Gopi and aham were made for each other...with their three kids, Sanskaaar, guni, and shubh (boy)...

THE END

(sorry guys i had to make up my studies in the next coming exams i am ending this FF abruptly... i hope i have not hurt any ones sentiments...please forgive me for that)

Edited by bhavya - 13 years ago
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it was a lovely FF Great ending👏

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