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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part-41

In MM sab sham ke khaaney ki tayari kar rahey hotey hai.. Gopi aur rashi kitchen mey hotey hai'. Gopi kadhai mey kuch bana rahi hoti hai' Rashi palak kaat tahi hoti hai' usey gussa aa rha hota hai'

Rashi says "yek khaana banana bi musibat ka kaam hai' aur yaha dekho pehaley itney sarey log hai upper sey mehmaano ki bi kami nahi hai'."

Gopi says "nahi rashi behan aisi baat nahi hai.. aap hatiye mey kar deti hu'."

Rashi usey knife de deti hai' aur kehti hai. Saadi sey hawa maartey huey'"acha hai gopi tujhe ghar ka saara kaam aata hai tujhe na sahi par ha mujhe bahut badi madat mil jaati hai.. cha lab jaldi jaldi hath chala'"

Gopi nodes her head' Kokila comes and sees rashi'.Rashi sees kokila and she stands suddenly'

Kokila says " wah rashi bahu wah tumara koi jawab nahi hai'. Ek kaam kartey hai aaj sey tum khaana banana aur khaana khana band kardo ' tab tumari mushbit bi kam ho jayegi'kyu itni aalsi ho tum rashi'."

Rashi says "kaki ji who mey toh bas gopi ko samjha rahi thi ki khana bana chahiye bas..bbbas aur kuch nahi'."

Kokila says "acha chalo phir khaana bano jaldi seychalo chalo'."

Kokila goes from their and ask gopi what she had made in dinner'.

Kokila says "gopi bahu sari tayari ho gayi hai na'dekho koi kami nahi rehney chahiye' waisey khaney mey kya banaya hai'."

Gopi says " maaji aaj khaaney mey hum ney masala puri, khaman kakdi, lasaniya batata, toor daal, dal dhokali, daal parantha' chapatti'.aur meethey mey suji ka halwa'."

Kokila says "shabaash gopi bahu' "

Rashi makes face'.

In the night everyone is waiting for elesh parents'. Gopi is sitting on her bed while closing his eyes'. Ahem comes from office and sees gopi he puts his bag on sofa and come sits in front of gopi'He stares at gopi for half second' Tabhi mania a jaati aur darwaaza khat khati hai' Ahem khada ho jaata hai aur gopi bi jag jaati hai'.

Mani says "ahem bhai aapko aur gopi bhabi ko nichey bula rahey hai'"

Ahem says "theek hai hum aa rahey hai''"

Gopi looks at ahem' ahem gives smile'.

Gopi says "aap kab aaye'"

Ahem says "bas abhi aaya jab tum so rahi thi'."

Acha ab chalo jaldi sey mom humara intezar kar rahi hai'. Ahem and gopi comes down' everyone sees them including rashi'.Everyone come and sits for dinner..Gopi serves food with rashi'.

Elesh mother says "khaana bahut acha bana hai gopi bahu'."

Gopi gives smiles'. Rashi is upset ki sab gopi ki tariff kar rahey hai'. Everyone eats food and then everyone decides for kinjal wedding and the ceremony' elesh parents says ki aaj sey 2 din baad manganic aur 15 din baad shaadi theek hai' Kokila agrees with it' Ahem, jigar, gopi, rashi feels happy accept kinjal'.Kokila invites elesh parents for tomorrow karwachauth functions' They agree for that also' Elesh parents goes'.

Kokila says " chalo gopi bahu aur rashi bahu ab so jao'kal subah jaldi uthna aur ha tum dono sargi khaana mat bhulna'"

Gopi and rashi nodes head and go for sleeping'

In Gohem room"

Ahem bed pe beitha hota hai.. gopi room mey aati hai' darwaaza band karti hai..em looks at gopi' gopi side mey aakar beith jaati hai'Ahem gopi ki taraf dekhta hai aur usey apni taraf khichta hai' {gohem music starts la la lala}

Ahem says "gopi aaj khaana bahut acha bana tha' acha tumhey kal kya chahiye'"

Gopi says "ji kuch nahi... aap bas jaldi aa jaaiye ga office sey..."

Ahem looks at gopi and put her head on his chest and says " aa jaunga..acha ab so jao..kal jaldi uthna hai na'."

Gopi ahem ko apney itney pass pakar bahut kuch hoti hai'usey neend aa jaati hai.. ahem gopi ki tarf dekhta hai aur so jaata hai'

In Jigar-rashi room"

Rashi says "jigar ji subah toh jaldi uthna hoga'hey bhagwan mey kaisey jaldi uthungi.. aur phir vrat kaisey rakhungi'"

Jigar says "ohh rashi tum vrat sey dar rahi ho ya phir subah jaldi uthney sey'."

Rashi says "jigar ji yaha meri jaan nikal rahi hai aur aapko mazak suj raha hai'. Chaliye so jaaiye'mujhe neend aa rahi hai'she switch off lights'

Jigar sees rashi and he is shocked to see this,,,,

In morning 4 o clock

Gopi nahakar bahar nikalti hai aur tayaar hoti hai' Ahem so raha hota hai..gopi usey dekhte dekhtey tayaar hoti hai'Gopi puts navy blue sari' her hair are open' who dheerey sey darwaaza kholti hai aur mandir chali jaati hai.. jah pehaley sey kokila aur hetal pooja ki tayri kar rahey hotey hai'

Kokila says "arey gopi bahu rashi nahi aayi'"

Gopi sees here and there and nodes her head'

Kokila says "dekha mota bhabi aaj ke din bi late'yeh ladhki apni zimedari kab samjhegi'

Tabhi rashi bhagkar aati hai aur gopi, hetal aur kokila ki taraf dekhti hai..

Rashi says "soory mumji late ho gaya'."

Hetal says "koi baat nahi dikra'.Chalo pooja kartey hai'"

Sab log puja kartey hai aur karwachauth k katha padhtey hai aur apna apna vrat aarambh kartey hai'

Edited by stary_kajal - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#92

Next Part-42

In the secne everyone is sitting' Gopi is wearing maroon saree and she Is looking so cute and beautiful just like an angel' same as rashi but she is feeling hungry..All girls are sitting..Some are dancing'. Some ladies are standing' Childrens are going here and there..Mani is serving juice with other servants.. All gents are also standing there.. ahem is wearing light maroon sherwani' and jigar brown sherwani' botha are looking dashing..and ahem is staring at gopi and she is feeling shy..Sabko chand nikalney ka intezaar hai.. Tabhi ek ladhki kehti hai

A girl says "haey yeh chand kab niklega'. Kitna time laga raha hai..meri toh bukh ke marey jaan nikal rahi hai.."

Another girl says "sabra ka fal mitha hota hai'kyu gopi bhabi'."

Gopi smiles and nodes her head'. Suddenly girls says " gopi bhabi humney suna hai ki aap bahut acha gaana gaati hai..isi baat pe ek gaana sunaiye na'"

Gopi says "mey nahi nahi mujhe gaana nahi aata'"

Gopi feels shy..Ahem looks at gopi'. Hetal says "ga na dikra'" Kokila says "ha gopi bahu gao na' akhir sabko pata chaley ki tum kitna acha gaati ho'."

Rashi and urmila ben makes faces'. Gopi looks at ahem'Ahem nodes his head to sing a song'

A song start "hai meri saanso mey merey piya'." {a song from saink}

{music starts'.}

Ho oooooo hoo ooo

Hai meri saanso mey merey piya,

mainey piya sey vachan hai liya,-2

janamo janam tak sath rahegey

sukh chahey dukh ho milkey sahengey

{Gopi stands and looks at ahem'Ahem gives smile'.}

Hai meri saanso mey merey piya

mainey piya sey vachan hai liya {gopi goes to kinjal and puts her hands on her shoulder'.}

Music goes on her'.girls start dancing and ahem is smiling at gopi' Girls takes gopi to dance with them..Gopi start dancing and then Gopi looks at ahem'

Jab jab mujhe jeevan miley,

mujhko yahi saajan miley, {gopi eyes fills with tears..she looks at ahem}

Jab jab mujhe jeevan miley, mujhko yahi saajan miley, yeh zindagi unke liye, meri har khushi unke liye'.

Ghadi ghadi mera jiya kasam yahi khaye'

{gopi wipes her tear..gopi is standing in front of window'. Ahem can be seen from her side}

again the stanza repeats

Hai meri saanso mery piya, Mainey piya sey vachan hai liya hai,

janmo janam tak sath rahegey rahegey, Sukh chahey dukh ho milkey sahegey'.-2

2nd part of song

Meri dua mey ho asar, unko lagey meri umar,-2

Woh pass hai ya door hai is maang ka sindoor hai hai' Saanso ka yeh naata kabhi todha nahi jaaye'

Hai meri saanso mey merey piya, Mainey piya sey vachan hai liya-2 janmo janam tak sath rahegey, Sukh chahey dukh ho milkey sahegey'.-2

{Gopi remember when they both have took part in competition in garwa and ahem dance with him'.how both of them dancing}

Music goes on' sab gopi ki taraf dekhtey hai'. Kokila and hetal smiles at gopi' rashi makes faces along urmila ben..ahem amd jigar gives smile'. Suddenly

A girl says "chand nikal aaya chand aaya'."

Kokila says "everyone to gather in the garden for karwachuath pooja'."rashi, kinjal, gopi hetal and kokila brings their thaali' Sab ek sath line mey khadey hotey hai vertically'

Chirag-hetal, kokila-parag,ahem-gopi,jigar-rashi aur kinjal- elesh'.

Sab chand ko dekhtey hai aur jal arpit kartey hai'. Gopi chaalni sey chand ko dekhti hai aur phir ahem ko dekhti hai.. ahem gives her sweet smile and rashi bi jigar ko dekhti hai..so as hetal and kokila also do' Kinjal give fake smile'' Gopi ahem ke maathey pe tika lagaati hai' ahem gopi ko paani pilaata hai'same as jigar,parag to gopi, and elesh to kinjal' Gopi ahem ke pau chuti hai' lakin ahem chuney nahi deta' sab apna vrat kholtey hai'.

In MM everyone sits for dinner ahem gopi ke sath beithta hai.. rashi-jigar, hetal-chirag and kokila- parag, so as kinjal- elesh.. Ahem khaaney mey seyy roti ka tukada todta hai aur katori sey sabzi lagakar gopi ko khilaata hai' Gopi eats and smiles' Jigar also do the same as other also..Khaana khaney ke baad sab hall mey ekathey hotey hai aur kinjal ki shaadi ki baat kartey hai'

Chirag says "chalo bhai yeh rasam bi achey sey puri ho gayi'."

Kokila says "sambdan ji ab humhey kinjal aur elesh ki shaadi ki tayaari karni chahiye'"

Elesh mother says "ji bilkul humhey bi apni bahu ka intezaar hai'."

Kokila says "hum bas card ke samples dekhney waley hai aapke yaha bi bhijwa dengey' aapko jo pasand hoga aap uska chunaav kar lijyega'.."

Elesh mother says "ji bilkul'.she gives a diamond set to kinjal' and hugs her'. Then she says "acha hum chaltey hai mey aapko ph karungi kokila ji'"

Kokila says "ji jai shri krishan'."

Elesh parents also go and everyone looks so happy'

Edited by stary_kajal - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#93
Just finished reading the last two parts..loved them! Please write more GoHem scenes..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#94
Very nice GoHam scenes! update sooner!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Next Part-43

In this scene i m introducing one new face her name is saanjh roy { shruti seth}..
Woh chirag ke frnd ke beti hai sanjeev Roy....India pehali baar aa rahi hai..She will be staying in MM house....

Chirag says to hetal "hetal aaj merey bachpan ke dost ke beti sanjeev roy ki beti america sey yaha aa india aa rahi hai....aur woh yahi rahegi aur tumhey uska khaas khayal rakhna hai...kokila sey bi keh dena....humhey khatir dari mey koi kami nahi rakhni hai...."

Hetal says "ji... yeh wahi sanjeev hai jo college mey aapke sath padtey they..."
Chirag says "ha sanjeev dost kam aur bahi jayada hai mera..arey parag pe toh woh apni jaan chidhkata tha...."

Hetal gives smiles😊...

Hetal goes to kitchen and tell kokila about and sanjeev and his daughter coming to india from america... she will be staying here with us... Kokila gives smile😊.. She assure her to take care of everything.... In the dinning table every one is sitting and having breakfast... Chirag told about the saanj {shruti seth}...is coming fro america today in the evening....All of them get excited...

Ahem says😊 "arey kaka saanjh aa rahi hai...."
Kokila says "ha ahem saanj aa rahi hai...hum bachpan mey tum log kitna pareshan kartey they....aur tumari aur saanj ke sharatey hey kanhaji abhi tak mujhe yaad hai...."
Hetal 😊says "ha kokila yeh aur saanj subah sey shaam tak bas khelna khelna ur jigar chup chap sey beth kar dekhta tha...aur kehta tha😊 "maa ahem bhai ko bolo ki merey sth be kheley...."

Jigar laughs😆...Rashi aur gopi ek dusrey ki taraf dekhtey hai...and sees shockingly😲... Ahem thinks himself... hmm{gopi madam... ab saanjh aa rhi hai..tum mujse pyar karti ho...yeh mey tumarey muh sey kehwalunga....} Ahem smiles😊....
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Posted: 14 years ago
#96
are waaah... jealousy.... would love to see Gopi jealous...

comeon girl... update soon.. am dying for a jealous Gopi...
or would she rather say" go to the love of your life" lolzzzz
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Posted: 14 years ago
#97
Nice twist! Now eager to see what Gopi does!
Posted: 14 years ago
#98
Cont soon!!! Love the story.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow!!! very nice.i always look forward to read your ff...please update soon...can't wait to see jealous gopi.

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Posted: 14 years ago
Next Part-44

IN MM HOUSE:

EVERYONE IS WAITING FOR SANJH TO COME...JIGAR USEY LENEY GAYA HAI... HETAL AND KOKILA IS SITING IN DRAWING ROOM AND GOPI AND RASHI ARE IN KITCHEN...

KOKILA SAYS "MOTA BHABI ACHA HAI NA SANJH AA RAHI HAI.. KINJAL KA LAGAAN BI HAI AUR SHAADI BI...KITNEYSAALO KE BAAD MEY USEY DEKHUNGI..."
HETAL SMILES😊 AND SAYS "HA KOKILA TUM SAHI BOL RAHEY HAI..."

IN THE AIRPORT...
JIGAR IS WAITING FOR SANJH WITH THE NAME BOARD...SANJH COMES.. A GIRL IN A WHITE CHUDIDAAR KURTA LONG HAIR.... CAMERA IS FOCUS ON HER JHUMKA, THEN HER EYES AND HER SMILE....THEN HER FACE...ITS SANJH...{SHRUTI SETH}... SEES THE BOARD....COMES TO JIGAR...

SANJH SAYS "TUM KAUN HO AUR MEREY NAAM KA BOARD LEKAR KYU KHADEY HO...AHEM KAHA HAI...."
JIGAR SAYS "AREY MOTI MEY JIGAR PEHCHANA NAHI..."
SANJH SAYS "JIGARR TUM...{SHE HUGS HIM}.. KAISEY HO... HEY U LOOK SO DASHING YAR....AHEM KAHA HAI... AUR HETAL KAKI AUR KOKILA KAKI?... AHEM KYU NAHI AAYA MUJHE LENEY?
JIGAR SAYS "AREY BAS BAS EK SAANS MEY ITNEY SAREY SAWAAL.. CHALP GHAR PE SAB TUMARA INTEZAAR KAR RAHEY HAI... AUR HA AHEM BHAI BI...."
SANJH SAYS "OK CHALO..."

THEY SITS IN THE CAR AND MOVES TO MM HOUSE...
IN MM HOUSE:
HETAL AND KOKILA IS SITTING AND TALKING... TABHI KISI KI "KAKI" CHILANEY KI AWAAZ AATI HAI... KOKILA AND HETAL HEARD THIS AND SMILES....😊..
KOKILA SAYS "LAGTA HAI TOOFAN MAIL AA GAYI..."

SAANJH COMES RUNNING TO HALL AND GOES TO KOKILA AND HETAL AUR DONO KO GHUMA DETI HAI KAKI KAKI KEHTEY HUEY...
KOKILA AND HETAL SMILES {THREE OF THEM ARE PLAYING LIKE A CHILDREN... "RINGA RINGA"}...
KOKILA AND HETAL HUGS SANJH...
HETAL SAYS 'KAISI HAI DIKRA... BACHPAN KI AADAT GAYI NAHI ABHI TAK TERI..."
KOKILA SAYS "HA MOTA BHABI BILKUL SAHI BOL RAHI HAI..."
SANJH SAYS "KYU NA KARU SHARARAT AAKHIR HAQH BANTA HAI MERA.. KYU BAA SAHI KAHA NA MAINEY..."
BAA SAYS "BILKUL DIKRA..."

SAANJH GOES TO BAA AND TOUCHES HER FEET AND SHE SEES GOPI AND RASHI WHO WERE ALSO STANDING THERE...
SAANJH SAYS "YEH KAUN HAI KAKI..."
KOKILA SAYS "YEH DONO HUMARI BAHUEY HAI HUMARI... {KOKILA INTRODUCE BOTH OF THEM..} YEH GOPI HAI AHEM KI PATNI AUR YEH RASHI JIGAR KI PATNI..."
GOPI SMILES AND SAYS "JAI SHRI KRISHNA SAANJH BEN..."
SAANJH ALSO SMILES AND SAYS "JAI SHRI KRISHNA GOPI...TUM ABHUT PYARI HO...THEN SHE LOOKS AT RASHI..."
RASHI SAYS "HI I AM RASHI, PLEASURE TO MEET U..."{SHAKE HAND WITH SAANJH}
SAANJH SAYS "OHH MY MY PLEASURE TO MEET U TOO RASHI..."
SAANJH CONTINUES " WELL MANANA PADEGA JIGAR KI CHOICE KO KYA PATNI DHUND LEKAR AAYA HAI... SHE IS QUITE MODERN KAKI..."
HETAL SMILES AND KOKILA MAKES FACES😕... KOKILA SEES RASHI WITH ANGRY 😡 LOOKS...

KOKILA SAYS "CHALO SAANJH BETA TUM THAK GAYI HOGI..JAO JAKRA AARAM KARO MEY TUMARA NASHTA BHIJWATI HU...GOPI BAHU JAO SAANJH KO USKA KAMRA DIKHA DO..."
RASHI SAYS "AHH KAKI JI MEY DIKHA DETI HU NA WAISEY BI GOPI KO KHAANA BI TOH BANANA HAI...."
KOKILA 😡 SAYS "JISKO JO BOLA HAI WAHI KAREY AUR KHAANA TOH TUM BI BANA SAKTI HO NA RASHI BAHU... PHIR DIKAT KAHA HAII.. KHAANA TUM BANAO... SAMJHI GAYI NA..."
RASHI😕 SAYS "JI KAKI...."

TABHI AHEM, PARAG AUR JIGAR BI AA JAATEY HAI... SAANJH BHAGKAR PARAG AUR CHIRAG KE PAU CHUTI HAI AUR JAI SHRI KRISHNA KEHTI HAI... SHE SEES AHEM AND HUGS AHEM TIGHTLY....GOPI LOOKS AT AHEM... SHE DOESNT FEEL GUD AND BECOME SAD.. AHEM LOOKS AT GOPI AND SMILES...

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