FF: Dil Kyun Yeh Mera Part 5 pg 9

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Rafeal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#71

Nice update Hanni ben.. Jaldi se update karo, fans are waiting

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madhu_sridhar

@madhu_sridhar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#72

top class hanni😊..and if i might guess, somethin tells me gopi will massage his head....and about the bangles, i'm sure he's gonna have one hell of a time tryin 2 give it to gopi, considering he is anda (zero...kinjal style) in love...and.. this kinjal-ahem convo was unexpected..i was expectin a shoutin match but what i got was a very beautiful and mature scene...way to go gal...and plsssssss update fast....

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Ankita

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Posted: 14 years ago

#73

I bet Ahem will be blushing when he gives Gopi the bangles

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coolmimz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#74

Wow...I read ur fanfic from the start and I have to say it's amazing..waiting for Part 6

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Aradhna

@Anhdara13

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Posted: 14 years ago

#75

Read through your chapters for a second time - can I just say that I love Ahem's inner voice? It's so wonderfully sarcastic and witty and just plain brilliant.

And I love the redemption for Kinjal! Gopi's got two people in her corner who know what Urmila and Rashi are capable of, even if she doesn't know it yet. I cannot wait for more. And for GopiAhem interaction.