Musical game - are you a lyricist?

Ajnabee

@*Woh Ajnabee*

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Posted: 16 years ago

#11

ek din tujhe pyaar ke aage jhukna hi hoga
berukhi ke is silsile ko rukna hi hoga

hum ek din milenge chahe tum karlo jo bhi bahana
zindagi bhar intezaar karloon mai agar mil jaaye mujhe tumhara saath suhaana

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-shehzaadi-

@-shehzaadi-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#12

hum ek din milenge chahe tum karlo jo bhi bahana
zindagi bhar intezaar karloon mai agar mil jaaye mujhe tumhara saath suhaana
tu kahe to teri raahon par main aankhein bichha doon umr bhar ke liye
zindagi kya hai, saara jahaan luta doon main aise humsafar ke liye

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Ajnabee

@*Woh Ajnabee*

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Posted: 16 years ago

#13

tu kahe to teri raahon par main aankhein bichha doon umr bhar ke liye
zindagi kya hai, saara jahaan luta doon main aise humsafar ke liye
chaand taare todke mai tere qadmon me laake rakhdoon
teri ek hasi ke khaatir mai zameen ko asmaan kardoon

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333887

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Posted: 16 years ago

#14

oh my gosh!!!!! Shez!!!!! you're goooood!!!!!!!👏!!!! i simply loved your lines!!!!!!!!!

WA.....do i need to mention u rock always?😆

tu kahe to teri raahon par main aankhein bichha doon umr bhar ke liye
zindagi kya hai, saara jahaan luta doon main aise humsafar ke liye
chaand taare todke mai tere qadmon me laake rakhdoon
teri ek hasi ke khaatir mai zameen ko asmaan kardoon

....here...

Chaand se chaandni cheeno...
Suraj se roshani cheeno
Waise hi ho jaongi main
Agar mujhse koi tum cheeno

m sorry about the grammatical errors....

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Khatarnak

@Khatarnak

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Posted: 16 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: *Woh Ajnabee*
ek din tujhe pyaar ke aage jhukna hi hoga
berukhi ke is silsile ko rukna hi hoga

hum ek din milenge chahe tum karlo jo bhi bahana
zindagi bhar intezaar karloon mai agar mil jaaye mujhe tumhara saath suhaana

Hum Ik din milengay zarroor lakh kartay raho tum koi bahan
Zindagi bita doon teray intezar mein gar miljaye saath tera suhana

Edited by Khatarnak - 16 years ago

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333887

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Posted: 16 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Khatarnak

Hum Ik din milengay zarroor lakh kartay raho tum koi bahan
Zindagi bita doon teray intezar mein gar miljaye saath tera suhana

You're a savvy!!!!!!!!!😳.....Now I won't dare to write any more lyrics in hindi😆.

You're gonna rock this game!!!!!!!!!👏

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Khatarnak

@Khatarnak

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Posted: 16 years ago

#17

Hello CG, ROA, WA, and Shezu 👏👏👏

Wow ROA what a wonderful thread 😃

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-shehzaadi-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#18

yay! the REAL shayar is here👏

@ CG: thanks...but I'm just doing some Pritambaazi😆 thoda idhar se, thoda udhar se le kar apne lines bana rahi hoon😆

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Ajnabee

@*Woh Ajnabee*

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Posted: 16 years ago

#19

@CG - thanks, I don't know how these lines land in my head. 😆 I say okay, I'll steal it from some song, but no relevant song ever comes to mind at the moment, so I have to innovate. lol 😆

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Khatarnak

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Posted: 16 years ago

#20

Tum bahar ban kay meri zingagi mein aaye
ab toh bas naam tumhara hi labon pey aaye

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