Originally posted by: Sunitha.V
Are the above ones technically ghazals Salil ji?
only ruke ruke se is a ghazal. The rules are
Ghazal is a ----
-- collection of 2-line independent poems (shers)
-- of the same length (meter -- 'beher')
-- with same words at the end of both lines of first sher and second lines of all shers (radif)
-- with rhyming words before all the radifs (kaafiyaa)
-- with the first sher following the radif and kaafiyaa rules for both lines (matla)
ruke ruke se kadam, ruk ke baar baar chale
karaar leke tere, dar se bekaraar chale
subah naa aayee, kayee baar neend se jaage
thee ek raat kee ye zindagee, guzaar chale
uthhaye firate the ehsaan dil kaa seene par
le tere kadmon mein ye karz bhee utaar chale
Edited by salilu - 18 years ago