SS:Bahara (GoHam) part-10 pg18 (end) jan 03 - Page 9

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Posted: 14 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: -tellyaddict-

kavya.....
that was chhhhooooooooooooo chwwweeeeetttttttttttttttttttttt and hot at the same time..............*closing my eyes and recalling the Good Night scene again*

loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu for this...
plz update next part soon...............



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Posted: 14 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: sujji0609

Awwwww so cute and adorable Kavya... the good night scene was hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm........... me day dreaming...!!! continue soon eagerly awaiting your next update...



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Originally posted by: babyblue352

Awe Ahem and Gopi are so adorable. Please update soon. Can't wait for the next part.


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Posted: 14 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: sam1903

woow just amazing update...

very cute bonding between Ahem and Gopi...
plzz continue it soon..



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Posted: 14 years ago
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kavya when are u going to update next part...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: -tellyaddict-

kavya when are u going to update next part...



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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: premeer4rever



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haila so fast u are ....cant wait to read it...
m just loving ur FF more than the show....thanx sweety..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: -tellyaddict-


haila so fast u are ....cant wait to read it...
m just loving ur FF more than the show....thanx sweety..



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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: premeer4rever



Thank you...😊
Glad u r liking it..
Now get ready for Christmas treat


hmmmmmmmmmmmm....m all set to get my X'Mas treat CVs are a waste but at least I hv such nice writers like u...
so....."fastening my seat belt and ready for the ride,Zoooooooooooooooooo"
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey everyone
MERRY CHRISTMAS..
hope u guys had loads of fun
n here i m to add more fun..
enjoy this one

PART-7

Next morning she got ready and went downstairs to help with preparations. Her eyes were searching for a glance of him everywhere but in vain.

She got to know from Jigar that he went somewhere due to small work assigned to him.

Gopi got disappointed. She spent the day helping Kokila and Hetal who didn't miss her frustration and exchanged knowing smiles.

It was evening and the mehendi rasam was about to start in an hour so Gopi went to get ready.

She took out a blue lehenga and got ready. She was looking stunning.

She came out of her room and bumped straight into Aham who was trying to adjust the dupatta of his sherwani'He left the cloth and caught Gopi who was about to fall.

Their eyes locked together sending each other signals that were looking awesome' He made her stand on her feet without shifting his eyes from hers from a second and then placed a quick kiss on her forehead.

Gopi looked at him shockingly while he gave her a ready to kill smirk and left from there. She was shocked to see such response from Aham.

She knew he loved her ever since she loved him as she exactly doesn't know when she started loving him. It was quite natural for them.

She met Urmila who told her to check whether the dancers and girls who put mehendi arrived. Gopi went downstairs and after confirming that everything was ready she turned but then she got bumped into someone again.

Needless to say it was Aham again'.He looked at her flashing ever so charming smile. She sensed that something was fishy as he was behaving abnormally.

She looked at him frowning. He quickly pecked her lips causing the frown to be replaced with a shock.

"You'll get your answers very soon dear'"

He closed her mouth before winking at her and leaving from there.

Her shock then replaced with a smile. She somehow felt sure that she'd get her answers today. She felt he'd finally let her know his feelings through his mouth and not through his heart as always.

She stood there smiling while Urmila came and asked her to check whether Kinjal was ready.

So, she went to Kinjal's room.. She saw Rashi and Kinjal chatting happily. As soon as she walked in they started singing'

Hoo tora saajan

Aayo tore desh

Gopi gave them a weird look. They started giggling.

"Guys will you just stop it'"

"Dekho toh Rashii'.saagai meri hai par kisike chehre se muskaan hatne ka naam hi nahin la raahi'" Kinjal nudged Rashi.

"Haan' aisa lag raha hai' jaise darkness mein bhi light hai' jaise raat mein bhi din ho'" Rashi added to which Kinjal added

"jaise chaaron aur phool hi phool ho'"

"Shut up guys' enough'.bohut hogaya' tum log chup rahoge ya mein yahaan se chale jaoun'"

Badli badra badla saavan

Badla jag ne bhes re

"Com'on Gopi' ab toh woh aagya na' ab bata bhi de usse'.. aur kitna intezaar karna padega hume'" Kinjal complained.

"Haan di'ab bas' mom dad ne aapko graduation ke liye unke ghar bhi bhej diya taaki aap dono ek doosre ek saath waqt bitaaye aur.. lekin aap dono' pyaar hote huye bhi aisa pretend karte ho jaise kuch hua hi nahin ho'" Rashi whined in

A smile appeared on Gopi's face recalling those days but she kept her face stern'.

"Arre' yeh kya zabardasti hai'" Gopi said angrily about to walk away.

"Rukh Gopi' ye sab chod' tujhe yaad haina' tumne dare chuna tha parson jab humne game khela lekin mom ke wajah se disturb hogaya' toh ab mein usse waste nahin karna chahthe'tumhe kuch karna hoga" Kinjal gave Gopi a naughty smile.

Gopi eyed Kinjal suspiciously.

"Tujhe apna dil ka haal'sab ke saamne bayaan karna hoga'. Sab ke samne' not to forget specially Aham'.." Kinjal winked at Gopi.

Kinjal and Rashi emotionally blackmailed her to play truth and dare with them and she couldn't help but give in. She never thought that the two devils would get her into this'

She sent daggers through her eyes to both them before stomping away angrily. Ignoring her looks, both the girls shared a hi-5.

She somehow felt Aham too was involved in this'If he wants her to let her feelings out then she would'.

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Tora saajan

Aayo tore desh

Elesh's family came and were given a warm welcome by the family. Kinjal was brought down by Gopi and Rashi and they got her seated while the music started. They were getting Mehendi done on their hands.

The lights dimmed off and there were forms of a group of girls ready to perform. Gopi started off.

Soyi soyi palkon pe chal ke

Meri sapno ki khidki pe aa gaya

Gopi went to Kinjal and pulled her into the center.

Aate jaate phir mere dil ke,

Inn haathon mein woh khat pakda gaya

Rashi then brought Elesh and placed his hand in Kinjal's.

Pyaar ka

Lafzon mein rang hai pyaar ka

Rashi and Gopi circled the couple along with others and danced around them'.

Bahara bahara

Hua dil pehli baar vee

Elesh let go Kinjal' hand and she joined Gopi and Rashi.

Bahara bahara

Ki chain to hua faraar vee

The three of them danced together enjoying the final moments of togetherness and also thinking about the love of their lives.

Bahara bahara

Hua dil pehli pehli baar vee

Gopi's eyes searched for Aham everywhere but couldn't find him. Kinjal and Rashi took her with them. The three of them resumed to get Mehendi done on their hands.

Ho tora saajan

Aayo tore desh

Badli badra badla saavan

Badla jag ne bhes re

Tora saajan

Aayo tore desh

The dancers continued dancing. Everyone was having fun. The lights suddenly went off but there was still faint light due to candles here and there. There was panic going on so Gopi started to sing'.

Woh kabhi dikhe zameen pe

Kabhi woh chaand pe

She closed her eyes thinking of Aham then she sensed something on her hand but didn't bother much'. Her eyes still remained closed''

Yeh nazar kahe use yahan

Main rakh loon baandh ke ek saans mein

She felt his breath close to her ear and then felt him kiss her cheek.

Dhadkano ke paas mein

Haan paas mein ghar banaye

Haye bhoole yeh jahan

Her heart raced as she felt him very near him and opened her eyes all of a sudden but she couldn't find anyone and then the lights turned on'. So she brushed off her thoughts thinking it was her dream.

Bahara bahara

Hua dil pehli baar vee

The girls danced in the centre pulling Rashi who danced along with them

Bahara bahara

Ki chain to hua faraar vee

Then it was the turn of Kinjal who circled Elesh dancing with the girls.

Bahara bahara

Hua dil pehli pehli baar vee

The girls came to Gopi standing on both sides beside her and then she lifted her head to see a clear image of his form looking dashing as ever but with a goofy smile on his face which added more charm to his features.

Preet mein tori Ore sawariya

Payal jaise chanke bijuriya

Cham cham naache tan pe badariya hoo O o OoO

He seemed to be extremely pleased with something which Gopi failed to understand. Before she could think about it much she was dragged to dance.

Baadaliya tu barse ganah

Barse ganah.

Barse ganah..

Barse ganah....

Circling around, Gopi got some mehendi on her lehenga so she went upstairs to wash it off so that it wouldn't stain. She thought of washing her hands off as the mehendi dried long back. She had washed her hands and then wiped with towel.

She was shocked to see the color of deep maroon even she had it jus for an hour or even less and upon closer inspection she noticed something or rather could make out something which made her rooted to ground.


So how was it?

Comment toh karna hi hoga for the long update😆

PRECAP

Abhi gaana katam nahi hua aur nahi Aham ka surprise 😉



Edited by premeer4rever - 14 years ago

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