haar mohan kii koi radhaa!!!(fanfic.)

hey guys being a bhavri and arjaun's fan i am writing a fanfic on a eternal love between bavri and arjun but the stroy will b haatke than saarthi.

u can call it modern mahabharat.

character scetch:-

manseen-the chirman of goenka groups and had very hatret for his bhaiyas family but love her bro's son arjun.

arjun-22 yr. old boy.a happy go lucky one.for him love and losing are two extict word.

shefali-one of a pretty so called girlfriend of arjun,whose gf canged everyday,a pretty glamourus girl with a golden heart.

yuvraj.- manseen's spoilt brat who is very passonate bout shefali.

bhavri:- a sweet pretty girl of a big business tycoon mr. khandelwal.

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alarm clock rings but it dun no asar in arjun.

arjuns dad-oh krishna!!!is ladke ka kuch karo poore din soote rehte hain yaa apne micro mini ladki -se ghoomte rehete hain.is nalayak ka kya hoga.

a:-oh dad kyon subhha subhha bolarahe ho.

a.d:-are nalayak subha dus bajje hain aur kitni der taak soyegi.

arjun jumping on the bed

a:-app pehele kyon nahi bulaya.mujhe kittie se milne jana tha.

in the car

a:-soch arjun soch kitie ko kya bolegi.actually uska naam kya really kittie hi tha yaa aur kuch.

in his dream he clashes to bhavri's car.

b:-(came out of her car) are dekhke nahi chal sakte bhaisaab

a:-(petrified by bahvri eye)agar paata hota kii aapke takraongi toh dekh ke chal ta.neways i am arjun.uwho r u babes.

b:-just shut up!!!appne car haataoge yaa main police bolwao

a:-babes tum kahogi toh jaan bhii...

b:-hey krishna!!isse baat karna hi bekar hain.

(turning over her own car disappeared)

a:-(in dreams)oh itni khubsoorat main ajtak nahi dekhi.

b:-(in mind)-he is handsome but spoilt .agar doosri bar aisa kii toh main chappal se pitungi.

in college

bavri came out of her car.another side arjun also,and both headed toward the college.

arjun is petrified with minie,the sexiest gal in college again

bang!!!!!!

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if u guys love it i will post the next part or i discont. it

plz.. post ur comments.

good work
plz continue
i'm waiting for the next part

its really nice..plzz do continue..arjun saying babes..😆hmmm its something different..

its nice
but plz
go to the beneath link and start ur ff their
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_topics.asp?FID=94
DONT CONTINUE IT HERE PLZZ

its nice... 😃 😃
do continu

plz continue ...to me this looks like modern mahabharat with lots of babes around handsome arjun 😳

its really gud 😃 .plz contd 😊

yea..its nice..n different..do continue.. 😆

It is very nice
plz continue i am waiting 😊

Wow really different Arjun is saying the word babes!!!!! that's really cool.Pls continue.