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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part3

Gopi goes to the guest room and is left thinking about what happened to her so far. Meanwhile ahem is going to his moms room he wanted to clearly tell her everything he knew about this girl before she gets a wronge idea. He goes to his mom's door and knocks " mom can I come in" kokilla says 'ahem dikra come in" he says " mom I wanted to talk to you about this girl gopi" before kokilla says anything ahem stops her and says " I know what you're thinking mom why did I bring that girl in our house when I don't even know her" she looks at him knowing that he was right he continues and says "mom that girls was being forced in marriage she want and there were goons chasing her when I found her. Just let her stay here for a few days and I will make some other arrangements for her. She gets up and goes to her son and says ahem dikra I understand what she must be going through and I am proud that your concerned about others ahem hugs his mom saying you should be proud after all you raised me right" she laughs and says its late go to bed he says goodnite mom she says good nite ahem dikra. As ahem leaves her room she goes to the guest room and knocks. Gopi says come in she is surprised that she sees ahems mom. She says come in after all this your house maaji. Kokilla looks at her funny and she says I am sorry can I call you maaji. She says of course gopi beta. This is the first time gopi heard anyone talk to her so calm and also call her beta. When she was at her aunts house she would get beating and be called as a servant. Kokilla looks at her and says ahem told me everything so I understand what you must be going through. Gopi starts crying saying I cant thank you enough for letting me stay in your house. Kokilla says gopi beta stop crying and don't think this is not your house. Kokilla gives her couple saree of hers and tell her to go change and sleep because she needs it after a long night. Gopi thanks her and wishes her goodnite. Kokilla goes back to her room thinking of gopi and how she had found her daughter in law for ahem.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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It's a really good start, curious to see where it goes
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Posted: 14 years ago
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here is part 4 i am wondering if this is boring please let me know

Everyone is awakened by a girl singing ahem goes to the mindar and sees who this is he sees gopi praying and singing she looks so beautiful she has some color to her face now and that saree looks wonderful on her. Kokilla goes downstairs and sees gopi praying and singing she sees ahem standing and admiring her. She lighty taps him and says ahem dimra is that gopi singing. Ahem says yes mom doesn't she have a wonderful voice. She says yes indeed she does. Gopi finishes and sees both ahem and his mother she says jay shree krisna I am sorry if I woke you up its just that I pray when I get up every morning. Ahem says its fine I have to go to work anyways. Kokilla says it ok gopi beta. Gopi says maaji can I help you in the kitchen if you want since I have nothing to do. Ahem at this point is surprised at Gopi calling his mother maaji and his mother calling her beta. Kokilla says of course Gopi beta ahem needs to eat anyways so let's go. Gopi follows kokilla to the kitchen and helps her cook and prepare food for ahem. When they are done Kokilla brings the food to the table and tells ahem to taste it and tell her how it is. Ahem takes one bites and says wow mom this is so delicious who made it.? She says ahem dikra Gopi of course who else could make such delicious food. Ahem is amazed at Gopi she can cook, sing and look beautiful. Ahem tells her Gopi this is wonderful. Gopi blushes slightly and says thank you ahemji. Kokilla notices this and smiles. Ahem finishes his breakfast and bids good bye to everyone. He leaves to go to work. When he arrives at work he can't help but keep thinking about Gopi who has entered his life and that's when he knew this was the beginning of something new. Ahem was so happy for the past few days because Gopi would take care of his every need and also keep his mom happy. Kokilla wanted ahem and Gopi to come closer so she had a plan in mind to get them closer. Kokilla did notice that ahem was happier than before and she knew Gopi was his happiness.


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey welcome to the forum. Your FF is really good. Keep up the good work. Thanks!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sbp1971

Hey welcome to the forum. Your FF is really good. Keep up the good work. Thanks!


thanks for the comment 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey i jus read uf=r ff n it is reli interestin
cn u plzz add me 2 ur pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
#17
I missed 2 parts in the blink of an eye😆

This isn't boring at all. I love it
Waiting for more

Yuks
Edited by queenyuks - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Love the story and its pace... Gimme more 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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This is really really wonderful.
You are showing a responsible and caring Ahem who is attracted to Gopi.
Keep on updating please.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I Love This So Far. 👏 You're Really Talented 😊 Glad Ahem Is Nice To Gopi In This.

Please Continue

Edited by Simz786 - 14 years ago

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