FanFic SAATHPHERE - Page 59

Nita will be our next writer and we have found one more new writer. That will be India9. 👏👏
So after Nita India9 will do the episode. I am so happy that Nita joined few weeks ago👏 👏now. India9 will be joining us.

Please post comments to encourage our writers as they put lots of efforts and time in to it.

Originally posted by: ramas

Nita will be our next writer and we have found one more new writer. That will be India9. 👏👏
So after Nita India9 will do the episode. I am so happy that Nita joined few weeks ago👏 👏now. India9 will be joining us.

Please post comments to encourage our writers as they put lots of efforts and time in to it.

welcome india9.... you will do a great job.....I am sure off it......

nita.... all the best.... and I am very sure now that khuskabri is on her/ his way.....

Welcome india9! I'm sure you'll do a great job. I'm glad you joined. I really enjoy writing and i'm sur so will you. You'll do great! Welcome!

Originally posted by: shali

welcome india9.... you will do a great job.....I am sure off it......

nita.... all the best.... and I am very sure now that khuskabri is on her/ his way.....

Thanks a lot. This episode will bring a lot more than just khuskabri but i hope i do a good job of writing it.

Originally posted by: 12234

Thanks a lot. This episode will bring a lot more than just khuskabri but i hope i do a good job of writing it.

dont worry you will do a great job.....

Originally posted by: shali

dont worry you will do a great job.....

Yes Nta you will do fine. One fantabulous episode is coming up from Nita the wonder writer. I can't wait.

Nita will be posting next episode today or tomorrow.

Actually here it is! Special thanks goes to Rakshadidi for helping me lots! Please be patient with me as I am not a 5-star writer. I tried my best and I really hope you all like it.

Thanks,
Nita



Brijesh: Doctorsa meri Tara ko kya ho gaya hai. Please dono ko bachalo. Ye bachcha hamara sapna hai.

Doctor: suniye Brijeshji. Situation bahut hi gambhir hai. Taraji kafi naazuk hai. Aap unko ghar leja sakte ho magar unke dekh bhaal acche se honi chaiye. Unka khub kyaal rakhna hoga.

Brijesh: Ji, Magar abhi to Tara aur hamara bachcha theek hai na?

Doctor: Abhi to theek hai aur theek rahenge magar unka pura khayal rakhna hai.

Brijesh: Thank you very much doctor.

They all go home and after a light snack all go to bed.
Nahar-Saloni's room

Both are in bed and Nahar is feeling Saloni's stomach.

Nahar: Hamara baccha tumhe tang kar raha hoga na?

Saloni: Aap jitna nahi.

Nahar: Achcha, to hum aapko kafi pareshan karte hai?

Saloni: ha lekin mujhe achhachha lagta hai.

Nahar kisses saloni.

Nahar: Tum bhi na, itni pagal aur pyaari ho, kya karu tumse?

Saloni: Pyaar.

Nahar: Arre, wo to karunga hi .
He starts kissing her passionately and lights dim.

Next day Tara is in bed trying to get up.

Brijesh: Arre Tara, tum kya kar rahi ho? Tumhe aaram ki zaroorat hai. Let jao, kya chahiye tumhe?

Tara: juice laa doge please?

Nahar pops his head in.

Nahar: Juice is coming up.

Brijesh: Thanks yaar. Aaj tum please zaara tara ka khyaal rakhna, office me kaafi important meeting hai varna mai ghar pe rahekar tara ka khayal rakhta.

Nahar: Nahi, Nahi bhaisa. Aap jaiye. Chinta mat kijye. Mai hoo na.

Brijesh: Thanks.

All day Nahar and bhabho run around for tara fulfilling her little desires and wants not even letting her get out of bed. Saloni on the other hand feels a little left out, lonely, and jealous.

Saloni: Nahar, zaara yahain aaye.

Nahar: Abhi nahi saloni, bhabhisa ko juice dena hai. Baad mei.

At night Saloni and Nahar are laying in bed. Saloni seems upset,

Nahar: kya baat hai Saloni?

Saloni: Mujhe tumse baat nahi karni.

Nahar: Maine kya kiya? Mujhese naraj ho kya?

Saloni: Aaj pura din mere samne dekha bhi nahi.

Nahar: Arre baba, bhaisa ne kaha tha ki bhabhisa ka kyaal rakhana.

Saloni: Wo to nahi kaha na ki apni biwi ko bhool jana.

Nahar: Kisi ko jalan ho rahi hai ki aaj ye high-demand ka nahar unke saath nahi rahe paya.

Saloni: jalan to hogi hi. Aapki biwi jo hu.

Nahar turns saloni around, raises her chin and looks into her eyes.

Nahar: Maaf bhi kardo na. Please. (puppy dog look)

Saloni: Theek hai, waise bhi hamare bacche ke ane ke baad mere paas aap ke liye koi time nahi hoga.

Nahar: Accha, humara baccha to daddy ka beta hoga.

Saloni: Dekhte hai.

Nahar: Baccha aane ke baad dekh liya jayega magar ab to dekhna ye hai ki tum Nahar ke pyaar se kaise bach ki bhagati ho.

Saloni: Kyun bhagungi? Mujhe to yahi rehna hai.

Nahar: I love you pyari patniji.

Lights also dim.

Next day Saloni, AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA.

Nahar: Kya hua?

Saloni grabs nahar's hands and says while gasping mujhe dard ho raha hai nahar.

Nahar: Chalo hospital.

All rush to hospital where saloni is rushed to delivery room.

Nahar: Doctor, kya ho raha hai? Saloni theek to hai? Humara baccha?

Doctor: Aapki wife ke case mai kuch complications hai, bachcha ulta ho gaya hai Abhi kuch kahe nahi sakte. Abhi cesarean karma padega. Situation kafi serious lagti hai

Nahar: Saloni theek to hogi? And after saying that he breaks down. Bhabho and aditi comforts him. All family members are in waiting room anxiously awaiting news.



Next writer will tell What will happen next? What will happen to Saloni? What about the child?

To be continued

Nita who says you are not a 5 star writer? Your comments are mind blowing. You are writing an excellent fanfic. 👏 👏 👏 Just few more episodes than you will see how well you can write.
I love your writing and enjoy it very much. 😛

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