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Originally posted by: Simz786

I Love This So Far. 👏 You're Really Talented 😊 Glad Ahem Is Nice To Gopi In This.

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awww thank you i really thought i sucked at writing but thanks for the comment

Ok my friend here is part 5 and I am glad you guys like it so far. I made this part pretty long than usual but let me know what you think thanks

Ahem was so happy that Gopi was in his life and he was slowly realizing that he was falling in love with her. He needed to confess his love soon before it's too late. Gopi was never happy as before she now had people that like her for her but reality would hit her soon when she has to leave and go on her own. Gopi loved ahemji house and his family. But more than that she loved him the most and wanted to marry him but she thought oh me such a poor girl and him such a rich guy he will never accept me. Kokilla knows that ahem loves Gopi because he had never been so happy with anyone other than Gopi. So Kokilla's plan was to send them somewhere together. A few went by and Kokilla received a phone call of one of her friends and she told Kokilla that of their close friends died. Kokilla was shocked and told ahem and gopi to come along in the funeral so that they could support her. She couldn't handle it herself because it was one of her closet friends. Anyways after the funeral was over Kokilla's friend wanted her to take her ashes to a place she had no family to do it for her but because Kokilla was her best friend she would want her to carry out her final wish. Kokilla told ahem and Gopi to go to this river far that is in another city. Kokilla couldn't do it she was too weak and tried she loved her friend and respected her final wish but she couldn't handle the loss of her anymore. So ahem and Gopi had no choice but to fulfill her wish. It was the next morning and ahem and Gopi came down ready to leave. They were about to step out the door when Kokilla said ahem dikra are you taking your car. Ahem looked confused and said yeah mom I am why? Kokilla said no ahem dikra buses only go there they wouldn't let you pass if you went in your car. Ahem said sorry mom I didn't know do you know what time it comes? Kokilla said in a one hour if you leave now there should be one coming soon. Ahem and Gopi took Kokilla's blessing and left. They got to the station to take the bus. There was a lot of people there and ahem didn't want to lose Gopi so he held her hand in his hand. Gopi was smiling and said ahemji why are you holding my hands? He said I didn't want to lose you there is a lot of people here and I didn't want to take a risk. Gopi was thinking oh how I love this man. You can hold my hand for the rest of your life if you wanted to. She quickly realized what she thinking and snapped out of her thoughts. They got to the bus but it was so full that they had to sit on top of the bus. That wasn't such a good idea either there was a lot of men on top or poor Gopi had to sit with them. Ahem knew Gopi was uncomfortable among these men. So he sat right by her and made sure that no one came near her. Gopi was so tried that she started to fall asleep but couldn't as she had nowhere to lay her head but finally she was so deep into sleep that she just put her head on ahem's shoulder. Ahem noticed her and there was a cool breeze in the air which made Gopi's hair come into her face. Ahem noticed this and gently began tucking her hair back behind her ears he loved how soft her skin is her hair smelled so good. After a while ahem was falling asleep too and just put his head on gopi. They were almost there then suddenly the bus stopped. Ahem got up to see why the bus was stopping…

Good work zozo 👏

wow can't wait for next part

This looks to be leading somewhere. . .

The story is nicely told.

Aww. The Bus Stopped Right At The Cute Part

I Love This So Far. 👏 You're Really Talented 😊 Glad Ahem Is Nice To Gopi In This.

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thanks so much 😊

hey guys here is another update i thought i should just post it because i will be busy with exams so i don't know when i will be able to update after this one. i am glad you guys like it so keep reading !!!!! thanks 😊

Part 6

He saw that there were few boys coming inside the bus but he didn't know why. Gopi got up and looked she was shocked at who she saw and it was the man that her aunt wanted her to marry she pulled ahem and told him about the boys inside the bus. Gopi thought they were still keeping an eye for her just in case she popped up somewhere near home because the river ahem and Gopi was going to was close to Gopi's house. Ahem knew what to do before the boys found them ahem and Gopi left from behind the bus and started to run towards the forest. The boys started to search the bus and they went up and saw that she wasn't there so they left. Gopi and ahem was running but Gopi couldn't run or even walk anymore she was so tried. So she sat down for a few minutes but ahem said Gopi are you ok you know we have to keep walking it's going to be dark soon. Gopi said I know ahemji but I can't I am so tried I need to rest. Ahem was worried about her and said ok we should be close to a hotel soon please come on we need to keep walking. Gopi said ok ahemji lets go she started to walk but was feeling dizzy and she cried out ahemji. Ahem saw Gopi almost falling to the ground so he went and held her before she did. He asked are you ok Gopi she said I am ok let's go ahem said no Gopi you're not ok here I will help you and put her hands around his neck and held her tight to him and started to walk. Gopi couldn't help but look at him smiling she really did love him and couldn't even think spending a day without him. They were almost there than suddenly Gopi's feet hit something she didn't know what it was it just felt like a poison had entered her body. She fainted without even knowing what had happened. Ahem cried out Gopi are you ok what happened Gopi. Than he saw a snake leaving from where Gopi's feet was. He was so scared and worried that he carried Gopi and saw a hotel and asked if someone could call the doctor. The doctors came and said please can you leave the patient I need to examine her. Ahem said ok doctor please save my Gopi and that was the moment ahem was more than in love with Gopi he couldn't imagine his life without her. He was watching the doctor examining Gopi and giving her a shot. After the doctor came out ahem said is she ok. The doctor said yes she is fine I gave her a shot so that the poison wouldn't spread but she should be fine in a week till then please take care of her. Ahem was so happy at hearing that and said thank you doctor I appreciate it can I go see her now. The doctor said no problem and yes you can go see your wife. But before ahem could tell him she wasn't his wife the doctor left. He thought she isn't my wife yet but she will be soon. He went to the room and saw Gopi laying on the bed eyes closed. He went to her side and held her hand. Her hair was in her face a little so he moved it gently. Gopi moved to the touch a little which made ahem twitch and say Gopi are you ok but she didn't say anything. She looked so beautiful he thought he couldn't help but begin caressing her lips they looked so delicious to kiss but he had to control his urges. Gopi moved a little but this time she wrapped her arms around ahem's hand and curled around him. Ahem smiled and said good night beautiful and he fell asleep sitting there by his future wife.

That was really a lovely update.