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Posted: 14 years ago
#81
i would lik to read dis ff but i can't as i do not understand hindi....so pls if u culd write d rest in english i would really appreciate it......thanx.......da african
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Posted: 14 years ago
#82
Hey Kajal.. I just finished reading all the parts.. You are a really good writer hun.. Please continue soon..

Ps: if you add FF to the title name nobody will miss it.. Its just asuggestion.. Pls don't mind..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#83
no no yar.. but the name of my ff is tera honey laga hu....
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: saina01

Hey Kajal.. I just finished reading all the parts.. You are a really good writer hun.. Please continue soon..

Ps: if you add FF to the title name nobody will miss it.. Its just asuggestion.. Pls don't mind..



she means to say to put ur ff title name as ff:tera honey laga hu..
she just want u to add "ff" before d name
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Posted: 14 years ago
#85
Next Part-39

Scene start from when ahem is shocked😲 to listen from gopi these words... Gopi continues.....

Gopi says {sad Gopi BG Music start} "ahem ji mey janti ki aapney yeh shaadi kin haaloto mey ki... mey anpadh sahi lakin mujhe itna zarur pata hai ki jaha pyar na ho waha zindagi bahut mushkil ban jaati hai...mainey kabhi nahi chaha tha ki mey aapke khush na rehne ka kaaran banu... mey bi ek aam ladhki ki terha apnii aankho mey bahut saarey sapney lekar aayi thi....socha tha ki ab khushiya hi khushiya hi hogi lakin dukh hai ki picha nahi chodhta...😭

Ahem gopi ko dekhta hai aur dekhtey hi rehta hai... Ahem gopi ke pass jaata hai...Gopi ahem ko dekhti hai...{camera focus on ahem then gopi...}

Gopi try to say something...
ahem uske hontho pe ungli rakhtey huey kehta hai "shh shhh keh liya jo kehna tha tumney.... ab meri baat dhyan sey suno... ha thi meri kuch majburiya ki mujhe tumse shaadi karni padhi thi... mey kabhi tumarey sath is terha ka bartwav nahi karna chahta tha tumarey sath... lakin mey kya karta... tum khud socha ek padha likha insaan jiske pass sab kuch hai kisi cheez ki koi kami nahi hai... agar achank sab kuch khona padey... toh woh insaan kya karega.... agar kisi ko chunana padey toh kya karega woh insaan....jab ki dono sey hi woh pyar karta hai....? bolo gopi...tum kya karti agar meri jagah hoti....? kya galat kiya mainey agar apni maa ki pasand ko chun liya... jaanta hu ki mey is rishtey ko nahi nibha saka... tumari umeedo pe nahi khara uttar saka... lakin jab mauka den chaha toh tumney kya kiya.... chodh aayi mujhe... bolo.....

Gopi sees ahem and start crying and bend down on floor...😭... Ahem uske paas aata hai usey uper uthata hai...

Ahem says "mey is rishtey ko ek aur mauka dena chahta hu.....tumare us har adhurey sapney ko pura karna chahta hu gopi....."

Ahem sees gopi and hugs her tightly.....{saathiya saath nibhana title track start "satrangi mausam ho..."} Ahem gopi ke fore head pe kiss karta hai....Gopi gives smile with tears...

After 2 min

Ahem says "hmm ab kya aisey hi rehney ka irada hai...."
Gopi ek dam se ahem se dur hath jaati hai....
Ahem says "ab itna bi dur hatney ke liye nahi kaha tha... "

Ahem gopi ko phir sey hug kar leta hai.... Gopi bi ahem ko hug kar letii hai.... thodi der baad gopi ahem ko kehti hai ki woh mandir ja rahi hai.... Mandir mey woh kanha ji ke saamney hath jodhkar khadi prathna karti hai....

Gopi says "kahna ji aaj aapney apni is gopi ko zindagi ki saari khusiya de di.. aap ka laakh laakh dhayanvaad kanha ji... Aaj aapney meri bhakti ki laaj rakh le li... mujhe niraash nahi honey diya...."

Gopi gives smile aur woh mandir mey diya jalati hai... pichey kokila khadi hoti hai.. gopi kokila ko dekhti hai.....




Edited by stary_kajal - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#86
Update after a long time! nice updates! Finally Gopi speaks. Looking forward for more!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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GoHem finally opened up to each other.. I loved it.. Please continue soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#88
oyyyy... innna cute Gohem... more plzzz
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part-40

Scene start from Kokila is standing behind gopi'She gives smiles to gopi'Gopi comes to kokila and gopi touches her feet'Kokila gives blessings to gopi and hugs her'

Kokila says " aaj mey bahut khush hu gopi bahu, ahem ney tumhey apna kar meri pareshani ko kam kar diya, ab sab theek ho jayega😊."

Gopi gives smiles' and goes from there😊..."

In the drawing hall chirag and parag discussing Kinjal wedding venue.. Chirag and parag decides the budget and all that stuff....All of them gather...

Chirag says "humney soch liya hai, ki kinjal ki shaadi ke liye kya kya tayaari karni hai...."

Kokila says "lakin chirag bhai itni jaldi itni saari tayariya kaisey hogi.."

Gopi says "sab hojayega maaji aap chinta mat kijiye.."

Ahem says "ji mom, aur waisey bi jigar bi toh hai'hum dono sab milkar kar lengey'"

Jigar says "ji kaki ji'sab ho jayega'."

Kokila gives smiles........Kinjal listen this and get worried... Chirag says " hum card ke design select karna hai... toh mey designer ko bhejta hu..."

Kokila sees gopi... Kokila and hetal goes to kitchen... Gopi also comes along...

Kokila says "mota bhabi kyu na hum elesh ke maata aur pita ko aaj raat khaney pe bula le... umsey baatey bi ho jayegi aur hum shaadi ki bi baat karlengey...."

Hetal says "yeh bahut acha vichar hai koki...jaisa tum chaho...uney phone karke keh do... mey jigar ke papa ko phone kar deti ki woh jaldi aa jaaye...."

Kokila says "ji mota bhabi...."

Hetal says "arey koki mey toh tumsey kehna bhul gayi...kal karwa chauth hai...gopi aur rashi ka yeh pehala karwachauth hai... toh ghar mey khubh raunak rahegi...."

Kokila says "arey ha mota bhabi, dekhiye na mey bilkul bhul gayi thi..... humhey apni apni bahuo ke liye sargi ki thaal bi toh tayaar karni hai..."

Hetal says " ha koki sab kaam ho jayega... tum sargi ki tayari karo mey jigar ke papa ko ph karti hu...."

Kokila says to gopi "gopi bahu jao ahem ko bi keh do ki aaj office sey jaldi aa jaaye....."

Gopi feels shy.... she goes....

In Goahem room' ahem is getting ready for office..woh shishey ke saamney tayaar ho raha hota hai..Tabhi gopi aati hai'Ahem gopi ko dekhta hai'aur phir tayaar honey lag jaata hai'. Gopi ahem ke pass aati hai'

Gopi says {goahem music start}"suniye who maaji ne kaha hai ki aaj aap office sey jaldi aa jaaiye'..

Ahem says "kyu kuch kaam hai kya'."

Gopi says "woh aaj kinjal behan ke sasural sey yaha aaney waaley hai'."

Ahem says "hmm theek hai mey aa jaunga'.{gopi jaaney lagti hai}' acha suno' kya sirf maa chahti hai ki mey jaldi aau ya tum bi chahti ho'"

Gopi sharma kar jaaney lagti hai' Ahem uska hath pakad leta hai'Gopi ki back aur ahem uske pichey khada hai' Gopi apni aankhey band kar leti hai'.{goahem music start again}.Ahem gopi ko jathke sey apni taraf khichta hai'. Gopi ahem ko hug kar leti hai'Ahem gopi ki taraf dekhta hai'.

Ahem says "gopi kya hua'tumney jawab nahi diya' kya tum nahi chahti ki mey ghar jaldi aau'..hmm"

Gopi sees ahem and she was not able to say anything and she nods her head'.

Ahem sees this and leaves gopi'.Gopi runs away from there'Ahem smiles'.

In dining table everybody is sitting and having breakfast'Rashi also comes there'Kokila sees rashi and hetal also'

Hetal says "arey rashi beta ab tabiyat kaisi hai'.ab theek ho'."

Rashi says "mumiji ab mey theek hu'pehaley sey behtar hu'."

Kokila says "gopi aur rashi kal karwa chauth hai' aur is ghar mey yeh tumara pehala karwa chauth hai'. Toh tum log aaj sham ki pooja ki tayaari karo'.kokila says "chirag bhai kyu na hum kinjal ke sasural waalo ko bi aaj sham ki khaaney ka tayota de..shaadi ki baat pi ho jayegi'."

Ahem & jigar looks at gopi and rashi.. aur kinjal paani pi rahi hoti hai' achank sey shaadi ki baat sunkar khasney lagti hai' kokila & ahem sees kinjal..Kinjal looks here and there..

Chirag says "yeh sahi rahey ga koki tum ph karke unhey nimantran de do'chalo ahem aur jigar'."

Ahem,chirag and jigar goes to office...Kokila and hetal goes to kitchen for preparation'Kokila sees gopi as she can feel her happiness' Rashi is thinking "hey bhagwan yeh vrat ab kya nahi musibat hai'." Gopi goes to her room' along with rashi'

Kokila says "hetal bhabi aaj sham ko toh puja hai toh gopi aur rashi ke sath kinjal bi agar karva chauth ka vrat rakhey toh acha hoga..akhir elesh uska honey waala pati hai'."

Hetal says "saras chey {acha hai} koki'tum ph toh karke aao'"

Kokila says "ha mey phone karke aati hu, lakin mota bhabi rashi aur gopi ke liye saadiya bi toh khardni hogi na'toh elesh ke ghar ph karney ke sath saadi waaley ko bi phone kar deti hu'"

Hetal says "saaree waley ko mainey phone kar diya hai who bas abhi aata hi hoga'tum jao unhey phone kardo..mey baaki ka kaam kar deti hu'."

Kokia says "ji mota bhabi'."

In the mean time koki invites elesh parents for dinner and hetal do her work with mani'. Achank sey darwaazey ki ganti bajti hai' Mani darwaza kholti hai.. Darwazey pe urmila ben aur saree waala dono khadey hotey hai'Kokila aati hai'sees both of them...

Kokila says "arey urmilaben aap yaha woh bi is waqt...kya baat hai itni subah subah...acha acha rashi ki yaad aa rahi hogi na...aap bi na rashi ke bina ek min bi nahi reh sakti...."

Urmila ben sees kokila and makes faces😕...

Kokila sees devdar {saree wala}...and invites her to come in.... hetal, rashi and gopi comes...Rashi sees her mom and feel happy... saree waala sariya dikhata hai...Urmilaben itni achi aur baari sareeiya dekhakar shock ho jaati hai...😲..Kokila sees this and gets angry 😡..she sees hetal...Hetal signs her to calm down

Kokila says to devdar bhai "devadar bhai achi si saadiya dikhaiyee... humari bahuo ka pehala karwa chauth hai...koi kami nahi rehni chahiye...."

Devdar says "ji kokila ben sab bahut hi bari kaam wali sareeiya hai...aur aaj kal bahut bikh rahi hai..."

Kokila says "aao gopi bahu aur rashi bahu apney liye saree pasand karlo...."

Rashi and gopi comes and sees saree....

Gopi selects saree very beautiful saree "marron colour saree with golden embriodery on it.... and rashi pics red and silver embrodiery saree as she was also happy...Kokila and and hetal sees each other... Kokila goes to gopi and hetal goes to rashi...Both of them give jewellerey box to them...

Hetal says "yeh lo rashi beta yeh tumari saas ki taraf sey tumarey liye karwachauth ke beinth...."

Rashi opens it and sees it...uski aankhey fati ki fati reh jaati hai... a golden set....very beautiful.... Rashi says "mumji thank you yeh bahut sunder hai..she touches her feet and looks at her mother...."

Kokila sees this and give a big jewellery box to gopi... she says "gopi bahu tum is ghar ki badi bahu ho...is liye yeh meri taraf sey...Baa ne yeh hetal bhabi ko diya tha aur aaj mey tumhey de rahi hu...."

Rashi and her mom makes faces....😕

Gopi opens jewellery box it was a very beautiful diamond set.. very beautiful...

Rashi aur urmila ben ki aankhey fati ki fati reh jaati hai... they feel so 😡... gopi kokila ke pao chuti hai...Kokila kehti hai... chalo ab shaam ki tayari kartey hai.. she sees urmila ben..

kokila says "arey urmilla ben aapko toh jaana hoga, woh kya hai na aaj hum logo ko bahut kaam hai... aaur rashi ko bi bahut kaam karna hai..isliye aap kisi aur din mil jaaiye waisey bi aapka kya aap toh aati rehti hai.... theek hai jai sri krishna...."

Urmilaben gets confused and makes faces with folded hand looks at rashi and says "ahhh jai sri krishan...."


Edited by stary_kajal - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#90
lovely.... waiting for more from you

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