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kajal

@imkt

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#61

Next Part :

Ahem ghar aata hai... mani darwaza kholti hai... ahem mani sey puchata hai ki "gopi kaisi hai abhi"....{ oey hoey ahem bhai tussi grt ho }... Mani says " woh apney kamrey mey hai".... Ahem says " theek hai tum jao mey dekhta hu"... Gopi apney kamrey mey bed pe baithey baithey kuch soch rahi hoti hai".... Ahem kamrey mey aata hai....{ahem & gopi BG Music starts 👏} Gopi suko dekhti hai... Ahem says "gopi ab tabiyat kaisi hai tumari".... Gopi says "ji woh mey theek hu".....

Ahem apney kapdey badlney ke liye washroom chala jaata hai.... Ahem ka phone ring hota hai.... Gopi idher udher dekhti hai 😕.... phir phone ki taraf dekhti hai.... Gopi phone utha leti hai aur "hello bolti hai"... udher sey rashi bolti hai "ahem ji jaldi se hospital aa jaiye aur kaki ji aur mumji ko ghar le jaiye mey papa ke pass hospital mey rukti hu..... jigar ji bi merey sath yahi rukengey....."

Gopi ko jhtaka lag jaata hai😲.... woh bolti hai " rashi behan with {teary eyes 😭 }... Udher sey rashi { with smiley 😊face and her acting😆 drama} says " arey gopi tu, ahem ji kaha hai... dekh tu chinta mat kar papa theek hai unko kuch nahi hua hai.... Gopi says "rashi behan mamaji {ruktey ruktey 😭 teary voice} wooooh kkaaha kaaissey haaiiii.... Rashi says " dekh gopi mey keh rahi hu na kuch nahi hoga tu bas chup ho ja, chal mey phone rakhti hu"..... Rashi phone rakh deti hai aur kehti hai (rashi BG music starts}"ab dekhti hu ahem modi tum apni pyari gopi ko kaisey sambhaltey ho"......

rashi laughs.............

{this rashi is such a crap yar, abhi toh love story shuru bi nahi hui thi aur abhi sey yeh sab, apney bimar papa ka bi khayal nahi.... how rude...😡............}

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upasana.diya

@upasana.diya

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#62

wonderfully portrayed... loved your style.. keep the chapters rolling sweety... don't bother about SNS on TV... thats the one which is total nonsense... your story is far better

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kajal

@imkt

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#63

Next part"

Scene shuru hota hai raat ho chuki hai.... modi mansion mey gopi khidaki ke saamney khadi hai ..... kuch soch rahi hai.... Ahem nahakar bahar aata hai woh gopi ko khidaki bahar khada dekh towel bed pe rakhta hai ... aur uske pass jaata hai..... Gopi ki aankhey aansuo 😭 sey bhari padi hai bhari padi hai... Ahem kehta hai "gopi tum theek ho".... Gopi says " mey mey theek kaisey ho sakti hu, jiske sath zindagi itna bada mzak kar sakti hai, gopi ahem ke saamney mudati hai aur kehti hai "kyu har baar kanha ji mujhe roz ek nayi pariksha mey daal detey hai, kyu kyu {she cries with a heart😭} kyu kanha ji aakhir aisi kya kami reh gayi thi meri pooja mey aur meri bhakti mey jo aap mujhe roz nayi nayi parikshao mey daal detey hai, bachpan mey maa baap ka saaya chin liya, phir pati ka pyar nahi diya, ab jo mujhe dil se pyar kartey they merey mamaji unke sath bi aakhir kyu kanha ji".......

Ahem becomes shocked 😲 😲... Ahem says "gopi yeh tum kya keh rahi ho"...... Gopi says " kya mey jhooth bol rahi hu" {gopi sad music starts}.... kya chupana chahtey they mujse ki sab theek hai.... Abhi abhi rashi behan ka phone aaya tha agar mey phone nahi uthati toh aap toh mujhe boltey hi nahi.... aur mey yeh sochti rehti ki sab theek hu... Gopi ahem ke kurtey ka collar pakad leti hai aur kehti hai "aakhir kyu ahem ji aakhir kyu".... Ahem aur gopi ek dusrey ke bahut close hotey hai,,,, they both have a eye lock {how romantic❤️❤️❤️ } Ahem gopi jhukha hua seer uper uthata hai dheerey dheerey upar ki ore... Gopi ki aankhey ahem ki nazaro sey milti hai.......

ICU mey doctor bahar aatey hai.... sab doctor ki tarf dekhtey hai... Doctors kehtey hai " Sab theek hai jeetu bhai ab khatrey se bahar hai.... Sab chain ki saans letey hai.... Rashi doctore sey kehti hai "kya hum papa ko dekh saktey hai doctor sahab"... Doctors kehtey hai "abhi nahi thodi der baad aap unsey mil sakti hai"......

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kajal

@imkt

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#64

Hi friends'.......

Next Part:

Scene rashi ke ghar sey scene shuru hota hai.... Rashi, jigar aur

urmilaben jeetu bhai ko ambulance sey nichey utar tey hai..... Rashi

bolti hai "papa sambhal kar".... Jeeyu bhai "mey theek hu rashi

dikra".....😊..... Jeetu bhai ka balance bhigadata hai...... Urmila jaisey hi

sahara deney ki aagey badti hai.... Jeetu bhai usey hath bada kar rok

detey hai..... Rashi aur jigar jeetu bhai ki taraf dekhtey hai....👏👏👏.....

Jeetu bhai ghar pe aatey aur kursi pe baith jatey hai aur rashi ko

apney pass bulakar kehtey hai "rashi dikra tum humari iklauti beti ho

humney tujhe badey laad pyar sey paala hai, is ghar ki jitni parwah

humhey usey jayada tmhey bi hai.....👏..... Urmila ki taraf

gussey mey dekhtey huey 😡...... kehtey hai " isi aur ki wajah

se apna bhavisya aur is ghar ki izzat ko raastey pe mat aaney dena

dikhri"..... Urmila muh bana leti hai 😕...... Rashi kehti hai "ji

papa....."

Gopi sabke liye subah ka nashta banati hai.... Kokila kehti "ab humhey

baaki cheezey chodhkar kinjal ke lagaan ki tayari karni chahiye.....,

waisey bi ab jeetu bhai ki tabiyat bi theek hai.... Gopi udaas ho jati hai

😔... Ahem gopi ki taraf dekhta hai aur kokila sey kehta hai " maa, mey

soch raha tha ki mey gopi ko lekar bahar jau...."....{gopi ka BG MUSIC

shuru}... kokila gopi ki taraf dekhti hai "ha dikra leja gopi bahu ko..."

Achanak sey ghar mey rashi ki entry hoti hai aur kehti hai "waah gopi

waah yaha merey papa yani tumarey mamaji ki tabiyat kharab hai aur

tum yaha pe muskara rahi ho...."

Gopi is shocked to see rashi and happy also..............

Edited by stary_kajal - 14 years ago

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kajal

@imkt

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#65

Next Part:

Scene shuru hota hai gopi ahem ke sath janey ke liye taraiyar hoti hai aur sochti hai " kya yeh jo kuch bi ho raha hai aur sach hai ya mera sapna.... Kya ahem ji mujse sach mey pyar karney lagey hai ya phir unhoney haalato ke sath samjhota kar liya hai?...... Tabhi ahem aata hai "gopi chaley...".... Gopi ahem ko dekhti hai aur kehti hai "ji chaliye.............."

Gopi aur ahem nichey aatey hai sab dono ko dekhtey hai.....Hetal says to gopi "jeeti reh dikra aaj bahut dino ke baad tujhe khush dekha hai, kanhaji tumari is khushi ko aisey hi kayam rakhey.... isey kisi ki nazar na lagey...." Gopi gives smiles😃..... Ahem aur gopi jaatey hai... Rashi aur kinjal yeh sab dekhkar hairaan😲....

Ahem aur gopi gaadi mey beith tey hai.... Ahem gaadi start karta hai aur chalata hai.... Ab gaadi chal rahi hai.... {wow thandi thandi hawa chal rahi hai.... music chal raha hai....}... Music {" kitna pyar tumhe kartey hai aaj humhey malum hua.... feat..salman & neelam..👏}.. Raastey mey halki halki baarish shuru ho jaati hai.... Baarish ke chitey gopi ke chehrey pe girtey hai..... Gopi apna hath khidkee sey bahar nikali hai.... Gopi ahem ko kehti hai "suniye zara gaadi rokiye.... Ahem gaadi rok deta hai....Gopi gaadi sey bahar utarti hai aur baarish mey apney dono haath failakar baarish mey bheegti hai {song track shuru behney de mujhe behney de song from raavan}... Ahem chasma utarkar gaadi sey baarish mey bhegney lagta hai.....

Ahem ke kadam dheerey dheerey gopi ki taraf badtey hai.... {soundtrack bi aagey badh raha hai} Ahem gopi ki baaju dheerey sey apni taraf ghumata hai... Gopi {with 😊 smiling face} ahem ki taraf dekhti hai.... Ahem ka hath dheerey dheerey gopi ke chehrey ki taraf badta hai {gopi & ahem BG music starts} ..... Gopi ke kadam pichey hattey jaatey hai.... ahem aagey badta hai.... achank gopi pedh sey satt jati hai.....

Gopi aur ahem then have a eye lock............👏

{dear frnds i have tried to make the scene real one.... hope you will like it.... One request please do your comments.....😊}

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upasana.diya

@upasana.diya

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#66

sorry dear... was in my foulest mood yesterday, so couldn't catch up...
well if you just put the part no. and page no. in the title... i'll be able to track you better...

but your writing and style is spot on... thats why i don't mind searching... but it would be easy for all to read if you put part and page no. in title

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br2499

@br2499

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#67

Seriously!! Is this where you stop? Dont you realise we are on tenterhooks now? Please update my dear!

I salute to your writing skills. You are very good.👏

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kajal

@imkt

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#68

PAGE NO-10

Gopi aur ahem ki nazrey aap se mey takrati hai....❤️.... Gopi ahem ki taraf badta hai aur kehta hai ki "gopi".... Gopi Ahem ki taraf dekhti hai....{5 min}..... {ahem and gopi BG music starts😆}... Ahem says "gopi mujhe maaf kardo mainey tumhey samjhney mey bahut badi galati kardi... kya tum mujhe ek baar meri galti sudharney ka mauka de sakti ho"..... Gopi is shocked😲..... {ha ha 😆 kya gopi yahi toh sunana chahti thi na tum ki ahem wapas aa jaye, isike liye toh kanhaji sey duaey mangti thi....👏}..... Gopi ko kuch samaj nahi aata hai ki woh sapna dekh rahi hai ya sapna dekh rahi hai......

Kokila kinjal se kehti hai "dekho kinjal ab tumara lagan honey ja raha hai bahut kam din bachey hai isliye mey tumsey kuch kehna chahti hu jo har maa apni dikari ki shaadi sey pehali kehti hai.... dekho kinjal beta ab is ghar ke saath saath elesh ke ghar ki izzat ki bi ab tumpar zimedari hai, aisa koi kaam mat karna ki humari nazrey sharam sey nichey jhukh jaayey..... Saras shey na dikri..... kinjal muh bantey huey😔😒😒... kehti hai "ji maa".....

Rashi urmi se phone par baat kartey huey kehti hai "mumy aapko pata hai ahem ji us gopidi ko ghumaney ke liye bahar lekar gaye hai, aur ek mera bondhu pati jisko chaplusi karney sey fursat kaha {rashi dramaqueen roney ka natak kartey huey} kehti hai "mumy mey kya karu, humarey sarey plan chopat ho rahey hai".....

Urmilla says "mainey kaha tha na rashi beta woh waaris wali baat ab wahi baat hai tujhe wahi karna hoga, tabhi sab theek hoga.....

Rashi says "ji mumy".......

Edited by stary_kajal - 14 years ago

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kajal

@imkt

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#69

Page-10, Part-32

Rashi apni mumy sey kehti hai ki "ji mumy ab toh lagta hai ki bahut bada dhamaka karna hoga.... taki modi mehal ki rakshso😈 par andi tufaan gir jaye aur saarey jalkar rakh ho jaye......" Lakin jigar ji kahi koi shakh na ho jaye hum par.....".... Urmila {sounds beep} Rashi sey kuch kehti hai aur rashi gives a big smile😃......

Ahem gopi ka hath pakdta hai aur kehta hai "chalo gopi".... Tabhi achanak sey bijali gadakti hai aur gopi ahem ko kaskar pakad leti hai.... Ahem Gopi ko apni baaho mey kaskar pakad leta hai..... 😍.... Dono ko ek dusey ko dil ki dhakney sunai padti hai.... Gopi apni gardhan uper ki taraf uthati hai dkhti hai ahem usey dekh raha hai..... {kuch mintue tak woh dono ek dusrey ko aisey hi dekhtey rehtey hai}... Gopi usey jhatakey sey chodh deti hai....... aur mudhkar apna ghungat seer pe daal leti hai... gaadi mey jakar beth jaati hai............

Ahem is shocked to see this.....😲....

{yeh gopi bi paagal hai, jab ahem aaya uske pass toh doffer pichey hath gayi..... lakin gopi ne aisa kyu kiya?..... Rashi ke dimag mey kya chal raha hai?.... kya kinjal shaadi ko ho paayegi?..... What do u say my frnd?............ leave ur comment............}

Edited by stary_kajal - 14 years ago