New Fanfic With All Family P.24,Pg.14

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Hi Guys,,,,

I Am Starting A New Fanfic

I Am Not That Good In A Writer Guys

So If U Don't Like It Forgive Me

Part 1:

Nahar Wake Up Early And Saw Saloni Is Bringing Tea For Him.Nahar Say I Have To Go Somewhere For 7 Days.Saloni Is Upset And Ask Where,Nahar Say Its None Of Ur Business.Neer Hear And Is Happy.When Saloni Come,Neel Ask Her What Happen.Saloni Say Nahar Is Going Somewhere And He Din't Tell Me,Did He Tell U Where He Is Going?Neel Say No.In The Dinning Table.Nahar Say To Everybody That He Is Going To London For Some Meeting,But Saloni Was Not In The Dinning Table,Bhaboo Ask Where She Is?Nahar Say I Don't Khow Where She Is And I Just Don't Wanted To Khow.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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ohh wow that's nice. i want to know why nahar is acting like that. it's suspenseful. please do continue. 😃
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Part 2:

It Start With Bhaboo And He Scold To Nahar That Why He Is Behaving Like This With Saloni!!!!.Nahar Is Angry And Goes In His Room.Bhaboo Say To Brijesh That We Need To Do Something To Bring Saloni And Nahar Togheter..Brijesh Agree.Neel In Her Office And Thinking About Saloni..Then He Call To His Mans And Say I Need Yug In Any Condition.Nahar Come To Devika House,Devika Ask Did U Need Something,Nahar Say Some Juice,Devika Goes To Bring A Juice And She Put The Sleeping Tablous.Nahar Drink And After 5 Min He Sleep.Devika Is Happy😔😔

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Posted: 19 years ago
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that was good
plzz continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Awesome job farqan! šŸ‘ U r a great writer, I can't wait to read the rest... pls continue soon! šŸ˜›
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Posted: 19 years ago
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very good try šŸ‘ ....

so please continue 😃 .....

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Thanx For The Reply Guys šŸ˜›

I Am Posting Part 3 Soon 😃
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Part 3:

It Start With Devika House,2-3 Hrs Ago And Nahar Is Still Sleeping.

At Brijesh House:The Phone Rings Its Nahar Friend,He Ask For Nahar And Brijesh Say That He Leave Before 2-3 Hrs And Nahar Friend Say He Did Not Come Here.Brijesh Is Shock......Nahar Friend Cut The Phone And Brijesh Tell To Everyone That Nahar Did Not Reach At His Friend House So Where Can He Be?Neel Is Also There And Think Where Can He Go??

Kunjan House:Chamki Bring Lunch For Kunjan,He Ask Where Is Shubra?Chamki Say That She Is With Piyush.Kunjan Get Angry And Throw Down The Food And He Say To Chamki That Go And Bring Shubra But Chamki Don't Tell To Shubra About This.Kunjan Wait For Shubra For 20 Min But She Did'nt Come.Kunjan Is Really Angry And Shout Shubra.......Where R U???😔Kunjan Goes Down And A Servant,Kunjan Ask Where Is Shubra,He Say She Gone To His Parents House.Kunjan Is Not Happy But Chamki And His Mother R Really Happy.😔Episode Ends On Kunjan Mother Face.

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Edited by Circut - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Very suspensful episode farqan, u r doing so good. šŸ‘ Can't wait to read further 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: mamis

Very suspensful episode farqan, u r doing so good. šŸ‘ Can't wait to read further 😊

Thanx For The Great Comment Kruthi A Big Hug For UšŸ¤—šŸ¤—

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