OS - ...And the cup slipped...(Completed)

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-scarlett-

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Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

awww... he didnt even notice the masala chai hahah

but i loved the reality added to it ...

great OS...need more of these frm ur creative mind

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Mridz

@Mridzy

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

@ Rubina - Always welcome Rubina, hope you enjoyed it

@ Nafisa - Yes,I completely agree - it is very annoying indeed

@ Shoaib - Thanks a lot

@ PDLIMA - Thank you so much for the kind words. I think the CVs drop hints here and there and leave it to the audience for imagining stuff. Which gives us writers ample scope to come up with stuff!! I'm glad you enjoyed my take on the tea scene.

@ sunshine - Continue? Thanks a lot! aw, I'd originally only planned it as an OS - but if something does strike, or if a later scene inspires me, I will definitely continue!!

@ 0711rokxoxo - Hey, thank you so much!

@ ALL - Thanks everyone for reading and leaving me with wonderful comments!

Thanks,

Mridhu

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upasana.diya

@upasana.diya

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

ohhh that was lovely Mridu....
please extend on this a bit more... don't stop here

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ANJ4

@ANJ4

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

This was great - going back to watch the scene again , so I can see what you said.

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Mridz

@Mridzy

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

@ Diya - Thank you so much, Diya!! I originally intended this to be just a one parter, but in case some other scene inspires me to write - I might continue - anyway, thanks for reading honey!

@ ANJ4 - Thanks! The actual scene may not show what i'd depicted here - I just put a spin on Aham's thoughts!!!!

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kavya

@Kavya.S

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

that was nice mridhu...could not ve put ahem's thoughts in a better way that was perfect

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Rafeal

@Rafeal.

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Gud one, Mridhu.. Really classy write up!

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ANJ4

@ANJ4

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Gopi is afraid of ahem - when she took the cup and saucer she was shaking no wonder she can function in his presents. poor girl. your up was very well done - you got into ahem's head, which i really like.

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neetusidhu

@neetusidhu

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#19

that was fantastic and provided us something to think about also it was nice to hear what aham actually thinks...if only it was also shown on the show

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Mridz

@Mridzy

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#20

@ kav - Thank you so much!

@ Jake - Thanks Jake, glad you enjoyed it

@ ANJ4 - Yes, I completely agree - Gopi was afraid, and nervous i think. But this one I wanted to only put a spin on Aham's thoughts. I'm glad you enjoyed it and thought it was good. Thanks

@ Neetu - Thanks. Yea, most of us here are saying the "if only" - we never get Aham's POV in the show! I'm glad you liked my small OS.