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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: bhavya

hey shaina good catch...
thank you so much
...looking forward for Milan update soon...as GoHem RaJi babies track is badly nneded now ...in Milan...i am waiting for your update too...😳

tomorrow definetly.. u wil get the final update of ur milan with the babies blast.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shaina.sharma

tomorrow definetly.. u wil get the final update of ur milan with the babies blast.

hey looking for long and happy things new MM in your Milann,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,Embarrassed
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the update Bhavya, please update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update.love kokila, hetal n baa.too cute
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks yaar...😳
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thank you so much😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tina_1234

nyc part...waitin for next

thanks
ya sure soon it will be updated...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: rsk16

lovely update.love kokila, hetal n baa.too cute

hey liked it... hey want happy news in on series tooo thank you for liking it...😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

PART 36.

"urmila, urmila, what are you doing, where is my tea i am calling you from that time what are you doing inside come out"

"woh maien i was preparing pakode for you rashi ke papa, so it became late, how was your day"

"itini seva karne ki zarrorat nahi hai (no need to show so much concern), i know you very well, my head has not balded because of the age, it is because of seeing your kalakari, i know urmila what is running in your mind, you don't think that if you make me happy by doing and taking care of my needs i will forgive you , never even think like that in your dream aslo, if i just get a small hint you are back to your old story of doing kalakari's and trying to get into modi bhavan, than that day will be the last day for your life as my wife in this house, you can go wherever you want, as far as i know you don't have anyone in your maayka to look after your needs, Dhawal is the only son of your late brother, but i doubt whether kinjal will allow you inside her house after the way you treated kinjal and dhawal in this house and made them to shift to other house"

"Rashi ke papa, you are a father of Rashi, whatever i have done till now its for your daughter's life, i wanted everything best for my only dikri, so i made all this things to keep my daughters life happy, what i knew it will turn out to be like this and she will be back to Rajpal nagar, think as a father of Rashi don't you have any responsibility towards her life "

"haan Urmila you are right, it is my duty to fill my daughters life with happiness, but i am also a good human being i will not rob others happiness and fortune of others daughter to fill my daughters life with happiness, the life which Rashi was living was not written in her fate, pairs are made in heaven, Jigar and sonal pair was written in heaven, even Aham-gopi's too, thats why today my gopi dikri is living a happy life with him and god has rained the happiness on them, but you and your dikri has broken the Jigar-sonals marriage and sat in mantap in place of sonals thats why god has given punishment for going against his wish today i don't feel sad for your daughters state, but i feel happy that bagwan ke ghar maein dher hai par andher nahi"

"Rashi ke papa what are you saying you are happy to see my Rashi in tears,...how could you "

"i can urmila did not your heart melt, when my gopi dikri cried because of your daughter, and the poor girl sonal, whose life you both filled with darkness and snatched her happiness, it is the curse of sonals parents, and her tears, that my kanaji has done justice, and showed the place of Rashi... i am disgusted to call her as my daughter...the only reason i gave place for you and your daughter in this house is because i am her father and your husband it is my duty to take care of your needs, i will fulfil all my duties, if you and your daughter tried to play any game here after, i will throw you both out side this house at that moment, that time i will not even listen to my god also , don't ever test my patience...you have seen only good side of me till now...bette not to see other side of me"...

"ji rashi ke papa, i promise to you that i will not do anything, trust me for this, "

Jetu bhai will take the cup of tea and will throw it on the floor, on seeing Urmila's face... urmila will be scared to the deep...Jetu bhai will walk away from the scene...

Rashi will be standing near the door listening to her father and mother conversation will be deeply hurt because of her fathers words...and will come and sit on the bed and will sob...Urmila will enter Rashi's room with tea in her hand and see her only daughter in tears she could not control her emotions and will wipe her tears ...and will go near Rashi and caress her hair...Rashi will hug Urmila

"mummy, what has happened to my life, i have ruined my whole life, and lost the trust of Jigarji, and papa, mummy i always wanted to have a house which filled with love and all luxuries what i always dreampt of, but mummy i never wanted this thing to happen, why mummy all my dreams will be crashed once"

"dikra what can we do when bagwan has only closed his eyes for your plea, i tried all my level best to give you what you wanted, i could not see you in tears thats why i made you to marry to Jigar, and made you to share the proudness of modi bahu with gopi instead of sonal, and helped you in all the ways to make gopis life hell...but dikra you forget all your past and start the life afreash, forget that you were modi bahu before and jigar was your husband, you are educated and confident person, why don't you come out of this bad dream, i always want to see happiness in my Rashi's life, chalo wash your face see, how red your eyes have become ..."

Saying this urmila will try to pat Rashi's face...Rashi will be centre shocked to hear these words from her mothers mouth...

"mummy, what are you saying, how could you say that i have to forget modi bhavan and jigarji...mummy i know that i got in to the place of sonal...but mummy that is my past but today infront of whole society, i am married to jigarji, and he is my life, how can i forget my life...mummy please do something so that i can get back to jigari... i cant stay here mummy, i am married my place is in my inlawas house and with jigarji..."

"dikra please forgive for this i can't help you this time,,,,,,,atleast you have a place in this house...where you can stay think of my life too dikra there is no one else left for me in this world other than your papa, if he throws me out of this house think of my life... i can't live without your papa, a wifes place is always in her husbands house...the society will respect a woman if she is living with her husband...i don't want to loose my husband...samjo...i cant help you...mujhe maaf karde forgive me "

"mummy even you left my hand...what shall i do now..."

"dikra samjo "

"mummy samjgayi...you want a life with your husband where as me...you cant help your own daughter ...you are thinking for your life rather than yours daughter ...mummy you are selfish..."

"yes dikra i am selfish correct...you call me whatever you want, scold me...but don't ask me for my help...your papa has given us a place in this house... i don't want him to throw us outside this house..."

Saying this urmila will come out of Rashi's room and suddenly sees Jetu bhai standing at the door and listening to Urmila and Rashi's confrontation...

"jee aap"

"haan me urmila, i think you have told your daughter... what i have told you...is it not any new kalakari ... i guess you saw me standing listening to you so that...you have changed your words..."

"no rashi ke papa, whatever i told was from my heart i did not do any kalakari"

"trusting you is very dangerous urmila... i can trust a snake which is filled with poison... but you and your daughter are dangerous than that..."

Jetu bhai will walk out to his room... urmila will be deeply hurt and will say to herself...

"rashi ke papa, this time i am not playing anymore kalakari...i will never even think to... i want a my husband back,...who always loved me... i cant see your hatred towards me ...in your eyes..."

Urmila will wipe her tears...

Back to Modi mansion (MM)

"paragji where are you going no...i have shifted our room to Ahams room from now onwards Aham and gopi are going to stay in ground floor... you were complaining right...that you want to have big room, and want fresh air...so i shifted"

"but kokila our room is more spacious than Aham's and it is near to garden and i never complained of fresh air...than:"

Kokila will stare at Parag...parag will be confused and stop his conversation...

"Aham dikra you and gopi bahu stay in our room from now onwards..."

"jee mom i will"

Chirag . parag, baa, kokila, jigar, hetal will be surprised to hear this one from Ahams mouth he easily agreed...

Mani will get tea for everyone and juice for baa, green tea for Aham,,,,,,,,

"arrey hetal don't you think today something new is going on in this house...baa ka maun vrath., Aham shifting to parag's room...gopi bahu not getting tea for us..."

"uff jigar ke papa don't use your brain too much... i know you are a business man ...but don't use your business strategies in the house...learn from parag bhai..how to obey his wife..."

Parag and jigar will laugh at chirag for hetal's word... Kokila will also laugh...and will go to Gopi's room

"Gopi bahu what are you doing when you are going to say to Aham... i cant keep this secret to myself anymore... i have to keep pooja in the house, want to take you to doctor so many things i want to do...and you not opening your mouth...see gopi bahu, take this tickets a movie ticket... i got it for you ...you and Aham go for evening show and when you find a proper time tell him... when you both will be back in the house i want Aham to know this good news... if you wont say this good news to him by evening i will tell everyone in this house,,, do you want me to do that..."

"nahi maaji... i will tell Ahamji ...by myself..."

"ok than i will tell Aham to take you out today..."

Kokila will go the hall and see Aham sitting with Chirag and speaking...abot business deal. Aham will see his mom coming towards hima and will stand and say to her...

"mom... i wanted to take your permission today there is a party in my friends house,... it is his birthday so he has invited both me and gopi together so can you ask gopi to get ready and come along with me..."

Kokila will be happy to hear this thing from Aham's mouth .. that her burden of convincing Aham has reduced...

"haan dikra kyun nahi... i will tell gopi bahu to get ready"

Kokila will see gopi bahu already ready and coming towards the hall...Chirag, parag and Aham will be shocked to see Gopi in a well dressed...

"kokila gopi bahu is ready already...Aham dikra your wife knows you better ...here you spoke to take her outside she is ready already if i tell Hetal to come out with me she will take one hour to get ready,,,,,,, hai na parag... shurwaath maein even kokila use to take more time to get ready..."

"haan mota bhai...kokila use to take atleast an hour to come out with me..."

"paragji stop pulling my legs all the wifes will do the same thing...not only me or hetal bhabhi"

"kya baat hai kokila, some heated arguement is going on between you and parag bhai"

"nothing mota bhabhi paragji and mota bhai are remembering their younger days"

"mom i will too get ready soon and come :" ok dikra...

"gopi bahu sit down why are you standing and smiling don't strain yourself...what are you holding in your hand give it to me"

Kokila will snatch the movie tickets from gopi hand and will hide it... parag and chirag will see each other face...

"woh Paragji i had taken two movie tickets for you and me... :"

Gopi will widen her eyes...Chirag and parag will look each others face... Hetal will smile ...

"kya kokila movie at this time... you never like to come for movie..."

"what ...what do you mean paragji...the movie is nice it seems meri maa called me and asked me to go and see along with you i called mota bhabhi along with me... but mota bhabhi has already seen the movie... so i thought we will both go... Any ways Aham is taking gopi bahu out..."

"chirag bhai you saw the movie...(in a confused expression)"

"haan why not only our age is running not our heart,... it is still at 25"

Listening to this everyone will laugh at each other...

Aham will come to the hall with his car keys...and will take gopi along with him kokila will ask Aham to take care of gopi bahu... and will tell gopi to eat only healthy food outside...gopi will nod her head...and go with Aham...

"Ahamji ye tho Party nahi hai..."

"haan it is not a party...its 5 star hotel and one of my favourite place to hang around...gopi sit down what are you seeing...what do you like to eat"

Gopi will think what to order...as Maaji has told her not to eat anything unhealthy and moreover she has eaten much in the afternoon and she is feeling still the stomach is full...Aham will stare at his wife the way she is thinking to order the food...

"gopi what are you thinking...tell me what you are feeling like to eat...at this time "

Waiter come after 5 minutes...waiter will go ...

"gopi at this time i mean anything which you like to eat like spicy, sweet, khatta, chatpata...anything..."

"Ahamji i need to eat ice cream..."

"what ice cream no no...it is not healthy you will get cold...mom has told me to take care of you, so tell anything healthy other than ice cream"

"Ahamji anything else...means...chocolate..."

"what chocolate...gopi what are you saying...i took you here and came to make you eat chocolate..."

"hmmm Ahamji mango..."

"what gopi mango..."

"no no i want to eat...what ...no pani puri..."

"gopi, are you ok why look confused...do you want to say anything to me...tell anything like..."

"like...yes ahamji i got it, pastery white forest "

Aham will hold his head and will tell the waiter to get them, ice cream, chocolate, mango, pani puri, pastery...waiter will open his mouth wide open on receiving such a rare order...Aham will tell waiter to get what he has ordered and along with that a hot coffee for him...

Gopi will be wondering what to eat in those ...she will take mango slices...first...than ...tries her hand with almost all...Aham will be wondering what his wife is doing...eating all reare combination together... gopi will think to herself...even though she was feeling her stomach is filled she ate almost all the things...and will touch her womb and caress it...Aham will see gopi smiling with her hands on her womb...

"gopi are you ok..."

"Ji ahamji"

"Ahamji where are you taking me...you told you will take me to party...and than took for hotel...and than for shopping...and than to book shop...and now to toys shop...and got me teddy bears and Barbie doll..."

"gopi do you think i am a fool to take you to the party..., you think i wil take my beautiful wife to party and make other guys to see my beautiful wife... i will never give that chance to any other man... i want to see my wife and her beauty all alone"

"gopi do you want to take anything else...tell me want to say anything..."

"no Ahamji this is enough"

Aham will go to gopi and close her eyes with his hands...

"Ahamji what are you doing why are you closing my eyes..."

"chup chaap chalo... don't talk ...you will never keep quite..."

"sorry Ahamji...woh maein you closed my eyes na so i ... i mean "

"chup gopi... now move..."

"haan...ok "

Aham will tak gopi to... and will remove his hands from her eyes which were acting like a barrel of protection...

"tumhe accha laga mera surprise(did you like my surprise):"

"ahamji ...aap...woh you knew it..."

(to the room in a hotel which is filled with baby posters, flowers, candles...and lot of toys...)

"haan did you think your husband is buddhu..."

"no Ahamji...you thought you will prove me buddhu and hided my surprise as a secret...but i am my mothers only son... i took a pledge to prove you wrong and went all the way to find out my wifes truth ...and you know what i knew this secret before you told my mom..."

"Ahamji how did you know... you are lying...might be maaji told you..."

"no my mom did not tell me but her DIL told me..."

"me Ahamji when did i tell you... i did not tell you"

"haan gopiji i came to know even though you hided it from me..."

"HOW"

"you were hiding your pregnancy report in the room...but you hided that one in our cupboard and when i opened it i saw a preganancy report in your shelf...so i got the surprise news before anyone know it..."

"you knew it...but why did you not wish me...and shared the happiness"

Aham will hold gopis hand gently and takes her in his arms and take her to the window...

"gopiji because i wanted my wife to be happy and wanted her to share this beautiful moment all alone ...but what to do my buddhu wife in the urge of proving me buddhu hided this happy news from me and told everyone in the house...even i could not hold this secret any more i tried all the way to make you tell this secret from evening...but you no way...and had planned this surprise for you, thought i will take you here after you tell me...but meri kismath kaha...i have to take all the initiative by myself in our relation..."...

"ahamji thank you for this surprise...i wanted to share this good news with you all alone...but you gave me that surprise instead,... i am very happy today... i got a such a loving husband, and soon a our baby is going to join us...and i am going to be mother its a beautiful feeling of mother hood..."

"gopi me too i got a beautiful innocent wife who is going to give me all the happiness of this world to me ...and made me papa...haan gopi our child should get all the happiness in this world..."

Aham will stand behind gopi and rest his head on gopis shoulder and touch her womb,,,, and will speak to the baby...

:"hey Aham Jr... don't make me wait for long time...come to this world soon, and you will be with your mom 24 hours in her womb...but once you come to this world i will spend all my time with you...how are you feeling are you ok inside "...
"Ahamji what are you doing talking to baby...he cant understand anything he is just 4 weeks"

"gopi you can talk to him anytime but me... i cant stay with him for all 8 months 24 hours continuesly...as i have to go to work...more over you are jealous of me i think... you don't want me to talk to my son now only as you want all his love for yourself...Dekho beta tumari mummy hai na...she is jealous since i am talking to you...a if our friendship becomes stronger she will not get much time to spend with you:"

"Ahamji your baby is your friend... and i am jealous what... i did not get"

"its ok and better if you don't understand what me and my baby are speaking "

Aham will laugh at gopi and will hug her...

"Ahamji its time let us go maaji will be waiting for us..."

"haan its time already too late you need to take rest also lets go home..."

They both will drive home back...

(PLEASE DO PUT YOU IDEA HOW YOU WANT RASHI CHARACTER TO CHANGE OR REMAIN SAME, WHAT YOU WANT TO DO WITH ANITA'S CHARACTER, SUGGEST ABOUT RASHI AND ANITA)

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May the divine light of diwali
spread into your Life
peace, prosperity, happiness
and good health.

wishing you all a very happy prosperous and safe diwali...jai lakshmi maa...

PART 37 PAGE 53😃

Edited by bhavya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
that was wonderful bhavya...so ahem knew the surprise very nice
well i liked the surprise...loved the update...

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