Saarrthi 'Kavya-Paheli' Contest!!! RESULT

hi people. i'm prachi😊

i had got gr8 response for my short poem in the "valentine's day" thread.😃 and tab se i was thnking of writing something on saarrthi.😳 so last night when i got bugged of economics (i was studying for my boards starting on 2nd), i started thinking and came up with this. hope u all like it. this is a "kavya-paheli contest". plz read the poem first and then the details-

Agar pyaar karna hota aasaan
Raahon par na hote aandhi-toofan
Judkar agar hum yun alag na hote
Na tadap judaai ki hum samajh paate

Bharam ab yeh toota, sanam mera choota
Waqt ne mujhse mera sab kuch loota
Rishte, pyaar, pehchaan, chehra

Kaash hota zindagi par mere
Pyaar ka pehra
Raahon par ab bhi sunati hawaayen woh daastaan har baar
__________________________ hai jisme beshumaar.

now, all u have to do is fill in the blank. to fill the blank here is a clue-

Bujho toh jaane-

har line ke pehle akshar ko jod
bhare kavita ka woh khali sthan.
Dhyaan rahe yeh hindi ki paheli hai
aur hindi ki "maatra", angrezi ke "vowels" ki saheli hai.

so now u all have the poem, the blank and the clue to fill in the blank. if u have any doubt plz ask me. and plz send me the answers by PM. the last date of entries is 5th of march. all the best, 😉i know its little difficult but if u shake ur head a little, i'm sure u'll get it😃

Prachi beautiful poem, i have sent u my entry.

Originally posted by: pinkykhan

Prachi beautiful poem, i have sent u my entry.

thank u soooooo much zahra😃.

i've already got 4 pms. those are from zahra, diya, preeti and vasu (psawyer). thanx for participating friends😊

wow! prachi beautiful poem 👏 ...sooooo heart touching...brought back memories for me as well 😭 😳 u shud really consider writing poerty as a profession 😉

cuming to the game...i understood the poem, i understood wat we hav to do, but i dnt understand the hint 😕 yaar meri hindi itni achi nahee hai...the vocab is so high muj jaisi toh haar jaya gi is contest mai...can u translate the hint if it doesnt ruin the contest rules...plsss 😳 otherwise i'll hav to hire a hindi specialist 😉 😆 i'll wait for ur reply n then submit my entry tho im already trying to crack my brain cells in understanding the hint...

once again beautiful poem 👏 n excellent game 👏 i enjoy challenges u c 😉

Originally posted by: rajeev4aamna

wow! prachi beautiful poem 👏 ...sooooo heart touching...brought back memories for me as well 😭 😳 u shud really consider writing poerty as a profession 😉

cuming to the game...i understood the poem, i understood wat we hav to do, but i dnt understand the hint 😕 yaar meri hindi itni achi nahee hai...the vocab is so high muj jaisi toh haar jaya gi is contest mai...can u translate the hint if it doesnt ruin the contest rules...plsss 😳 otherwise i'll hav to hire a hindi specialist 😉 😆 i'll wait for ur reply n then submit my entry tho im already trying to crack my brain cells in understanding the hint...

once again beautiful poem 👏 n excellent game 👏 i enjoy challenges u c 😉

first of all sooooooooo much for compliments.😳 really feels gr8 to be appreciated for the mehanat that i've done.😊

the hint means that u have to join the first letter of each line to make a phrase. and about "maatra" and vowels, so it means that every letter in incomplete without a vowel (in english) and without maatra (in hindi) for its pronunciation. i hope u understood.😊 all the best.

Originally posted by: iamdhol

first of all sooooooooo much for compliments.😳 really feels gr8 to be appreciated for the mehanat that i've done.😊

the hint means that u have to join the first letter of each line to make a phrase. and about "maatra" and vowels, so it means that every letter in incomplete without a vowel (in english) and without maatra (in hindi) for its pronunciation. i hope u understood.😊 all the best.

thnks a lot Prachi...one last question, will all the letters b used? or is that unanswerable--which is fair enough...i will crack my brains right now...its nighty night here so will do this only tonight...agur jawab nahin mila toh khwaab mai bhi i will b working on it only...lol...

Nice but difficult paheli , and requires a lot of effort.I will try mt best, and yeah the poem is very beautiful 😊 and goes straight to the heart.


MALEKA

Originally posted by: Lois_Lane

Nice but difficult paheli , and requires a lot of effort.I will try mt best, and yeah the poem is very beautiful 😊 and goes straight to the heart.


MALEKA

thank u sooooooooooooo much maleka😊

Hi everyone, here are the results.

first of the answers for those who couldn't get the answer-

Agar pyaar karna hota aasaan
Raahon par na hote aandhi-toofan
Judkar agar hum yun alag na hote
Na tadap judaai ki hum samajh paate

Bharam ab yeh toota, sanam mera choota
Waqt ne mujhse mera sab kuch loota
Rishte, pyaar, pehchaan, chehra

Kaash hota zindagi par mere
Pyaar ka pehra
Ra[/Bahon par ab bhi sunati hawaayen woh daastaan har baar
Arjun Bhavri ka Pyaar hai jisme beshumaar.

and the winners are Zahra, Diya, Preeti and Vasu. Congratulations to all of u. and this is for u all (thank u teesha for them)😊






thanks for participating. 😊

wow 👏 .
hey prachi call me anu if u wish so 😉.

would the winners have to use the beautiful tag 😛