my firstff pt 12 pg 27 Conflicts and Complications

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soni4eva

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Posted: 14 years ago

#141

fanx 4 da update it was awsome as usual

cn u plzzz cont soon

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pihu rai

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Posted: 14 years ago

#142

good one dear, please update soon

looking forward to read more

thanks for the wonderful update

with love pihu

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swasthi

@swasthi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#143

What an update!!

Ahem is being portraited as an intense character. He felt cheated then showed his jealously. However he was burning with passion. Then he realised that he misunderstood her ...

Waiting eagerly for the next update!

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angelirebelli

@angelirebelli

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Posted: 14 years ago

#144

Wow.. Love the angry, jealous Aham... *drools*

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tvmylove

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Posted: 14 years ago

#145

well written dear... Loving it very much. Keep going

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winter30

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Posted: 14 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: shobi12500
very nice part

Thanks for the comment 😊

Originally posted by: sbp1971
Trouble in paradise already? I see Ahem needs to be brought down notch or two, and Gopi is just the person to do it. Great update.

I had to spice things up , lol . Yeah I think Ahem's ego is getting in the way . 😉

Originally posted by: simi91

Thanks for the cool comment and pics 😊

Originally posted by: pihu_rocks
good one dear, please update soon
looking forward to read more

thanks for the wonderful update

with love pihu

Thanks for the fab comment😊[

QUOTE=swasthi]What an update!!

Ahem is being portraited as an intense character. He felt cheated then showed his jealously. However he was burning with passion. Then he realised that he misunderstood her ...

Waiting eagerly for the next update!