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Posted: 14 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: winter30

Just read all of your ff. It's really good. I love how caring your AHem is towards is gopi. He is so Thoughtful . Looking forward to the next update. 😊


thank you for liking the ff i wrote and yeah i know i wanted ahem to be more nicer in this becuz poor gopi deserves love i will update soon thanks😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan

loved this caring aham...


thanks lol i didnt even know i made him caring i just write thats all i wish ahem was like this with gopi 😔
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43
hey friends exam is finally over now hope you enjoy reading thanks
part 8

It has been a few days since ahem and Gopi is in the hotel yesterday they both went to spread the ashes and decided to go home after. They were in the minder their last day since Gopi wanted to do some praying to god. So ahem went along with her. They both went to pray and take blessing from the pundit who said may god bless your Jodi ahem and Gopi looked at each other but didn't say anything and took Prasad. They both went to the bus that day and went home. While on their way home someone in the bus was arguing with the bus driver who lost control of the bus and the bus swerved on the edge of the cliff ahem and gopi was on the edge of the bus both very scared and gopi crying saying oh god protect us. Ahem held gopi in his arms and said it sok nothing will happen don't worry he slowly went to the other side of the bus but couldn't since the bus was unbalanced. He wanted to get everybody out of the back before the bus would fall. He told everybody one by one I will push you guys to the other side so you can get out. He did as he said and pushed everybody slowly to the other side. Then it was him and gopi that was left. He held gopi's hand and said Gopi listen to me I want you to go and leave this bus I don't want you to get hurt again please go. Gopi said while crying no ahemji I cant leave you behind ahem was haking his head and said its ok just please leave. Gopi kept insisting and saying no ahemji I cant leave without you. ahem said gopi please leave and that's when Gopi screamed no ahemji I cant leave without I love you. ahem looked at her shocked and said very happily I love you too gopi. Sshe looked at him and said you love me he said yes I love you very much and I always have from the first day I met you I loved you.gopi couldn't help but hug him and oh what a hug it was they held each other for a minute and finally ahem released and held gopi's face in his hands and said yes I really love and want to marry you as soon as possible. Gopi got a blush in her face and said I know me too he loved how inncient and cute she was and hugged her. Then the bus was even more unbalanced. So ahem said listen gopi we both will go together to the other side and jump off the bus together. Gopi said ok ahemji they both slowly went to the other side of the bus and quickly jumped off before the bus fell off the cliff. Ahem and gopi hugged each other and ahem couldn't resisit so he kissed gopi gopi who couldn't help returned the kiss. They held each other like that for a minute and then quickly pulled away when they noticed people were watching. Gopi looked up and blushed smiling at ahem. Ahem was very excited and happy that he would be married very soon to Gopi. while thy were on their way home ahem held gopi and gopi just buried her face in his chest. Ahem and Gopi arrived home and were more than happy to discuss with Kokilla that they wanted to marry. Ahem knew his mom would say yes without even thinking about anything. They held each other's hands when they walked in. Kokilla saw them and went straight to give Gopi a hug she said jay shri Krishna maaji but Kokilla was happy that she was safe. Ahem was like mom I am here as well too Kokilla let go of Gopi and laughed saying sorry dikra I was just worried I am glad you both made it home safely. Ahem said yes mom I made sure Gopi was safe. Gopi smiled and said maaji I will be going to my room. Kokilla said ok beta go freshen up I will set up dinner. While Gopi went ahem pulled Kokilla by the side and said mom I want to tell you something. Kokiila said is everything ok ahem smiled and said yeah mom everything is fine. Mom I love gopi and I want to marry her. Kokilla stropped what she was doing and said what ahem dikra. He said yeah mom I love gopi very much I realized that I cant live without her I want to marry her.

let me know if i should still continue thanks love zozo😊


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Posted: 14 years ago
#44
hey guys please let me know if this ff is boring because i feel like it is 😊 thank you
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Posted: 14 years ago
#45
So will Koki agree for them to get married next?
Please continue.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
hey zozo
it's wonderful, lovely update
please continue.
and i hope kokila is going to say Yes and get them married soon.

-Pooja
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47
thank you friend and keep reading it gets interesting😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: swasthi

So will Koki agree for them to get married next?
Please continue.

i am posting next part read to find out thanks 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: Poojiebbz

hey zozo

it's wonderful, lovely update
please continue.
and i hope kokila is going to say Yes and get them married soon.

-Pooja

thnak you so much for liking the story keep reading to find out 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#50
hey guys here is part 9

Kokilla was so happy to hear that ahem finally admitted marrying gopi she wanted this all along but she was waiting for his response. When he finally admitted to her she just hugged him and smiled saying oh ahem dikra you made me so happy today because I wanted gopi as my daughter in law. Ahem just said mom thank you of approving of her I just knew you would. Kokilla said but we have to go ask her aunt don't we its part of the process. Ahem gave his mom a confused look and said there is no need for that they don't own her anymore. But Kokilla said ahem dikra it's not right let me talk to gopi and see what she says if she doesn't want to than we don't have to ok dikra. Ahem said ok mom whatever you're happy with and smiles. I will be in my room ok mom said ahem and Kokilla said ok dikra I will go talk to gopi. After setting up dinner Kokilla went to go talk to gopi and saw her cleaning her room. Kokilla said gopi beta I want to talk to you something very important. Gopi said ok maaji come in and sit down. Kokilla went and sit down with gopi on the bed and Kokilla said gopi beta ahem told me he wanted to marry you. Gopi looked scared and happy at the same time. Scared because she didn't know if Kokilla would approve of her because of her status and happy because she wanted to marry ahem too. Kokilla saw this look on her face and said don't worry beta I know you guys love each other and I can never take away that love by saying no to this marriage actually I wanted you to marry him because I see the love he has for you. Gopi's face lit up and she just hugged Kokilla crying saying oh maaji thank you so much Kokilla being shocked by this actions looked at gopi and said beta why would you think I would say no. gopi looked at her and was scared of telling her than said well maaji I thought that my family wasn't rich so I thought you wouldn't agree. Kokilla said I don't care about that and another thing about your family do you mind if we go to your aunt's house? Gopi just looked dumbfounded and thinking in her mind. Oh god what if they find out from my aunt what I am doing with them and what if my aunts tell the truth behind my secret. I love ahemji very much and I don't want to lose him. Oh gods help me I don't know what to do. Kokilla said gopi beta are you ok gopi snapped out of her thoughts and said I am fine maaji. Maaji I don't want you to go to my aunt's house because and she began crying saying I can't face them anymore. They hurt me so much I can't do it I can't face them anymore. Kokilla felt said seeing her future bahu like this and said its ok beta I understand we don't have to go and hugged her. Gopi said thank you maaji I am sorry. Kokilla said it's ok. Kokilla said how about this I will call the pundit tomorrow to fix your wedding date and in a few days will be your engagement. Gopi just looked happy but there was something else that was bothering her but she had to keep it a secret before it can ruin her relationship with her new family.

So friends how do you like it ? keep reading to find out what is Gopi's secret. Thanks for commenting and liking. Sorry no gohem scenes but no worries coming soon.

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