FF:Milan/part34(Last part!)-pg143 - Page 69

hi dr ... 1st of all let me start by apologizing for late comments 😉

as usual superb job ...

but if u want u can stay here"Kokila replied smiling understanding his intention -- love koki she is very very understanding ...i guess no one know Aham better than koki ... u did prove it in ur last update ...

wow urmila also wanted to stay wht the hell was she thinking she is losing it -- urmila should have brought along her husband too then she could also have stayed there ... and she could have asked koki's permission to stay back ...lol

if urmila had stayed back ... rashi will have no choice but to give her company ... poor jijar ... he would have gone nuts ... but wht crossed my mind was if gopi+Aham (they can provide each other company) , rasi+urmila +jijar (weird combination ) : lol

"Ahem gave his famous look to kinjal whereas gopi smiled" -- arre wa nice combination of words "famous look" ...

"Mota bhabhi some people can never change their behaviour" -- tht true and Aham is sweet the way he is ... initially Aham was obsessed about his mum but now obsessed about his wife ...

"Kinjal was deep in thought since gopi left and after looking into her bag again, she understood the matter and got a real shock." -- no dr kinjal isnt shocked i am ... why is she shock ... ok let me guess u would let us know in the next update ... hope so ...

"Ur husband wil eat me alive if he would come to know that i left u alone" -- yep when looking at how Aham has fell head over heels for Gopi he might eat anyone's head if anything i mean anything at all happens to her --- love his possessiveness

she is mine -- i would love to here this from Aham in sns -- atleast from his new found inner voice ..

rashi and jijar starting from the beginning --- great idea ... if a relationship is nt build on a strong foundation it is bound to perish sooner or later😃 --

wow ... gopi is so sweet and obedient ... acts on Aham's orders ... can't blame her .. after all if she doesnt listen to her Ahamji to whom will she listen ..😆 her world revolve around him ..

its my nature to snap -- i thought he would never admit

loved the cottage scene ... fyi i am still blushing ..

sweet Gopi , hot Aham + open balcony ( ... nice combination ) --- and to top it all it is raining (Gopi would have look good enough to eat for Aham) ... and the rest was bound to happen ... arre why did u stop 😉...

this make me wounder where do u get these ideas ... either u have one hell of an imagination , or u read a lot or 😉... wht ever the method is it is simply fab and i wish i wont be dreaming these scenes tonight😉 ...

nice scene btw rashi and jijar ... i makes me wounder ... rain is responsible for most of the thinks happening ... i never picture jijar as the fighting type but as they say love and adrenaline(fright) can make u do anything😉

"AHemji wat are u doing" "reharshel" "for what? "of the previous night" -- arre wa .. Aham and rehershel ... it should nt have been for rehershel to perform better tonight😉 ...

11.00 -- i thought they would never get up ...

omg ... at the rate urmila is grinding her teeth is might lose them soon ... poor witch she has totally lost it ...

Ahamjiju has officially become rashi's guardian angle .. three cheers for Aham ... anyways how could Aham ignore his sweet brother's request .. nt possible ... ( Jijar has quite intelligent or should i say u )EMOTIONAL ATYACHAR always work... after all the guy is related to Aham and of course our koki ...

time to pay back rashi ... poor Rashi ... she will probably nt know what hit her ...

omg fab ending ... love to see a possessive Gopi for a change ... if Rasi could manipulate her or rather, guide her to be possessive... as Gopi is too innocent and naive for tht ...

well looking forward for the next update

as usual .. u left me with lots and lots of questions ...

oh ur are planning to end it soon ... i hope u give us a fab ending ... and we dont expect any less from u 😉 ...

u can end milan as long as u promise to come back even with a better plot than milan ...

catch u around ...

- - badra

Originally posted by: 143badra

hi dr ... 1st of all let me start by apologizing for late comments 😉

as usual superb job ...

but if u want u can stay here"Kokila replied smiling understanding his intention -- love koki she is very very understanding ...i guess no one know Aham better than koki ... u did prove it in ur last update ...

wow urmila also wanted to stay wht the hell was she thinking she is losing it -- urmila should have brought along her husband too then she could also have stayed there ... and she could have asked koki's permission to stay back ...lol

if urmila had stayed back ... rashi will have no choice but to give her company ... poor jijar ... he would have gone nuts ... but wht crossed my mind was if gopi+Aham (they can provide each other company) , rasi+urmila +jijar (weird combination ) : lol

"Ahem gave his famous look to kinjal whereas gopi smiled" -- arre wa nice combination of words "famous look" ...

"Mota bhabhi some people can never change their behaviour" -- tht true and Aham is sweet the way he is ... initially Aham was obsessed about his mum but now obsessed about his wife ...

"Kinjal was deep in thought since gopi left and after looking into her bag again, she understood the matter and got a real shock." -- no dr kinjal isnt shocked i am ... why is she shock ... ok let me guess u would let us know in the next update ... hope so ...

"Ur husband wil eat me alive if he would come to know that i left u alone" -- yep when looking at how Aham has fell head over heels for Gopi he might eat anyone's head if anything i mean anything at all happens to her --- love his possessiveness

she is mine -- i would love to here this from Aham in sns -- atleast from his new found inner voice ..

rashi and jijar starting from the beginning --- great idea ... if a relationship is nt build on a strong foundation it is bound to perish sooner or later😃 --

wow ... gopi is so sweet and obedient ... acts on Aham's orders ... can't blame her .. after all if she doesnt listen to her Ahamji to whom will she listen ..😆 her world revolve around him ..

its my nature to snap -- i thought he would never admit

loved the cottage scene ... fyi i am still blushing ..

sweet Gopi , hot Aham + open balcony ( ... nice combination ) --- and to top it all it is raining (Gopi would have look good enough to eat for Aham) ... and the rest was bound to happen ... arre why did u stop 😉...

this make me wounder where do u get these ideas ... either u have one hell of an imagination , or u read a lot or 😉... wht ever the method is it is simply fab and i wish i wont be dreaming these scenes tonight😉 ...

nice scene btw rashi and jijar ... i makes me wounder ... rain is responsible for most of the thinks happening ... i never picture jijar as the fighting type but as they say love and adrenaline(fright) can make u do anything😉

"AHemji wat are u doing" "reharshel" "for what? "of the previous night" -- arre wa .. Aham and rehershel ... it should nt have been for rehershel to perform better tonight😉 ...

11.00 -- i thought they would never get up ...

omg ... at the rate urmila is grinding her teeth is might lose them soon ... poor witch she has totally lost it ...

Ahamjiju has officially become rashi's guardian angle .. three cheers for Aham ... anyways how could Aham ignore his sweet brother's request .. nt possible ... ( Jijar has quite intelligent or should i say u )EMOTIONAL ATYACHAR always work... after all the guy is related to Aham and of course our koki ...

time to pay back rashi ... poor Rashi ... she will probably nt know what hit her ...

omg fab ending ... love to see a possessive Gopi for a change ... if Rasi could manipulate her or rather, guide her to be possessive... as Gopi is too innocent and naive for tht ...

well looking forward for the next update

as usual .. u left me with lots and lots of questions ...

oh ur are planning to end it soon ... i hope u give us a fab ending ... and we dont expect any less from u 😉 ...

u can end milan as long as u promise to come back even with a better plot than milan ...

catch u around ...

- - badra

Originally posted by: fortuneprincess

wow! nice comment👏

thanx dr ... it was very sweet of u ... thanks again 😉

it means a lot😉

- - badra

Originally posted by: fortuneprincess

thank u... i have only one request please solve their misunderstandings as soon as possible.. i just want to read some nice romantic scenes like u write for goham and a good sr u just wrote for goham😳😳😳.. usually writers just ends it in two sentences. ...before u end this ff..

K no problem. I wil clear their misunderstandings soon, and i wil give u nice romantic moments during their honeymoon track and even try to insert some during the jelousy track too. Dont worry i wil eloborate their sr too,

Originally posted by: vaishali667

hey yaar read this last part this was just a fabulous part finally a great sr wow ! hope u dont stop writing ff hope u write next ff base on current tarck thank for wonderful ending

Thank u dear. Dont worry i have a lot of ffs planned already. I am experimenting with ur brains.😆

my next ff wil be different dear, the cvs are showing good track so dont want to interfere it. From now on wards i am planning my every ff differnt than the show, to keep viewers intrest.

If u want i wil plan on the current track too