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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely shilpa....amazing goham moments....aham jaisa bachcha... poor gopi...she cant handle one ahem...imagine her trying to take care of two...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely Shilpa. read all the parts
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi everyone, here is the next part of the story, I know everyone is waiting eagerly to find out what happened next, sorry to make you wait so long.

Dear Friends, thanks for all the wonderful comments.


art 29

Few days later Elesh gave call to Ahem and told him he spoke with Kinjle on the phone, who told him everything. Elesh told Ahem, that he spoke with his family and had decided that he still wants to marry Kinjle, and they would like to come over and discuss the marriage date.

Ahem agrees with him and ask Elesh to bring his family over for dinner that night. Ahem goes to kitchen and informs the family that the Mehta's would like to come over and discuss the marriage date. Koki and Gopi gets happy hearing this and starts preparing for the dinner.

Rashi once again not around, she once again had made excuse to take her mom to the doctor.

Koki and Ahem finally confessed to rest of the family about Kinjle, they were shocked and disappointed in Kinjle.

Kinjle once again apologized to the family and Gopi, who forgave her so easily. The whole family seeing this decided they would not discuss it anymore and move forward with the wedding.

That night the Mehta's come over, everyone is greeted, Kinjle goes over to her in laws and takes their blessings, and apologize to them. Ketkiben said, at this age sometimes you make a mistake, but I believe you have a good heart, and like your bhabhi said you were just misguided, so it's ok. Ketki looks at Koki and says, what Gopi said to them made a big difference in their decision, and she should be proud of her DIL. Koki says thank you vevenji, I am very proud of her, and to share some more good news with you, I want to tell you our Gopi is pregnant with our first grandchild, we are so happy. The Mehta's congratulate Gopi and Ahem.

The family decides to have the wedding the following week. No one wanted to wait and give Urmi and Umang to come up with plans to ruin both Mehta and Modi name. Baa was worried as how they would get everything ready, but Jigar and Ahem assured her that they would take care of everything. Ahem had taken Jigar aside that day and told him what Rashi and Urmi were upto and for Jigar to keep an eye on Rashi to make sure she doesn't do anything.

After the Mehata's leave the family starts making plans for the next day and list for the invitation. They decide to let the sari shop and Jewler come to the house to shop for clothes and jewlery.

In GoHam room, Gopi was making lists of things she needed to do next day when Ahem came in the room, he asks her what are you doing?

She replies by saying making list of the groceries for the food that we will need for all the wedding festivities. He takes the list away from her and gently scolds her, I sent you up here to rest, not to work, and you need to leave all this, we will take care of it.

Gopi starts to argue but he stops her, No no arguments, do what I say, I want you and the baby healthy, no stressing over Kinjle and her family anymore, and you need to promise me you will take care of yourself first.

Gopi smiles, puts her hand on his cheek and says ok, I promise, if that will make you happy.

He takes her hand and kisses it, it will, now you have to go to sleep, we will be busy for next few days with wedding preparations and you need your rest.

Meanwhile Kinjle phone was taken from her and Umang was unaware of what was going on in the MM. He calls Urmi to find out and get back to him.

Urmi called Rashi the next day, who was shocked to learn that the wedding was moved up, but no one would tell her why, except for saying Mehta's wanted to take their DIL to their house as soon as possible, she tell Urmi this who calls Umang and tell him.

Umang and Urmi were left wondering why the fake Pregnancy report did not produce any results.

Umang was thinking now his plan to marry Kinjle and ruin Ahem and his family wont work, he had to do something else to ruin them. He was aware that Urmi had her own agenda to break the wedding, he had heard her talking to Rashi one day, telling her that she wanted her nephew to marry Kinjle so they could save Rashi's marriage. What Urmi did not know was that Umang was only using her to get information from MM.

While Umang was making plans to stop the wedding, Urmi was busy spreading rumors regarding Kinjle and the Modi family.

For the next few days everyone was busy preparing for the wedding. Rashi and Urmi were dumfounded and frustrated because no one would believe them about Kinjle and the Modi family, instead everyone was asking Urmi about Jigar and Rashi relationship.

Unknown to Urmi, Koki had help from her close friends to spread rumors about Rashi.

It was the day of the wedding, Modi parivar busy in all the last minute details, no one notice that Umang had managed to enter the Modi Bhaven is disguise, he figured he had nothing to loose. He was trying to get to Kinjles room but somone was always with her, so he decided to wait for the wedding to start.

After a while the Mehta's arrive, and everyone is greeted. After everyone is seated Panditji call Elesh to take the seat in the Mandap, and ask to bring Kinjle.

Koki sends Ahem to get Kinjle and Gopi.

As they are coming down, Gopi notices Umang, she didn't recognize him in his disguise, but the way he kept fidgeting, she was suspecious of him, she decided to keep an eye on him.

Then it was though everythin happened in slow motion, just as Kinjle was about to sit down, Umang pulls out a gun, Gopi notices first, Ahem at that point had also noticed.

Gopi quickly calls out Kinjles name and pushes her towards Elesh and the first bullet barley misses Gopi and Kinjle, they both moved quickly. Ahem moved to Gopi's side and took her behind the pillar, and told her to stay their and not move.

Meanwhile the guest were all scrambling around hearing the shots. Rest of the Modi's and Mehta's were moved to safe place by Jigar and Parag.

No one noticed where Urmi and Rashi went, and frankly no one cared.

Ahem signaled to Jigar to move behind Umang to take him down from the back, he also circled back and moved behind Umang.

Umang was busy looking to see where Ahem had gone and didn't notice him sneaking up on him.

Betweeen Ahem and Jigar they managed to take Umang down and take the gun away from him. Just then they hear the police sirens, one of the guest had call the police during all the commotion.

The Police took Umang away. Urmi and Rashi came out of their hiding place and started wailing like babies, but once again no one paid them any mind.

Ahem was looking around for Gopi, who had not come from behind the pillar he had left her at, he goes around and is shocked to see Gopi laying on the floor and not moving.

Ahem calls out Gopi's name, hearing him distressed the whole family move towards him and shocked to see Gopi on the floor.

Koki told Ahem to take her to the room while the doctor is called.

After about half hour, the doctor comes and checks Gopi and informs the family she was just fine, she had just fainted from all the stess and worry.

They considered postponing the wedding, but Mehtas insisted the wedding happen that day so the after two hours the wedding took place, this time without any incident.

Ok I think One more part, lets see what happens.


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Posted: 14 years ago
mind blowing shilpa behna. continue please.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Beautiful update and very well described..
yippeee Umang in jaaiiilll!!! And loved Urmshi fail ...
Aww... hope Gopi's alrite...
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Posted: 14 years ago
thank god nothing happened to gopi n kinjal............nice part
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi i'm new here, I love your FF, you have done an awesome job, update soon :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow, very dramatic and very lovely

Just one more part left? Too bad.

Waiting for it

Yuks
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Posted: 14 years ago

ff really good - update soon - and then write another one.

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Posted: 14 years ago
thanks for shearing shipa. i was really worring about but she is alright

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