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choti_rani

@choti_rani

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Wow you really do have an amazing talent for writing. This was absolutely wonderful. And I totally agree with Shilpa. Your Gopi is amazing and exactly how we want her to be. Amazing start. Please continue soon.

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chenling

@chenling

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

That was wonderful, I love the way you show Gopi thinking about every little thing. She clearly sees where she is and how it relates to Ahem and the rest of the family. You really let us get a chance to really understand her character. Fantastic and gripping, you really leave the reader wanting more. I can't wait for you to update.

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angelirebelli

@angelirebelli

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: queenyuks
Another chupi rustom on the forum!

Wow! Look at this! This is absolutely wonderful my love. So so wonderful
I loved reading every single word

And you told me once that you had no interest in writing. Huh. Lies!

I love a Gopi who actually thinks for herself and that's exactly what this Gopi is doing.
I love the self-education. I love the oblivious Ahem.

I can't wait to read more of this wonderful piece. Update soon!

Yuks

awww. thanx Yuks!! U r most kind...

No lies babes, just a very honest confession.. No chupi rustom as well, just wanted to give it a go... am skeptical even now though...

Edited by angelirebelli - 14 years ago

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angelirebelli

@angelirebelli

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: sbp1971
Oh Wow, this was a fabulous treat first thing this morning. You are a wonderful writer.

I just love, love, love your Gopi, this is how we all want see SNS Gopi, self reliant, not depended on anyone, especially Ahem.

Good job, keep going, update soon please.👍🏼

Thanx Shilpa !!! Just drawing inspiration from all you wonderful writers on the forum...

That is how I want Gopi to be as well.. I am tried of her being so trusting and lacking confidence.

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angelirebelli

@angelirebelli

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: shobi12500
really very nice eagerly waiting for next part

Thanx Shoaib !! 😊

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angelirebelli

@angelirebelli

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Poojiebbz
Hey it's very nice start, Thankss for this, and keep updating! Looking forward to read more of it.
😊
-Pooja

Thank You Pooja... I shall try to retain your interest...😊

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angelirebelli

@angelirebelli

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: sunshine33
This is a really fantastic spin to the story. Enjoyed reading a lot. Looking forward to more.

Thank You sunshine33 😊 Hope to keep your interest.

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angelirebelli

@angelirebelli

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Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: atop
Wow! I must say what a beautiful start..
It was really refreshing to delve into Gopi's mind and I am kinda in a trance reading this...You know what, many a times I have just happened think of such situation wherein Gopi thinks on her own and decides to learn things out..
Wonderfully penned and am looking forward for the next part..Please don't keep us waiting and update soon..

Luv atop

Thanx much atop, U are very generous... I find it really hard to connect to the SNS Gopi and like you wish really hard for some action from her end.. since it was not to be.. I decided to take matters in my own hands... 😉