FanFic SAATHPHERE - Page 33

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Posted: 19 years ago
Hi desi chic very well done.Gr8 episode. I would say creative mind thinks alike. You read my mind. Let's us see Muni gives Saloni a start of her career or not.
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Posted: 19 years ago
Desi chic that was soooooooooo good!!! great job! 👏.. I like how you add songs in it too! 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago


Guys plzz leave ur comments, if no one wants to read these FF's then there is no point for us in writing them.

About a month has passed since Saloni's disappearance. Nahar has given up all hope, he doesn't know what to do anymore. He has slipped into depression all he thinks abt now is Saloni.


SCENE 1

Ravi's home:

Saloni: (looking sad) Ek mahina ho gaya amar aur maine nahar ki shakal tak nahi dekhi.

Ravi: To kya tum us se milna chahti hu

Saloni: (is now weeping ) No I can't do that remember. Agar nahar ne mujhe dekhe liya to tum jante ho kya ho ga.

Ravi: Lekin mein tumhari ankho mein asoon nahi dekh sakta, tum ghar wapas kun nahi chale jati.

Saloni: Jab nahar ko mujh pe bharosa nahi hai to mein ghar kaise ja sakti hoon. Lekin unki mujhe bohot fikar ho rahi hai. I want to know if he is ok.

Ravi: hmm… ye kam mein kar sakta hun.

Saloni: kaise.

Ravi: I can go meet him, and I'll come back and tell u his hal chal.

Saloni: Nahi, agar unhe shak ho gaya to.

Ravi: don't worry leave that up to me. Mein apni bhen ke liye kuch bhi kar sakta hun.

Saloni: (Smiles and hugs ravi) thanks bhaiya, apne mere liye jitna kiya hai ut na to shayad, kisi ne nahi kiya.

Scene ends

SCENE 2

Ravi enters Nahar's office building. Nahar is sitting on his desk with his head covered with his hands. Ravi enters Nahar's office. The door closes on hearing the sound of the door nahar looks up, he is surprised to see Ravi.

Nahar: Ravi tum yahan.

Ravi: Haan wo mein ghar gaya tha so suna ke saloni ghar se gayab ho gai hai.

Nahar: (is shocked that Ravi is so calm while saying this he expected him to kill him the second he finds out abt saloni)

Ravi: Kya tumne saloni ko dhund ne ki koshi ki.

Nahar: haan meine use dhoodne ke bohot koshish ki, lekin pata nahi wo kahan chale gai hai(looks very sad now) Pata nahi is halat me wo kahan ghoom rahi ho gai ho gi. Why didn't I die when I said all those things to saloni.

Just then the phone rings.

Nahar goes to pick it up, his back is turned to Ravi.

Narpat: Nahar beta tum kal police ke pass gaye the saloni ke bare me kuch pata chala.

Nahar: Nahi, kuch pata nahi chala. Ap ne mujhe bataya kun nahi ke ravi Switzerland se wapas aa gaya hai

Narpat: Are bhai agaya hota to mein tumhe sub se pehle bata ta.

Nahar: to wo… use kaise pata chala ke saloni… uska matlab hai ke… (he abruptly turns around, to see Ravi, but he is too late and he is already gone) to narpat: mein apse bad mein baat karta hoon.

Nahar rushes outside his office. While Ravi is by the elevator he steps into the elevator. Nahar sees him but by the time he reaches the elevator it closes he rushes down the stairs. Ravi is now outside the office building. Nahar comes running from the stairs. Ravi seeing him hurries to the taxi. As he drives away in the taxi on the road Nahar hysterically runs after the taxi until it is too far for him to catch. He turns around and the lights of car Blind him!!! 😭😭

What happened to nahar?? Did he get into an accident?? Will saloni ever comeback to nahar even after hearing what Ravi has to say??
Keep reading and commenting to find out!!

i hope u guys like my smileys i thought it would make the sad episode a bit more cheerful😛


Edited by munizaaa - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
aawww such an amazing yet sad episode
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Guys plzz leave ur comments, if no one wants to read these FF's then there is no point for us in writing them. " 😭 mein houn naa 😆 jst me can do a lot 😉 i wait for ur updates and ur saying ur not gna do it anymore 😭 meanie 😆 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
great episode!!! sorry i hadn't been commenting...actually i had to catch up on a lot of the episodes today...i had my exams, so i wasn't comin online much...luv the smilies muni! 😊
Edited by anokhi19 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
you guys are great it was a very god episode... 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
sorry about not commenting. i had my final exams and other school stuff. But you all write these stories soo great.! i love them. KEEP GOING! 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
Lol thanks for the comments guys 😆 😆...Great epi muni!!the smileys were great too! I liked the one when nahar found out that Narpat didn't know that Ravi came back.
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Posted: 19 years ago
That was such an awesome update!! I hope Saloni comes back!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
wow! GREAT JOB! ppolz... I hab been lik wanting to post comments here but couldnt... DUNNO y.. and all of a sudden i finally GOT TO SIGN IN! thankz a million! newayz U GUYS ARE DOING A GREAT JOB! CANT WAIT TO SEE OR HEAR.. OR READ MORE ROMANTIC PARTS WIT SSALONI AND NAHAR... lolz... KEEP IT UP 👍🏼 AND doo update... I cant wait to FIND OUT MORE!

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