FF-The shock of urmillas news 6TH PART UPDATED pg5 - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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i like the starting

do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: DreamSz



Omg Nafisa its as if you can read my mind im gunna have to change it slightly


🤣 no don't change it, it's going to be really funny, run with it.
Posted: 14 years ago
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Okayy 2nd part

recap rashi faints
jigar is shocked
Gopi: maa ji, ahemji
gopi and jigar are helping rashi up koki comes
Screaming Koki: GOPI BAHU STOP ! why are u risking your and your babies life for someone who takes you for granted
Koki: ahem dikhra call the doctor (ahem gives jigar a dirty look as if to say cant you even look after your wife)
the doctor comes with her hat and her back and she knocks on the door with a rat-a-tat-tat (sorry off subject) the doctor turns out to be sonal .. sonal and jigar have an eye to eye moment she checks rashi but keeps her eyes on jigar
Hesitating Sonal: congrats your wife is going to be a mother
jigars eyes fill with happiness
Koki: shabarsh rashi (sarcastically)
rashi is still unconisous,, gopi is over the moon .. ahem is like didnt her mum just die to much drama let me just get back to my gopi
jigar sees sonal to the door
Sonal: jigarji ... i mean jigar tell your wife congrats on my behalf and tell her being a mother is the greatest joy for a woman .. she is really lucky to have a husband like you after all you two did plan the marriage right
Jigar: no sonal it was nothing like that honestly if you would have just trusted me that could of been you
Sonal: yeah yeah whatever
Jigar: how do you know about being a mother?
Sonal: jigar well um um you know that um night when we went um to that hotel
Shocked Jigar: you mean its mine
Sonal: well
Jigar: why didnt you tell me .. get out of here ill phone you tomorrow please dont tell any of the family members
back to rashi and jigars room
rashi lying on the bed she regains her conisous jigar sits beside her
Jigar: are you feeling alright now? congrats rashi im really happy
rashi thinking why the hell is this low paided loser so happy i bet he had something to do with mummys accident
Jigar: rashi where are you lost? we need to make a lot of planning for this baby
Rashi: baby (she screams the Modi Bhavan down)
Ahem: what happened now?
morning
gopi looking in the mirror and surprised she hasnt got a baby bump yet ahem wraps his arms around her
Ahem: my pyaari biwi dont worry the babies in there
Gopi: ahemji promise me you wont make the baby a workaholic
Ahem: come on thats unfair...fine (he kisses her on her neck)
rashi in the kitchen all alone, she picks up a knife and points it towards her stomach
Rashi: baby, im still a baby myself ... mummy i want my mummy back (crying)
koki on rashi's phone filming rashis actions and her words
Koki: carry on rashi you loi peeni duffer !
TO BE CONTINUED ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#14
Oh My Gosh Rashi With A Knife And Koki Filiming .. Jigar Going To Be A Dad For The Second Time Plse Update Soon I Wanna Know Where This Is Going
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Posted: 14 years ago
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😆 😆 I can't stop laughing, what is Kokila's intention to throw Rashi out of the house when Rashi "miscarries" (that will be Rashi's story) but we can see she is intentionally wanting to loose the baby. Interesting and very funny, please continue soon.
Posted: 14 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: Nafisa_blossoms

😆😆I can't stop laughing, what is Kokila's intention to throw Rashi out of the house when Rashi "miscarries" (that will be Rashi's story) but we can see she is intentionally wanting to loose the baby. Interesting and very funny, please continue soon.



Thanks nafisa thank god u liked it .. Ill try and update the next part later on today :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nafisa_blossoms

I've had a naughty thought are you going to make Rashi give birth to her Mother? Reincarnation in the daughters womb?

hey that is what i was thinking ...with the teeth and her ugly face
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Posted: 14 years ago
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🤣very intersting!!!!!!!!!!
Posted: 14 years ago
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recap rashi pointing a knife to her stomach, koki filming
koki's room
parag thinking about when koki was pregnant he sets out to find his black crow (kokila)
Rashi: (her hands are shaking with the knife above her stomach) now or never ... hmm what would mummy say about this
Koki: rashi make a move already the battery is dying
parag comes towards the kitchen
Parag: oh there you are, what are you doing sneaking around
Koki: Duffer! why are you always hell bent on messing up my plans
Parag: koki come on, now remember what saasuma said about controlling your anger
Koki: just go and write another one of your kavitas (poems) because thats all your ovbiously good at ... you could of been on a business trip like mota bhai right now
Parag: why do you always want to get rid of me ... forget all that for a minute (puts his arms around her) and about writing another kavita dont worry about that i just wrote one about a 52 year old pregnant woman
Koki: you make me sick
Rashi: goodness gracious me! what is all this! kaagri romancing (she puts the knife in the sink and acts as if shes washing up) Din ding da ra ra din ding ( rashi's theme music)
jitu bhai's house preprations for the funeral
Kinjal: dhawal funerals arnt good for pregnant women
Dhawal: dont worry kinjalji i havent forced gopi or rashi ben to come
Kinjal: this gawar will never understand ... Dhawalji im pregnant!
Dhawal: again .. i mean this time it isnt umangs is it?
Kinjal: are you trying to mock me
Dhawal: no no kinjalji no congratulations and celebrations!
Gopi knitting clothes for the baby
Ahem: gopi darling how do you know if its a boy or a girl
Gopi: ahemji when a woman is pregnant she has a special connection with the baby
Ahem: okay i see, can you tell the baby to hurry up and come out
Gopi: ahemji whats the hurry?
Ahem: no nothing i just thought that maybe the baby might get lonely so we have to also think about its brothers and sisters
Gopi: (gets all shy) ahemji dont you have to got to the office today?
Ahem: no jigars doing my shifts all this week ... that means i get to spend more time with you
jigar in ahems cabin walking around in circles thinking weather he should call sonal or not
Jigar On The Phone: hello mummy rashi is pregnant ... how is the business trip going .. have you and papa been to the conference yet
Hetal: what! thats great news shall we come back early
Jigar: no, no i can handle everything ... you and papa just enjoy yourselves
Hetal: okay my baby is growing up ... dont trouble my bahu
Jigar: mom im not a baby im a father now
Hetal: ohhh
Jigar thinks about his parents and there happiness he decides to phone sonal
Jigar On The Phone: sonal are you okay?
Sonal: yeah everythings alright, now about this baby
Jigar: are you sure its mine
Sonal: yes im positive, your stupid son has restricted me from getting married ... look at your life your happily married
Jigar: my son you mean his an heir to the modi's
Sonal: yeah you idiot state the ovbious
Jigar: sonal !, lets just try and figure something out? how about i adopt him
Sonal: figure something out? (she cuts the phone call)
midnight at the modi bhavan door bell rings koki opens the door ... sonal waiting outside with her son and a suitcase
TO BE CONTINUED ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Brilliant best part so far, you are really funny, that romancing of Kokila and Parag, Rashi's BB ding ding ra ra ra, Dhawal to Kinjal "again...this time it's not that Umang's right" you had me in stitches by that stage...very good...just what was required on this quiet Sunday.

⭐️ (Here have 5 stars).

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