Member of the week-Jaadoogar!! - Page 61

Originally posted by: seema_17

arre never worry abt that.... u kno when i was a kid i was REALLY into shayari, n they weer good too.... but as i got older i totally lost touch with it 😭

Please share some of your childhood shayari 😛

Originally posted by: jayc1234

Please share some of your childhood shayari 😛

didi bohat pehle likhe the... yahan move hote waqt sab chhod kar aayi thi.... tab bachpan mein pata nahi tha ki woh sab bade ho kar kitna miss karoongi

Originally posted by: shadyhtown

Yep.. although sometimes I wish I'd got some of the questions others have got - like the set you gave Jadoo ji right now - so intellectually stimulating!

But all said and done, humor, more than intellect, is my forte (at least on this forum) - and I'm glad I got enough chance to explore my funny side. 😃

I wont mind getting your version of the answers too.. in case you want to attempt 😛

But yes, fun is your forte and we all laughed aloud that week 😆

Okay here's my poem. Don't take it to face value - I wrote this 4 years ago when I was trying to win a poetry scholarship, and I was simply cosying up the Americans, for whom 9/11 was still relatively fresh in mind.

That Unforgettable Day

I turned to my classmate and asked him today's date
"It's 9/11", he remarked, before realizing the irony
Little did we know then that one enemy's hate
Would turn that very day into an unbelievable tragedy

Our teacher broke the news to the class
My first impression was, she's making a bad joke
But then on the TV, I saw the truth - Alas
In front of eyes, buildings going up in smoke

As I saw the planes launch their attack on the towers
My mind began to feel a painful throbbing sound
I realized it wasn't even in America's powers
To stop those monuments from falling to the ground

I felt a new respect for the emergency members
Who put their lives in utmost danger
By walking into tall statues of burning embers
Just to save the life of a complete stranger

I wished then that there was something I could do
I promised myself every ounce of blood I would drop
I would join the Air Force, the Army, or the Navy crew
Just to help America again come out on top

Originally posted by: teenindia_usa

well I have highlight the words ...U mentally tired😆...
My internship has made me not just mentally tired, yet physically, emotionally etc... 10-11 hrs aday just too much and today had lecture on anesthesia(I felt like having some and sleeping) j/k


hi jaya sis, shady long time no see, and others here

Hi Angie - so how do you like the internship? Are u enjoying it?

Originally posted by: shadyhtown

Okay here's my poem. Don't take it to face value - I wrote this 4 years ago when I was trying to win a poetry scholarship, and I was simply cosying up the Americans, for whom 9/11 was still relatively fresh in mind.

That Unforgettable Day

I turned to my classmate and asked him today's date
"It's 9/11", he remarked, before realizing the irony
Little did we know then that one enemy's hate
Would turn that very day into an unbelievable tragedy

Our teacher broke the news to the class
My first impression was, she's making a bad joke
But then on the TV, I saw the truth - Alas
In front of eyes, buildings going up in smoke

As I saw the planes launch their attack on the towers
My mind began to feel a painful throbbing sound
I realized it wasn't even in America's powers
To stop those monuments from falling to the ground

I felt a new respect for the emergency members
Who put their lives in utmost danger
By walking into tall statues of burning embers
Just to save the life of a complete stranger

I wished then that there was something I could do
I promised myself every ounce of blood I would drop
I would join the Air Force, the Army, or the Navy crew
Just to help America again come out on top

its really good.... and u kno it has feelings , thats wat counts 😊

Originally posted by: shadyhtown

That Unforgettable Day

I turned to my classmate and asked him today's date
"It's 9/11", he remarked, before realizing the irony
Little did we know then that one enemy's hate
Would turn that very day into an unbelievable tragedy

Our teacher broke the news to the class
My first impression was, she's making a bad joke
But then on the TV, I saw the truth - Alas
In front of eyes, buildings going up in smoke

As I saw the planes launch their attack on the towers
My mind began to feel a painful throbbing sound
I realized it wasn't even in America's powers
To stop those monuments from falling to the ground

I felt a new respect for the emergency members
Who put their lives in utmost danger
By walking into tall statues of burning embers
Just to save the life of a complete stranger

I wished then that there was something I could do
I promised myself every ounce of blood I would drop
I would join the Air Force, the Army, or the Navy crew
Just to help America again come out on top

Very good one 👏

Originally posted by: Jaadoogar

seema, it is so sad. but try again.

yea maybe i can get it again i don't kno... but us time ki baat hi alag thi, u kno the childish innocence n the view we have bak then abt everything.... the ability to get away from reality n romanticise abt things.... i find that as i get older i get more cynical abt things, whereas when i was a kid, all i had to do was sit back in the balcony and look at the stars in the night... n the whole mood would become philosophical

Hey Angie - long time. Miss you and your typos, sweets. No one to pick on 🤗

But yea, good luck with internship. I'm finally glad it's started. Better to be exhausted doing internship than be exhausted spending 450 hours a month on forum. It also reflects in your posts - fewer typos 😉

Originally posted by: seema_17

didi bohat pehle likhe the... yahan move hote waqt sab chhod kar aayi thi.... tab bachpan mein pata nahi tha ki woh sab bade ho kar kitna miss karoongi

Seriously, we seem to miss so many things from our childhood, jise tab bilkul importance nahi diya hoga 😕