suraj-manasvi or arjun-bhumi - Page 4

o no!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
how did i miss the words in blocks !!!!!!!!!!1
i think u'v gone a bit off the top ..... tumhari itni lovely story ke middle mein if i interrupt then every1here'll kill me !!!!!!!!!


chalo tumhe mujhe marwana hi hai na.......
ok. i'll write something. but ppl plz don kill me.....

i'm writing somethig now only. watever comes to my mind. but then u'll hav to post ur next part. immediately.. okay......

anu. this is for u only.. to make u continu the story. okay. u just hav to do that.... n promise me thats the first thing u'll do after reading this post.... els i'll find u (i think u live in my city only.. ) n i'll kill u on behalf of all others here who r also waiting for u to post the next part... n i'm serious too.....



okie.. here i go.. :

my scene for s-m :

i'll start with wat happened yesterday... the last scene with suraj reminding manasvi of satya...
manasvi sits in her room... n thinks.. she thinks abt suraj n wat he said.. n then abt satya.. n how alike their thughts r. then she remembers satya, their marriage, the good times they spent together... n then slowly n unknowingly she starts remembering her college days with suraj... she remembers how he always protected her.. n always understood her.. n her eyes fill up...

to herself : aaj kya se kya ho gaya suraj... kahan tum uss samay kitne khush rehte the. aur aaj tumhare chehre par mujhe mayusi aur lachari ke siva kuch nahi dikhta... tumhari duvidha ko main samajh sakti hoon... aur main tumhe apne parivar se door nahi jane dungi... kabhi nahi..

bhoomi n arjun were in their room... then manasvi came..
M : arjun.. maine tumse aj mrning mein hi request ki thi na ki suraj se jhagda mat karna... then why did u hav to tell him all that??
A : bhabhi... maine sirf sach kaha hai. wo sahi galat har samay kaka sheb ke parivar ka saath deta hai !!

M : wah arjun.. u forget things so easily?? bhoomi ko bachaya kisne tha?? tum logo ki first meeting mein tumhare liye vote suraj ne hi kiya tha na?? usne to tumhare liye bahut kuch kiya hai... but wat hav u given him??
A : bhabhi.. today ur shouting on me. for him??

M : arjun.. its not like that.. u hav to understand him.. he's just doing his duty.. to u .. as well as to yuv n kakasaheb.. they r the 1 who supported him in his bad times.. kya ab usse unka saath chod dena chahiye??
B : arjun... bhabhi sahi kah rahi hain..
Arjun remains quite..

M : i hope ab tum usse thoda izzat se baat karoge... u hav to remember that he is ur elder brothr..

n she walks out..

Arjun (thinking) bhabhi ne aj.. suraj ke liye mujhse ye sab kaha ... aisa kya rishta hai inke beech...
B (thinking) bhabhi aaj mujhe aisa laga hai ki aap hi suraj ji ko unki khushiyan wapas de sakti hain... u guys can complete each other...


okie...now......




WRITE ANU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

fine!!!!i'll be writing 1 in 2 mins.OK!!!!

Has arjun really started luving bhumi????i'll answer tht now!!!
here goes......
its 1mnth since arjun started feeling 4 bhavri(only a little)
mansen,mamaji n yuvraj have succesfully managed to oust arjun keshav from S-C but bhumi is still dere n is trying her best 2 get arjun back.
maenwhile yuv is making plans 2 get machines n throw out all workers.bhumi has completed da previous order n Mr.ahuja is very impressed wid her handwork.yuv gets machine butb/c bhumi wants da work 2 b done by wokers she leaves S-C.mr ahuja comes 2 give his 2nd order but when he cs tht deres no bhumi n deres no handwork he simply refuses 2 make a deal!!!he critcizes dem 4 deliberately thowing out bhumi n also tells dem tht de have 2 give her back her companu otherwise he can destroy thier company n reveal a lot of secrets which others don no!!!!
mansen has no choice but 2 agree 😡 he gives bhumi back her comp.den bhumi brings back arjun n keshav 2 S-C n to mansen's utter humiliation makes him MD.
uuuuuuufffffff dis 1 ws 2 long!!!!!i need sum rest.will post next part after sumtime(say 30 mins).sorry 4 not answering ques 😕

hres da next part......
4 the first time arjun feels tht all he is now is b/c of bhumi n he owes her a lot.he couldnot repay her in any other way but he could in 1 way.........(guess wht)
arjun came back home from office n straight away went 2 meet bhumi(hey bhumi cums back home long b4 arjun)
in da room.....
arjun-bhumi thnx
bhumi-isme thnx kehne ki kya baat hai.maine jo kiya apne pati ke liye kiya.
arjun-nahi main thnx isliye nahi keh raha hun
bhumi-to fir
arjun-thnx 4 cuming into my life😊 😊
bhumi-main samjhi nahi.tum kya keh rahe ho?????
arjun-agr tum mere sath nahin hoti to main kabhi is mukam par nahin khada hota.aaj tumne mere dil men apne liye khas jagah bana li hai.tum mere liye bohot special ho.main sabse jyada duniya men tumse pyar karta hun 😳
bhumi-wid tears 😭 kya kaha tumne!!
arjun-maine kaha "i luv u"
bhumi-starts crying,speechless just goes n hugs arjun n arjun2 hugs her.both luk so sweet!!!!!4 da first time arjun feels tht bhumi is his WIFE.........
howzaattttt!!!!

Originally posted by: pinkykhan

Good Idea Bisma.

A-B..... Restaurant scene where the waiter breaks the glass and Bhavri cuts her hand and Arjun takes her hand and sucks the blood while looking at her.

S-M ..... Though romance has not fully started, the scene which i liked very much was when Suraj was leaving HH after the check incident, Manasvi goes to stop him and he takes her hand in his and says i cannot refuse u.

its a ittefaaq pinky.those two scenes r my favourites as well😛

wow! anu good one ...plzzz continue .... 😊

thank u sooo much anu for continuing....i loved every bit of it and tunna urs was awesome also...u guyz rock 👏

thanks bismazaman........... but that was only to make anu dear write..
n anu........ both episodes were rocking!!!!!! 👏
really amazing !!!!!!!
plz write more naaaaa.........

ya bo the episodes r rocking 👏 👏 .superb anu