FF-The shock of urmillas news 6TH PART UPDATED pg5

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Kavita 'H-Dhami's Gharwali' Devi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Nafisa_blossoms
Brilliant best part so far, you are really funny, that romancing of Kokila and Parag, Rashi's BB ding ding ra ra ra, Dhawal to Kinjal "again...this time it's not that Umang's right" you had me in stitches by that stage...very good...just what was required on this quiet Sunday.

⭐️(Here have 5 stars).

Thanks nafisa your comments just made my day :)

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: DreamSz

Thanks nafisa your comments just made my day :)

Also I think if Rashi controls her hormones and doesn't kill her kid...😆, Sonal should give her the baby to raise as she calls her own baby stupid and is a barrier to her settling down into marriage too or it could work the other way Rashi gets kicked out for killing her kid and Sonal marries Jigar.

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Kavita

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

Omg Im Speechless That Was Really Funny Rashi: Goodness Gracious Me ! What Is All This Omg That Was To Good i Just About Got Over It When She Said It To Urmilla

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Kavita 'H-Dhami's Gharwali' Devi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

recap sonal outside the modi bhavan with her son and a suitcase

Koki: jai shree krishna doctor ji did you leave something behind or is there something you need to tell me about my pregnant bahu rashi

Sonal aka Doctor: ji about your bahu she is going through a rare pregnancy case called 'stealmyman' and ill need to examine her carefully if you dont mind

Koki: yes thats all fine but why did you bring a baby i already have my husband in the house

Sonal: i will need to teach the patient about moodhood

Koki: RASHI ! come downstairs, (she curses her about her sleeping)

koki takes sonal up to rashi and jigars room

Morning

Ahem: gopi im taking you to the cinemas today stay ready ... ive just go to go to the office and check if jigar needs any help

Half asleep Rashi: Jigarji im in the mood for something really sour lets go to that new resturant

Jigar: rashi please be quiet for 2 minutes na i didnt sleep all night .. have you met the doctor?

Rashi: aaahhh ! jigarji i thought the baby doesnt come out until another nine months

Sonal: (comes out of the bathroom) nice to meet you mrs modi thats my son abhi on the bed (looks at jigar)

rashi confused

Jigar: rashi miss sonal is the doctor and she needs to keep an eye on you during your pregnancy

Rashi: uuuffttt ! another one here to do my post-mortem ... (puts her hands together) mummy please help me get rid of her

rashi and sonal talking in the driveway

Sonal: i need to tell you something about your careless husband

Rashi: no listen to me first doctor, what do you know about abortions

Sonal: abortions why?

Rashi: because ive made a huge mistake

Sonal no mrs modi i cant advise that. if you decide to have an abortion your life could be at risk

Rashi: arrrghh! my life just goes from bad to worse

koki filming on rashis phone once again

rashi comes and talks to koki

Rashi: khaki ji the doctor is advising me to have an abortion khaki ji please i dont want her in the house she has explained everything i need to know please khaki ji get rid of her

Koki: theek hai rashi if you think this is best for you and your baby i will see what i can do

Rashi: din ding da ra ra ding din mummy you really are looking over me .. what should i do with this baby mummy please get me out of this mess now your with your thakur ji tell him to send me a kalakari down

jigar gets to know abhi

(abhi is 1 years old)

Jigar: hello abhi, do you like your new house

Abhi: (starts to cry) are you my daddy ... mummy tells me stories she said my daddys a prince and lives in a big house

Jigar: (gets a tear in his eye) (like father like son) abhi listen i cant say anything right now but i promise you, your daddy will surely come and take you to his big house dont worry even your mummy will be happy and then you and your daddy will go and eat ice cream when everything works out

abhi has the cutest smile on his face and agrees with jigar .. rashi hears the convo and thinks she will give her baby another try just for jigar

jigar tries to persuade sonal

Jigar: sonal please just hear me out for a minute

Sonal: make it quick

Jigar: its not to late for abhi to realise who his father is .. i would do anything for you if you agree to let me adopt him (think before you speak)

Sonal: fine, sorted you take your worthless son but in return i want you to pay for my marriage and you have to be my slave for the rest of your life

(jigar thinks and thinks about it, he finally agrees)

Jigar: but how am i suppose to tell khaki ji and the rest of the family members about him

Sonal: your khaki ji as in that fatty .. dont worry about that i got it all sorted anyways your khaki ji is gunn a try and get rid iof me, so you need to stick up for me

Jigar: SONAL !, if you want to stay here you've got to treat the family with respect

Sonal: yeah yeah whatever slave

(jigar looks down in shame)

rashi insisits she goes to the funeral (only her and jigar go from the modi bhavan)

urmilla's funeral

... urmillas funeral is over everyone returns to jitu bhai's house

rashi is in puddles of tears and everyone is helpful, she goes into her mums room alone and sees the pictures of herself on the wall.. she starts taking them down

Rashi: only mummy hung these up, now that mummy isnt here no one else will treat them with respect and they will just get damaged especially with thats choti kaagri around

behind one of the pictures there is an adoption letter rashi starts to open it and thinks to herself this must be gopi's but why is it behind my picture ?

TO BE CONTINUED ...

Precap labour day for all three of the girls

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-Nafisa-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

Intriguing so Rashi is adopted and she was so loved...

I also want to know what Sonal wants with Jigar...to have him as her slave, is it money regularly like a blackmail deal, or she wants literally someone at her beck and call whenever she so chooses.

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Kavita

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

Aint Been On The Form In Quite A While But As Soon As I Logged On I Read Your FF Seems Like You Havent Updated It For Quite A Long Time Anyways Its Really Good HAHA Adoption Letter For Rashi Plse Update The Next Part Seems Intresting LABOUR DAY LOL

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Kavita 'H-Dhami's Gharwali' Devi

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Posted: 14 years ago

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recap rashi opening the adoption letter

on the letter: Rashi Rai (orphan) adopted to the guardians jitu shah and urmilla shah from today onwards rashi rai will be prenounced rashi shah (age: 1 years old) she will share all relationships with the shah family, gopi shah the only child of the shah family will have to accept rashi as her ben

rashi left heartbroken and in shock all of a sudden a hand touched her shoulder

Jigar: rashi come with me ... leave all this

in the car

Jigar: rashi i know your upset but i was thinking shall we go shopping we can shop for our new arrival aswell

Rashi didnt say anything

Jigar: and then we can go to the jewellers, i still owe you something for the valentine braclet you got me

Rashi: jigarji please take me home me and the baby need to rest

8 months later ...

midnight

Rashi: aaahhh goodness gracious me

Kinjal: dhawaaal get your oil

gopi: woh woh woh ahemji

(all three of them rushed to the hospital)

rashi gives birth to a baby girl

gopi gives birth to a baby girl

kinjal gives birth to a baby boy

kinjal lying on the hospital bed thinking about her sons future, she picks her son up and goes to gopis ward

Kinjal: i cant do this to bhai he's just found love

she goes to rashi's ward and swaps the babies

Guility Kinjal: im sorry my baby but i promise you. You will get a better life living in the modi bhavan trust me i know .. rashi will never be able to harm you because your mummy will always be looking out for you. (she takes rashis baby girl to her ward)

morning hetal comes back .. hetal and koki in the car on the way to the hospital

Koki: mota bhabbi my gopi vau will give the modi parivaar an heir (a son) .. rashi is good for nothing

Hetal: jaava de kokila .. im sure we will get good news from both the bahus

Koki: im sure i will get a son from my gopi vau and kinjal dikhri

Hetal: koki boys arent everything (a message for every woman)

Jigar asleep on a chair in rashis ward he wakes up looks at the baby boy (eyes fill with excitement) he picks up the baby and goes towards rashi he kisses her on the cheek and whispers "i love you"

rashi slowly wakes up and sees jigar talking to the baby she smiles and look up to the ceiling

Rashi: thank you mummy

Koki walks into gopis ward and sees gopi half dead lying on the bed, ahem snoring and the baby crying she picks her up and was dissapointed about the girl but then she remembers her own experience when she gave birth to kinjal

Kinjals ward

kinjal getting so many doubts in her head. but thinks shes done the best for her and her child, she looks at rashis baby and thinks oh great she looks exactly like fue (lol some of u probably guessed this recarnation)

the three girls get ready to come back to the modi bhavan, koki goes to check up on rashi before they go home

Koki: rashi mubarak hows the baby

Rashi: Thank you khakiji, yeah he's okay

Koki: HE!

Rashi: ji, its a boy

koki freezes

jitu bhai's house

kinjal and dhawal finally get home they share the great news with jitu bhai

Jitu Bhai: lakshmi ghai ah gai

Dhawal: kinjalji you go and freshen up

kinjal puts the baby on the bed and starts looking for her perfume and conditioner choti urmi aka baby starts to cry, kinjal looks at her. the baby is playing with kinjals perfume and conditioner kinjal goes to her... she does her famous eye popping

Kinjal: Dhawal !

TO BE CONTINUED

Edited by DreamSz - 14 years ago

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shobi12500

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Posted: 14 years ago

#28

waiting eagerly for next part

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-Nafisa-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#29

omg another funny update, reincarnation of Urmi in the daughter of Rashi, yes guaranteed laughter, the baby is already greedy, if you take anything away from it, it will cry, bulge it's eyes and twist it's mouth the other way.

Poor Kokila too much expectation from her Aham to give a son to Gopi, and Gopi on the bed half dead and Mr Selfish Aham snoring through the whole labour...I can just imagine the Saathiya being that unconcerned he'll be like my Mom will take care of the home stuff and I need to leave the hospital and go home to sleep as I have work tomorrow.

Great update Kav, waiting for the next part.

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Kavita

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Posted: 14 years ago

#30

Choti Urmi Is Going To Be A Laugh Man. I Liked The Concept Of Switching The Babies So Urmi Is Back And Rashi Seems Liked Shes Changed Her Ways The Update Was Well Good Keep It Up. I Think You Should Cut It Short With The Gohem Becuz They Get On My Nerves But I Like How You Try To Capture Every Character And Theres Bre Humor In It Which Is A Treat. If You Dont Mind Can You PM Me When You've Updated The Next Part Otherwise I Have To Keep Loggin On To See <------- Sorry For The Speech But I Just Loved Your FF Please Update Next Part Soon

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