SS: Gopi's Ehsaas Last Part updated pg 56

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winter30

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Posted: 14 years ago

#231

The story , just gets better and better , love it. Another fab update.Your Ahem is so mature senstive, unlike the TV Ahem who just throws tantrums lol

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swasthi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#232

Gopi returning to MM and the memories flooding back.

Old habits die hard for Rashi.

Koki there at every turn to protect Gopi.

Ahem, Ahem, Ahem now realising what it means to share Gopi but has unfinished business with Kinjal, it seems.

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-Nafisa-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#233

It was a little boring, but I suppose the next update will be spicier. But I understand it needed to be done, would have been nice if you included a fight in there, for example some fight with Urmila and Kinjal, or Kokila and Rashi, was too tame, at the doorway, afterall Kokila doesn't know the whole conspiracy of knowing UrShi arranged for the abduction of Gopi and GoHam are now pretending they don't know, so she could have lit into Rashi, as she normally does when she suspects foul play. But thats just me wanting some excitement.

But otherwise you have written the discovery of the necklace very well (with the card), what I like is the yearning of Aham to breach the distance between Gopi and himself, wanting to be with her alone as he was used to.

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Traxy101

@Traxy101

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#234

So lucky I found this update, I adore your story, I really do. You capture everything perfectly

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Rafeal

@Rafeal.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#235

This time i will write my own comment as no.2 decided to bash on.1. Btw i the FF is just awesome but you hurt me by making Koki torture my love

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@ShellJA

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#236

loved it shilpa! you're great at keeping story going...keeping fresh, interesting and exciting.

Thanks enjoyed every word!

More?

Please?

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known

@simi91

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Posted: 14 years ago

#237

dont yu bored us

i enjoy reading it

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ANJ4

@ANJ4

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+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#238

my favorite part is the necklace... Love the way you wroote that... How ahem feels... thanks

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art80

@art80

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#239

Awesome update Shilpaben. I am glad you updated. Loved the way Rashi is being noticed by Koki and the way Ahem is feeling to love, protect, and care for Gopi. And how can I forget the jealous Ahem😉. Totally in love with your story. Please update soon!!!!!