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Posted: 14 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: ..anisha..

i just read ur ff.....its great
luved it how Kinjal took Gopi to Mumbai with her. so thoughtful of her.😊 n as for rashi, she deserves the divorce that Jigar is giving her🥱. serves her right. but wondering whats goin on in Urmi's mind.🤢

anyways, Diya ur ff is soooo cool. update soon😊



Thanks Anisha, for liking it... Urmila can hatch as many eggs as she want, but we don't know how many have chics in them... lolzzz
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Posted: 14 years ago
#52
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Originally posted by: upasana.diya



Thanks Anisha, for liking it... Urmila can hatch as many eggs as she want, but we don't know how many have chics in them... lolzzz



🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣


i hope all of them turn out to hav nothng in them😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53
Marking to read later....looks really good so far.

good work Diya!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54
Great update, Diya!! Good kalakari shown!! 😆!! Nice - now how will Urmila and her wonderful Raashi go shopping/spa etc. And it will be interesting to see how Urmila gets Raashi back to MM......Do continue soon!! Cheers!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#55
I really enjoyed your FF...very well written!!looking forward to reading some more!
Posted: 14 years ago
#56
Nice part. Loved it. But does koki noe about gopi?
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57
diya loved ur os...
i loved the change in kinjal... and her concern for Gopi... 👏
kalakaari again...

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Posted: 14 years ago
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@ diya-- wonderful narration...well written n an awesome plot........thoroughly enjoyed it.😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#59
Enjoyed it Diya.
Looking forward to more
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: lovtv

Marking to read later....looks really good so far.


good work Diya!



Thanks for liking it Kaaki....
Edited by upasana.diya - 14 years ago

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