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Posted: 19 years ago
#61
gr8part sreya 👏
well done!!!!! 😉 😉
n abt the cable tell the operator to get star thru some other operator.. n tell him that all other operators hav done so n els u'll cut his connection... that shud work 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Mean while bhavri headed to goenkya manson………….arjun went to vicky's house n changed his dress n again went to college to pick his car…………in the meantime……..

IN GOENKYA HOUSE

Bhavri:- excuse me can I meet kk I mean mr. mansen goenkya……….

Arjun's mom:- aap kon…………….

Bhavri seeing arjun's dad……………

B:- uuuuunnnnnnncccclllleeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Arjun's dad:- arre guria tu kab aaayeee!!!!!!!!!!

(arjun's mom)a.m:- yeh humari guria hain…….kitni baari hoo gaye hain…aur sayani bhi, jaldi se koyi rajkumar dhondke iski saadi karwane padenge………………..aur bachpaan kii moti guria ab itni pretty lagrahi hain naa………..

b:- who!!! Chachhi app kuchhh jada hi tariff kar rahe hoon meri……neways kk kaha hain?? Aur yuv,shakti,vishakha,aur satya(in this story satya died for 4 yrs.) bhaiya……..haan satya bhaiya kii shaadi bhi hoon gayeeee hain naa…….kya naam hain meri bhabhi kaa……haan yaad aya………manasvi bhabhi….rite……

mansvi:-(eyes filled wid tears) tumhare bhaiya nahi rahe……….

B:- kya!!!!!!!!!!aisa nahi hoon sakte…………kaise aur kaab…..

M:- ab chodo iss baat ko………main toh kabhi tumse mili bhi nahi………par tumhare bare main sooni jaroor hoon…..

B:- I am soorrryy bhabhi!!!!!!!!!!!!11

M:- maine kaha naa………uski jaane kii gham toh hamesa rahegii par we have move on………….

B:- ( back into her bindass mood) waise paata hain raaste main ek psycho
Driver milli thi uskii bajase meri accident bhi hoon gayiiiiii

M;- choott toh jyada nahi hain naa………

Sooraj came down from stairs………..

B:- baisa yeh kon hain????

S:- hi !!!!!!!! I am sooraj ……….soorajkiran goenkya……..urs bro….

After arjun's mom explained everythings……….bhavri said…

B:- welcum to goenka's bhaiya…………..

B:- paar kk kaha hain………

From backward dramatically came maanseen goenka……

m.g:- main yaha hoon princess………….

B:- kk!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Yuv, sakti n every1 came to greet him n bhavri hugggin his kk……..just then dramatically entered arjun who thought that bhavri has gone………..

A:- main khana khake aaya hoon………..waise yahan kon si ceremony ho raha hain kya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

a.d(arjun's dad) :- nahi re nikamme!!!!!!!koi shushil ladkii ayii hain,

a:- shushil u mean behengi type ka………weeeu….arjun's babe kaab ayegi!!!!!!!!

a.d:- agar koi sanskari ho toh usse behengi nahi kaha jaatee, who aur job hi hain tere jaisa nahi hain…………..

a:- (in mind) kahi who aafat kii pulti ……I mean ms. Shardard bhi tak yehi hain kya!!!!!!!!!

Meanwhile bhavri heard that WORDS AND TURNED TO ARJUN………..
B:- ARRE DRIVER TUM ………..ITNI KAAMCHOOR HAIN NAA AUNTY KII POOCHO HI MAAT………..HEY U ……..MERI GADDI THIK HUYI KII NAHI………HAAN …….AGAR NAHI HUYI TOH PAISE NAHI MILLENGE…………….

YUV RAJ :- KYA BOL RAHE HOON BHOOMI!!!!!!!! HUMARI ARJUN TUMHARA DRIVER KAAB SE BANA……..I MEAN ARJUN SWITCHTO A JOB OF A DRIVER……….WOH ARJUN U R TOTAL SUFI MAN…………….

A:- YEH U PUNK!!!!!!!!!WATCH UR TOUNGUE HAAN……….U BLOODY DOOFUS………….

B:- HEY U DRIVER HO KE MERI BEST FRIEND KO GAALI DETE HOON………AUR KK APP ISSKI BAAT ABHI TAK SHUN RAHE HO. DHAKKE MAR KE GHAR SE NIKAL DO…………….U DRIVER!!!!!!!!!!

A.D:- NALAYAK!!!!!!!!!! TU NE DRIVER KII KAAM KARKE MERI REPUTATION KO MITTI ME MILA DOGE KYA!!!!!!!!!
M.G:- TUMHARI REPUTATION THI KAAB NEWAYS ARJUN TUM DRIVER KII JOB KAR KE MERI STATAUS KO NICHE KAR RAHE HOON..MY SON

B:- UNCLE MUJHE PAATA HAIN KII AP BADE DILWALE HAIN…..PAR IS DRIVER KO SON BULANA…….KUCH JYADA NAHI HO RAHE HAIN KYA!!!!!!!!!1

A;- HEY HELLO MADAM!!!!!!!!!APP CHUP RAHEGI PLZ……..

MEANWHILE ARJUN'S DAD RUSHIN TOWARDS ARJUN WITH A CHAPPAL………….

A.D:- AJJ IISISE MAIN TERI HADDIPASLII EK KARUNGA…………

A:- AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

BOTH RUNIING LIKE TOM N JERRY(MY FAV CARTOON CHARACTER)

ARJUN'S MOM:- ARRE KYA KAR RAHE HOON……..MERI BEETE KII JAAN KE PICHHE KYON PADE HOON…………………..

A.D:- YEH TUMHARA DULHARA DRIVERI KAR RAHA HAIN……….

A.M:- KYA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

B:- UNCLE HOON KYA RAHA HAIN YEH…………

A:- KUCH NAHI MADAM EK HASSTE KHELTE PAARIWAR KII T.V SERIAL APP KII DWARA……………..

B:- TUM HOON KON???????????????????/

A:- MAIN ARJUN GOENKA………………………

B:- WHAAAAAAAAAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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GUYA SORRY FOR THE DELAY .FOR TUNAA I HAVENT READ UR FF BUT WILL SURELY READ.KEEP POSTNUR COMMENT.....

L;OVE U ALL

TUYA
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Posted: 19 years ago
#63
wwwwwwoooooooooooowwwwwwww!!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#64
Gr8 part.pls post the next part soon.Tunna thx for the trick.I will surely try it out.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#65
who.... thats realllllllllllllyyyyyyyyy nice n funny... 👏
the best part was arjun's dad running after him with chappal.. like tom n jerry 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#66
greattttttttt....excellent.... 😆 love the way u described arjun'd dad runnin after him with a chappal..hehehehehe..quite funny..plz do continue... 😆 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#67
pls contd wid ur gud work 😉 👏 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#68

As bhavri is shocked to hear his name………………………..

And ghalwale is left the room…………..

B:- tu…tu…tu..tu…tum………arrjjjjjuunnnnn.goooooooooooooooooooooooo o…………

A:- madam u have commited a mistake………………mera naam arjun goenka hain aaarrrjjjuunn goooooooooooo nahi !!!!!!!!!!!!! aur yehi baat humari dosti ka jo humare gharwale hums expect kar te hain…………woh ttoh kabhi ho nahi sakti……..aur tumhari wajase jo yeah ek haste khelte family kaa t.v serial suru huya tha who main kabhi nahi bholongi…………………….aur gharwalo kii saamne bhalehi hum dost hain……….par bahar se mera maksaat hoga tumhari barbadi……………..

Bhavri is shocked to hear that………………tears rolls down from his eyes……..

Bhavri :- (in mind) yeah mujhe kya huya hain………….mein iss pathhar dill ke liye roo rahi hoon………………..uusne meri insult kiiiiii…………aur main chup rahi……baas bohot shunliya maine………………….

B:- hey u punk!!!!!!!!!baass bohot bol liya tumne aur bohot shunliya maine…….abb main bolongi aur tum shunogi……….(hain naa total filmy) agar tum mujhe barbad karogi toh yeah maat socho kii main bhi tumhe chod doongi……….agar stone throw karoge toh badle main bhi wohi milega……………..aur meri life kaa bhi maksaat tumko saatana………………………..

A:- hey u meri ghar me mujhse uchi awaz main baat kar rahe hoon…………..leave the house right now…………………….(shouted)

Bhavri rushes to door with a tearfull eye…………………………


In arjun's room……………..next day morn……………………..

It was 8:00 clock………………………..

a.d:- har roj kii natak yehi ladka kaab uthega……………bhagwan……………main kisme mere paise barbad kar rahi hoon…………

aree mikkamme uth……………………

a:- kon kambaqt arjun ko utharaha hain…………………….yeh sala nikal jaa room se

a.d:- main tera dad tujhe utha raha hoon………………saitan kii aulat…kya jamana aa gaya hain………………….baap ko hi kambaqt kehe rahea hain uska beti

a;- (in dreamstate) who……minie.swety…….tumahari thin komar…….aur gulabi lips…ji kart a hain kii ek……………..(and he kissed his father)

a.d:- chhor mujhe………dinraat iss minies pehenne wali minie ladki ke baareme sochti reheti hain…………bhagwan…………….main kiske barose appne basi basai family choor ke jaongi……………

arjun opened his eyes and shocked to find his father in stead of minie…………..

a:- AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 dddad aapp??????????

a.d:- nalayak chal uth ja……….yaad karle teri chitti ki din gayiiiiiiii……..aur thodi padai kar le………….haan aj se college me tere saath ak pyarri ladkii bhi jayegi…………aur haan who tumharii saath abb se yehei rahegiiiiiiii jab tak hum saab lok lonavla se wappas nahii aate …………yeh thik rahega naa beta…………………….

a:- ladkiiiiiii!!!!!!!!! Who dad super rockin………………

a:-(in mind) dad u r too sufy………..mein usse itni entertain karongi kii who baas entertained hi hoti jayegi………….(givin a wicked smile)


doosre din se kuch jyada acchhii mood me…………………..havin breakfast…..wearin fav dresses………..waitin for that gal………………………….

all of a sudden he saw……………………………….that gal for her…………………..

n it shocked him soo much that he fainted on his father shoulder……………..the last word he said is that…………………… " oh my gggggoooooooooooooooooooooddddddd!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Love u all

Keep guesin who is that gal………………………..most probably every1 think of bhavri……..

Still I 'll say that plzzz………..keepp guessin…………..wait 4 the next part……….

With bouquet of love…….

Tuya………………….
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Posted: 19 years ago
#69
👏 great work...love every bit of it... 😆 😆 😆 n yea guess toh mera bhi bhavri ka hi hai...ab leseee who tht gal is... 😉 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#70
coooooollllllllll !!!!!!!! super coooooool !!!!!!! 👏
it was damn good n damn funny.... i loved arjun's dad's dialogues... n i'm not guessing anything... let the girl come....

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