GOHEM: The Love Story/pt22 pg18 updated - Page 7

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Another nice update! Thanks! I'm looking forward to tomorrow...
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Loved your updates! fabulous! looking forward to the next one.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wonderful... so emotional and romantic....
everyone is hell bent on making me cry happy tears.....
first Eesha and now you....

truely awesome update hun...
waiting for the next part

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Posted: 14 years ago
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chhhhhhhhhhhhhooooooooo chweeeeeeettttttttttttt update....
lovely......amazing....

next part plz
Posted: 14 years ago
#65
Aham wants something from Gopi? Woooots! Loved both parts! Thx!
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so much love and care towards Gopi, more than due with everything she has had to put up with, fabulous story Shilpa.


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Posted: 14 years ago
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You write so beautifully you took my breath away.. The last part was just wow.. Please continue soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks for all the wonderful comments, just watched today's epi, and I feel like killing this guy, it's going to take me a minute to calm down, but I promise to update soon.
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WintersBloom, love your profile picture, thank for all the great comments.
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Hi Friends, Shilpa here. This is my third attempt at update, sorry took so long, I kept hoping 7th's episode was a bad dream that either, Gopi or Kokila was having.

Gopi: puts the phone down and looks behind her.

Shruti: with a teasing smile and a sparkle in her eyes, so Jiju misses you already.

Gopi: Jiju? hmm.. You do know that he is your Rahul's older brother that makes him your Jethji (older brother in law) you have to call him bhai.

Shruti:oh, I don't think so!, seeing as you were my friend before I met Rahul and decided to marry him and you got married first, I will be calling him Jiju, besides I can't tease him if I treat him as my BIL.

Gopi: no one can win with you, with tears in her eyes, Shruti, I am so glad you came back into my life, you are very lucky for me.

Shruti: and you forgot about me.

Gopi: No its not that, so much has happened in my life since you left, especially in recent months, I had lost hope, besides I didn't think you would ever come back.

Shruti: I have waited for this moment for many years; I have missed you so much. Now no one can separate us, my parents have always felt bad that we could not take you with us, and they also wanted to return as soon as possible. No tell me what's wrong, why are you sad and afraid?

Gopi and Shruti: in conversation for long time. Gopi told her friend about the events of the past few months, that has brought her to this point.

Shruti: Don't worry now I am back and I will see to it that you get all the happiness in the world, but I have a felling that I won't have do much from what I just heard.

Gopi blushes and Shruti gives her a knowing look and winks at her.

Later in the day everyone is busy getting things ready for the big engagement ceremony and the party, making sure everyone was invited, caterers were booked. Made sure they booked someone to come to the house to mehndi for all the women in the house.

It was time for the men to come home from work. All dinner preparations are complete. Gopi in the kitchen seeing over last minute details. She hears Ahem coming and requesting him mom to send someone up with a cup of tea, he had a headache.

Gopi already anticipating make the tea.

Kokila: Gopi take tea up to Ahem

Gopi: JI maji

Gopi walks into their room and set the tea on the table. Ahem comes out of the bathroom with wet hair in casual pants and no shirt. Gopi flushing looks away quickly and starts straightening the room.

Ahem noticing Gopi's shyness, quietly goes to close and lock the door, and then walks up behind Gopi, who is bent over the table, stacking his files, and puts his arms around her tightly (soft romantic BG music).

Gopi: Surprised, stands up quickly and puts her hands on Ahem's arms, closes her eyes and whispers, Ahemji, What are you doing, someone will see.

Ahem: Kissing Gopi's neck, whispers back, no one can come in I locked the door.

Gopi: you have a headache, trying to move out of his arms.

Ahem: continuing to kiss her, that was just an excuse to get you up here sweetheart, I missed you so much today, did you miss me?

Gopi: little hesitantly says yes

Ahem: How much?

Gopi: still whispering, lost in his small kisses, a lot.

Ahem: Turns Gopi around in his arms, looks at her and waits for her to open her eyes, when she looks at him, he asks lovingly, Are you ok?, Did you rest and eat on time?

Gopi: Yes

Ahem hugs her tightly, they stay like that for a while, but then they become aware of each other and their bodies reactions to being so close to each other.

Ahem looks down at Gopi and softly gives her a kiss on the forehead (where she applies sindoor), then her closed eyes and both of her cheeks and pauses at her mouth.

Gopi feeling his heart beat increasing along with her own and his warm breath on her face opens her eyes and looks at him, waiting, anticipating what is coming next.

Ahem gives her a butterfly like soft kiss on her lips, both react as if they've been struck by lightening and the kiss quickly turns from gentle to passionate.

Gopi quickly loosing her inhibition kisses Ahem back with all the love she feels for him, she has been waiting for this moment for a long time.

Ahem also looses all of his senses as though nothing else in the world exists for them but just the two of them and their first kiss. He tightens his arms around Gopi and brings her closer to him, showing all the love he feels for her, because this was just not their first kiss, but the physical expression of the love they feel for each other.

Ok Friends, that's it for now, I don't want to interrupt the love birds jus yet, we should all go cool down, let me know if I needed to tone it down or censor it little bit. Thanks in advance. Another update soon.

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