New Fanfic With All Family P.24,Pg.14 - Page 8

just caught up! 😃
these episodes are very addicting and awesome!
love them......excellent job! 👏
plz continue 😊

loved the episode post new one soon

Great job farqan 😛 , waiting to read more 👏 👏 👏

i just caught up wit the episodes very nice and funny cuz of shubra and the milk man!!! 😆
cant wait for the next update!!

Part 20:

Narpat House:Saloni Enter,Ambika Come And Ask Saloni Where U Were?Neel Come Here And He Was Asking About U?Saloni Is Upset And Say I Was At Brijesh House.Saloni Goes After Telling This.Ambika Tell To Neel That Saloni Come Home😡.

Neel Office:Neel Say I Have To Go And Meet Saloni Now.He Goes😡.

Kunjan House:Shubra Goes And Meet The Milkman😆.The Milkman Say To Shubra Lets Run Away.Shubra Agree But She Say U Khow We Are Just Acting That We Love Each Other Don't Forget This!!😆.The Milkman Is Thinking I Am Sorry Shubra But I Love U And I Will Run Away With U Then U Can Never Come Back Here😆.Kunjan See Them.They Run Away.Kunjan Try To Stop Them But They Run Away😆.

Saloni Room:Saloni Still Can't Believe That It Was Neel😭.She Remember When Neel Was With Her Every Moment For Helping Her😭.Neel Enter And Saw That Saloni Is Crying,He Come Near And Ask Her What Happend?😡.Neel Ask What Yug Tell U About Me?Saloni Say I Din't Meet Him.....Neel Is Thinking That Saloni Is Lying Him.Neel Say Saloni Don't Lie I Khow U Meet Him😡.Saloni Shout And Say No!!!!!I Din't Meet Him Plzzz Leave Me Alone😡.Neel Agree And Goes,Saloni Keep Crying Just Because Of Neel😭😭.

Kunjan House:Kunjan Goes And Tell To Everybody That Shubra Run Away With The Milkman😆..Padma Is Thinking And Say Ohhh Thanks God!!!That Shubra Go Away From My Son Life!!!She Is Happy😡.Kunjan Say That I Will Find Shubra In Any Condition😆...He Call To The Police And Say To Find Shubra..

Brijesh House:Bhaboo Say I Can't Believe That Neel Seperated Nahar&Saloni😭He Was The Best Friend Of Saloni😭.Just Then Neel Enter,All Are Shocked To See Him.Bhaboo Say Why He Come Here..What He Want?Brijesh Say I Will Go And See😛.Brijesh Goes And Ask Him Why U Come Here?Get Out From Here.Brijesh Push Neel,And He Goes😆.Neel Is Thinking Why Brijesh Behave Like This With Me😉?Episode Ends On Neel Face.

haha,loved the episode plzz do post sooonnn

Originally posted by: Circut

Part 20:

Narpat House:Saloni Enter,Ambika Come And Ask Saloni Where U Were?Neel Come Here And He Was Asking About U?Saloni Is Upset And Say I Was At Brijesh House.Saloni Goes After Telling This.Ambika Tell To Neel That Saloni Come Home😡.

Neel Office:Neel Say I Have To Go And Meet Saloni Now.He Goes😡.

Kunjan House:Shubra Goes And Meet The Milkman😆.The Milkman Say To Shubra Lets Run Away.Shubra Agree But She Say U Khow We Are Just Acting That We Love Each Other Don't Forget This!!😆.The Milkman Is Thinking I Am Sorry Shubra But I Love U And I Will Run Away With U Then U Can Never Come Back Here😆.Kunjan See Them.They Run Away.Kunjan Try To Stop Them But They Run Away😆. the way we predicted but instead in the show it was in ur fan fic!!🤣

Saloni Room:Saloni Still Can't Believe That It Was Neel😭.She Remember When Neel Was With Her Every Moment For Helping Her😭.Neel Enter And Saw That Saloni Is Crying,He Come Near And Ask Her What Happend?😡.Neel Ask What Yug Tell U About Me?Saloni Say I Din't Meet Him.....Neel Is Thinking That Saloni Is Lying Him.Neel Say Saloni Don't Lie I Khow U Meet Him😡.Saloni Shout And Say No!!!!!I Din't Meet Him Plzzz Leave Me Alone😡.Neel Agree And Goes,Saloni Keep Crying Just Because Of Neel😭😭.

Kunjan House:Kunjan Goes And Tell To Everybody That Shubra Run Away With The Milkman😆..Padma Is Thinking And Say Ohhh Thanks God!!!That Shubra Go Away From My Son Life!!!She Is Happy😡.Kunjan Say That I Will Find Shubra In Any Condition😆...He Call To The Police And Say To Find Shubra.. i wonder what kunjan is going to do!!

Brijesh House:Bhaboo Say I Can't Believe That Neel Seperated Nahar&Saloni😭He Was The Best Friend Of Saloni😭.Just Then Neel Enter,All Are Shocked To See Him.Bhaboo Say Why He Come Here..What He Want?Brijesh Say I Will Go And See😛.Brijesh Goes And Ask Him Why U Come Here?Get Out From Here.Brijesh Push Neel,And He Goes😆.Neel Is Thinking Why Brijesh Behave Like This With Me😉?Episode Ends On Neel Face.

good job circut like the runaway part that we made up!!😆

plzzz continue soon!!

Part 21:

Brijesh House:Neel Is Still Thinking Why Brijesh Behave Like This With Me?He Decide That He Will Go Again At Brijesh House..He Goes,Brijesh Was Going To Slap Neel,But He Stop His Hand And Ask Why Are U Behaving Like This With Me?Brijesh Was Going To Say But He Remember That He Will Not Tell That We Khow His Truth?Brijesh Say Get Out From Here And If U Come Back I Will Call The Police😆.Neel Goes....

Neel Office:Neel Still Can't Understand Why Brijesh Behave Like This With Me?😉.He Call Saloni But Saloni Refused To Pick😆.Neel Is Angry And Throw The Phone And Say I Will Find The Truth Why Saloni And Brijesh Family Are Behaving Like This With Me😡....

Saloni Room:Neel Enter Again😡And Ask To Saloni Why U Don't Pick My Phone..Saloni Say I Din't Hear That The Phone Was Ringing..Neel Say Stop Lying😡.Saloni Shout And Say Why Will I Lie To You,If U Don't Believe Me So Don't.Neel Is Very Very Angry About Saloni Behaviour And He Goes😛...Saloni Say I Am Sorry Neel That I Behave Like This With U I Have No Options.Episode Ends On Saloni Face.

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wow i really like these stories 😉

good job, & plz continue writing 😳

Part 22:

Kunjan House:The Police Enter At Kunjan House😆.The Inspector Say I Will Find Ur Wife In Any Condition,Just Give Me Her Pic..Kunjan Give Shubra Pic And Say I Want Her In 24 Hours Or U Will Lose Ur Job😉.The Inspector Say I Will Try My Best....He Goes..

Neel Office:Neel Say Saloni Why Are U Behaving Like This With Me??I Will Find It😡.He Call His Mans And Say To Keep Eyes On Saloni I Want Every Information,Where She Go,Whom She Meet?😡He Cut The Phone And Smile😡.

Road:The Milkman And Shubra Are Running😆.They Reach To A House.Shubra Ask Where We Come?The Milkman Say Its My House Don't Worry.Shubra Say Ok And Say Plzz Bring Some Water For Me?The Milkman Goes To Bring Water..After A Few Mins...The Milkman Say To Shubra Come And See My House..When Shubra And The Milkman Enter,The Milkman Shut The Door.Shubra Ask Him Why U Shut The Door.He Say Because No One Will See Us..Shubra Say What Do U Mean?The Milkman Say U Will Get In A Few Of Mins Just Wait..The Milkman Is Coming Closer To Shubra..Shubra Is Shocked Why He Is Coming Closer..Episode Ends On Shubra Face.

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