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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Summer3

Okay then here we go.
Please write a story n select your ideal partner. 😉
I was specially blessed with the true Geminian charm and my twin personalities would often baffle each and every Romeo that vied for my love. I would be wishing for a nice sports saloon and next moment sail off on a luxury yacht. Living life to the fullest, sunshine and laughter filled my day. Even my own sis refused to introduce her boyfriends to me for obvious reasons.
Three of my favourite Romeos were Opulent OBJ, Confident Clod and Gorgeous Guru who sent me flowers everyday and one even wanted to kill himself.
(please continue the story and tell me whom you will select to marry n on what basis)

continues:
the gemini was feeling all gloomy due to the chilly winter and was
looking for a getaway to some warm and open place, where she could be
marrooned in the nature and just to make it more pleasing was willing to
have some good company. the mere thought of blue ocean and a beautiful
yatch sailing gorgeously flirting with the cool breeze made her all
enchanted . without any hesitation she thought of OBJ who could give
anything to sail with her.his excitement seemed oozing out . and with
dreams galore she landed in a yatch which had a kind of nostalgic touch
and blended beautifully with the contemporary style. needless to say, she
got a taste of OBJ's opulency.
gently she treaded in to pass the picture gallery of rafi saab but
stopped at the traditional record player which raised her brow. OBJ,
quickly stepped forward to show off his collection and deliberately
placed a disc to tune in his fav. rafi songs.
her feet started tapping to the music and asked OBJ for a dance but he
shied away as he couldnt dance. she did get miffed and turned to the TV.
to her amazement it was again rafi saab DVD playing. she just could
managed to sit thru 2-3 songs but then walked away out to breathe some
fresh air. still she could hear rafi songs in the background while gazing
at the sky. suddenly she felt she saw rafi in the clouds raising his hand
as if he is offering blessings to her. all disillusioned she headed to
the dinner table thinking of having atleast some food and chatting with
OBJ.
before she could start enjoying his company he drifted the talk
towards rafi. and that was a last straw for her as all she could see and
hear was rafi..totally annoyed with the fiasco she decided to walk out on
OBJ leaving him and his opulency...
SCENE2 :
once again all gloomy and sadden, she was trailing on the shore
thinking of running somewhere where she could cheerup her spirits.all
sudden her face seemed smiling as she saw Clod half burried in the
sand. he looked like a looser who wanted to end his life ,for his dream
girl had gone away with someone else. hurriedly, she went close and
wispered his name. he couldnt believe his eyes . as he was seeing his
dream right close to him. after their brief greetings. they decided to
make the most of each others company. going to watch some game then
having a candlelight dinner and a long drive after seemed like a good
going.
with all new found excitement she sat in his ferrari and zoomed
their way. but they kept driving as he couldnt find the venue of the
game. he looked confident and didnt bother to ask anything to anyone. he
wanted to show off his confidence so he kept going and going, finding for
the venue. but in vain. she got slightly irritated with his over
confident behaviour. finally by the time they reached the venue
the game was finished much to her disappointment. he shrugged and asked
her for an exotic dinner to make up for the missed game. gathering some
patience she nodded yes and they drove off.
once again, the guy didnt know where he wants to go. and kept the
confusion to himself . he somehow managed to get to some restaurant as
they were getting late and unable to find some exotic place. much too her
frustration the place turned out to be too ordinary for a cosy dinner.
the menu looked bland ,and the ambience was too crowded for a soothing
candlelight.
her mood went off and she asked him to drive her back. in the last
attempt he tried convincing her for a long drive . she unhappily agreed
and they took off. but as ill fated it could get, suddenly it started
pouring heavily and got foggy .all he could do is, put the brakes to
the car and sit with long face with every creature dancing in their
stomach.
all fed up with his over confidence she decided to give up on him... and
look for some other greener pastures.
scene 3:
with the two horrible fiascos she decided she wont go to any dream trip
or any dream date. all she wants is some serene place where she could
find some solace and some interesting fun. wile pondering on, she
recalled that there is one such guy who can never say no to her and
fulfill her desire. she meets up with gorgeous gur who happened to be a regular
visitor to the gurukul. he got all geared up to take her to gurukul and
impress her. finally with all hopes pinned up on him, she went to see the
fascinating world of gurukul.
But little did she know that gur's undying love for hindi daily soaps
and shows. he directly took her to the museum section , where all the
facts about hindi daily soaps were displayed along with the models of
vamps and all goody goody heroines . she disgustingly told him that she
wasnt a bit interested into the daily crap. but as enthusiatic as he
could be , he decided to take her to the show, which was a documentary
on ekta kapoor and her serials. she hestitantly went with him, trusting
him a bit more but was all mad at him for showing her the horrendous film
-" making of K-serials". all she wanted was to smack him. but gur made an
innocent face and apologized to her. he sensed the seriousness and came
up with some innovative game plan. he thought, he would set up her
meeting with the gurukul head whom she admires a lot and that she would
be all happy to see him and in order would forgive him. he promised her
not to hurt again, and pleaded her to go with him.
they walked to the hall and entered inside to see a figure standing
with his back facing them. he uttered "excuse me sir". the figure turned
and said yes! she found the barritone familiar and looked at him and was
awestruck to see "Mr. Bachchan". she couldnt believe what she was
seeing...all she knew was there was some magnetic force which was getting
her attracted towards him. before she could knew, her feet started
following her heart's command and dragged her slowly close to him
leaving gur and his gorgeous mentalilty far behind.
she knew she got her man whom she was longing
for.....😳😳😳


bigB 13

Edited by ritzbitz - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: ritzbitz

continues:
the gemini was feeling all gloomy due to the chilly winter and was
looking for a getaway to some warm and open place, where she could be
marrooned in the nature and just to make it more pleasing was willing to
have some good company. the mere thought of blue ocean and a beautiful
yatch sailing gorgeously flirting with the cool breeze made her all
enchanted . witout any hestitation she thought of OBJ who could give
anything to sail with her.his excitement seemed oozing out . and with
dreams galore she landed in a yatch which had a kind of nostalgic touch
and blended beautifully with the contemporary style. needless to say, se
got a taste of OBJ's opulency.
gently she treaded in to pass the picture gallery of rafi saab but
stopped at the traditional record player which raised her brow. OBJ,
quickly stepped forward to show off his collection and deliberately
placed a disc to tune in his fav. rafi songs.
her feet started tapping to the music and asked OBJ for a dance but he
shied away as he couldnt dance. she did get miffed and turned to the TV.
to her amazement it was again rafi saab DVD playing. she just could
managed to sit thru 2-3 songs but then walked away out to breathe some
fresh air. still she could hear rafi songs in the background while gazing
at the sky. suddenly she felt she saw rafi in the clouds raising his hand
as if he is offering blessings to her.
🤣
all disillusioned she headed to
the dinner table thinking of having atleast some food and chatting with
OBJ.
before she could start enjoying his company he drifted the talk
towards rafi. and that was a last straw for her as all she could see and
hear was rafi..totally annoyed with the fiasco she decided to walk out on
OBJ leaving him and his opulency... 🤣
SCENE2 :
once again all gloomy and sadden, she was trailing on the shore
thinking of running somewhere where she could cheerup her spirits.all
sudden her face seemed smiling as she saw Clod half burried in the
sand. he looked like a looser who wanted to end his life ,🤣
for his dream
girl had gone away with someone else. hurriedly, she went close and
wispered his name. he couldnt believe his eyes . as he was seeing his
dream right close to him. after their brief greetings. they decided to
make the most of each others company. going to watch some game then
having a candlelight dinner and a long drive after seemed like a good
going.
with all new found excitement she sat in his ferrari and zoomed
their way. but they kept driving as he couldnt find the venue of the
game. he looked confident and didnt bother to ask anything to anyone. he
wanted to show off his confidence so he kept going and going, finding for
the venue. but in vain. she got slightly irritated with his over
confident behaviour. finally by the time they reached the venue
the game was finished much to her disappointment. he shrugged and asked
her for an exotic dinner to make up for the missed game. gathering some
patience she nodded yes and they drove off.
once again, the guy didnt know where he wants to go. and kept the
confusion to himself . 😆
he somehow managed to get to some restaurant as
they were getting late and unable to find some exotic place. much too her
frustration the place turned out to be too ordinary for a cosy dinner.
the menu looked bland ,and the ambience was too crowded for a soothing
candlelight.
her mood went off and she asked him to drive her back. in the last
attempt he tried convincing her for a long drive . she unhappily agreed
and they took off. but as ill fated it could get, suddenly it started
pouring heavily and got foggy .all he could do is, put the brakes to
the car and sit with long face with every creature dancing in their
stomach.
all fed up with his over confidence she decided to give up on him... and
look for some other greener pastures.
scene 3:
with the two horrible fiascos she decided she wont go to any dream trip
or any dream date. 😆
all she wants is some serene place where she could
find some solace and some interesting fun. wile pondering on, she
recalled that there is one such guy who can never say no to her and
fulfill her desire. she meets up with gorgeous gur who happened to be a regular
visitor to the gurukul. he got all geared up to take her to gurukul and
impress her. finally with all hopes pinned up on him, she went to see the
fascinating world of gurukul.
But little did she know that gur's undying love for hindi daily soaps
and shows. he directly took her to the museum section , where all the
facts about hindi daily soaps were displayed along with the models of
vamps and all goody goody heroines . 🤣🤣🤣🤣
she disgustingly told him that she
wasnt a bit interested into the daily crap. but as enthusiatic as he
could be , he decided to take her to the show, which was a documentary
on ekta kapoor and her serials. 🤣🤣
she hestitantly went with him, trusting
him a bit more but was all mad at him for showing her the horrendous film
-" making of K-serials". all she wanted was to smack him. 🤣🤣 but gur made an
innocent face and apologized to her. he sensed the seriousness and came
up with some innovative game plan. he thought, he would set up her
meeting with the gurukul head whom she admires a lot and that she would
be all happy to see him and in order would forgive him. he promised her
not to hurt again, and pleaded her to go with him.
they walked to the hall and entered inside to see a figure standing
with his back facing them. he uttered "excuse me sir". the figure turned
and said yes! she found the barritone familiar and looked at him and was
awestruck to see "Mr. Bachchan". she couldnt believe what she was
seeing...all she knew was there was some magnetic force which was getting
her attracted towards him. before she could knew, her feet started
following her heart's command and dragged her slowly close to him
leaving gur and his gorgeous mentalilty far behind.
she knew she got her man whom she was longing
for.....😳😳😳


bigB 13


Ritu....awesome story.... !!! 👏👏


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Posted: 16 years ago
Awesome job Ritzy....You finally found your He Man Big B......👏
Hopelessly romantic Ritzy Awwwwwwwww 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
😆😆😆

superb story ritzbitz ji

maja aa gaya, specially the 1st and 3rd scenes , they were awesome 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Rage-Of-Angels

@ Antar! ahh your one amazing person yourself! thank you

Okay Girl enough skiving done back to the questions, you may have to exercise for some of them..warm up now! ..yeah ok. is this good ? 😆

1 - Grab the first book you see, turn to page 14 and type what it says

....all rights reserved. 😛

2 - The last time you laughed? ..while writing a story to summer's Q. the imagination had me in splits..😆

3 - The last time you cried and why? ..dont remember. i mean tears roll down now and then but its not close to crying . know what i mean?😆

4 - Stretch your arms as far as you could..how do you feel? feeling like slapping ....😛

5 - List 5 major difference between ROA and FHK - as far as i know, none . neither the user id nor the musical topic is helping 😉😆

6 - List 5 major similarities between Roa and Fhk : as little as i know, everything is same. 😳

7 - whose picture do you have on your wall? no one's. its all in memory 😉

8 - what were you doing before logging on Indian forums? was looking online for digital picture frame 😛

9 - how long do you roughly waste your time on internet? 3 hours at present. mostly in the night. 9.30 -12.30 .

10 - If you were in Dance india dance, what song would you dance on? bidee jalaile jigar se piya

11 - How old are you in your dreams? 24 . 😉 dunno why am i stuck on that number.

12 - What is your favourite midnight snack? are there any? never tried though

13 - Favourite day of the week and why? friday. its so relaxed . dont have to cook . plus can watch some timepass shows like DID...or some movie.

14 - Worst day of the week and why? saturday..always busy. coz everything gets pushed on weekend. esp sat.

15 - Tell me something i dont know . ...you are an astrologer in making. i am sure u know much than me..😆

16 - Anything you want to ask me? ... are u the same expressive in RL too? coz i love the way you express. you know that. 😉

Enjoy!!!!!!!!!!!!

XoXo

thanx XoXo, 🤗 to a good soul . dunno phir mulaqat hogi yeah nahin.
tc. and may god bless you with the nicest things..
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Dabulls23

Awesome job Ritzy....You finally found your He Man Big B......👏

Hopelessly romantic Ritzy Awwwwwwwww 😆

woh toh hoon ...😳. thanx di, for all your comments and encouraging feedback. 🤗 didnt really get time amidst my hectic days... and yes the moment i saw blue paithani ..i thought of you. 😉
gawd!! cant believe you guys actually read it ...😆
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: clodpolish

😆😆😆

superb story ritzbitz ji

maja aa gaya, specially the 1st and 3rd scenes , they were awesome 😆

haha..and the second one was awful...no? 😛😆
glad u liked it . 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey naz, thanx sweetheart! for the comments and feedbacks..🤗.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: ritzbitz

haha..and the second one was awful...no? 😛😆
glad u liked it . 😊



wat story!!!??😲...i wanna read that!!!....lemme read it first.........
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Posted: 16 years ago
am trying to find if anything is remaining.... guys no more questions plz. as i wont be able to come on week end. can try but not sure.

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