SS: Gopi's Ehsaas Last Part updated pg 56 - Page 34

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Posted: 14 years ago
Your story is actually amazing. I love it and I just can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter
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Posted: 14 years ago
I am at a loss of words to describe my feelings towards your ever so wonderful piece of writing..You have such awesome flair and exceptionally wonderful imagination and of course that beautiful hand to pen down a very captivating story..It is a pleasure to go by your updates and read and feel the emotions that you are trying to depict..

Okay, Rashi and Urmi are just devils, grrr hate the fact that they tried to harm Ahem..I hope Gopi doesn't run away from the house suddenly owing to such an incident in order to save her Ahemji...Argh! was so loving their moments until the duo intervened..

But you have me hooked...

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Posted: 14 years ago

awsome, its really a great part

pls punish urmi aand rashi severly

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Posted: 14 years ago
I loved the pace of the romance of Gohem. There is so much of warmth, tenderness and love. Ahem's appreciation of Gopi extended openly in front of all the family members with doing aarti and gifting a sari. How lovely those moments were.
Kinjal's apology to Gopi was needed as closure for Kinjal's sake and reaffirms Gopi's place in the family.
It was really sad to see Ahem attacked. Teej night is not even over too.
Hoping that good will win over evil soon.
Edited by swasthi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Oh...very well update Shilpaben!! Loved the way Ahem is caring for Gopi and their cute moments. Also, liked this Gopi who is using her brain and not just behaving dumb as in the show. Can't wait to read more.

Thank you for proving great updates and not stopping in between. Really appreciate your creativity and writing.👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
Please don't leave me hanging to long,I might fall to my death and you would not want that I am you biggest fan.
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi, I read all your parts at one go and it is awesome👏👏👏plz continue!
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Posted: 14 years ago
sorry for late comment
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice one yaar sorry for late comment
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: angelirebelli

I wish there was a *superlike* button to hit on Shilpa...


I couldn't believe what I was reading and had to go back again... WOW...How I wish we could see this on SNS !!! (TV18 of course or atleast a shirtless Aham 😆) . You did spice things up and not let the scene fade away...😆

U have all the makings of Judith Mcnaught , the only romantic author I ever liked...⭐️

Gosh, Ur Aham is such a tease... Aham in a powdered blue shirt..*drools* , thank you for dropping the hints I could connect with your story...😉😆 love the developments and the pace... too much happening which is fantastic..

Aham injured ... nahiiinnn esp after such a cute sequence...🥺 but I know things will move ahead and its all for the best...😊

I hate Rashi, I do not want her anywhere near GoHam, I wish to see Urmila the wicked witch imprisoned. I so want GoHam to live in peace.

What an update.. can't wait the next installment... Yeh dil mange more...

P.S. - If I ever convert into an Aham fan Shilpa, which I am not at the moment and vehemently deny any evidence or proof of it, you know who is responsible for it...😉












Wow, you left me speechless with your review. My very own Angel on the forum. I have to give you all the credit for motivating me to continue writing.
As for JM, like I said I love her myself, she is an awesome writer.
Thank you for all your support and encouragement. I am glad you enjoyed the way I protrayed Ahem in the SS, lets face it, he will never behave like this with Gopi, so I will just imagine it.

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