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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: advil

Rock n roll : Tough and lovely song. I think this one you sang in falsetto. Open your mouth fully to get the word pronunciations as well as the pitching right. Please avoid going nasal at ending notes. The song needed a little more intensity , at some places you just rushed from a note to note thus losing the flow and the feel. The lower notes need a bit more clarity. However you hit the high notes pretty well.

thanx a lot for ur fb......will work more on my throw and pronunciations 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bhaskar.T

Hai bhi kam so no problem...achcha...to isiliye itne din fb nahin diye...aap to bade aalsi nikle 😆

I won't be posting the review for my own gharana ones. Can only say Kiti you did brilliantly and I loved the song. Mala well you were flat at places.

1. rock&roll - You still need to work upon your diction. Please open your mouth to sing. But frankly speaking on the whole I found this performance of yours the best. 👏👏👏

FB thread mein aapko dekh kar hum dhanya ho gaye 😉😆😆 Maan gaye ki bhakti gaanon mein koi power hai..........😆😆😆...will put more effort into my diction and throw.........After ur spendid effort with the lyrics last time ,I am thinking of taking lessons from u(seriously)........😊.......i know u must be thinking "isiliye main is thread se door rehta tha" 😆
Really glad that u liked my performance 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: rock&roll

FB thread mein aapko dekh kar hum dhanya ho gaye 😉😆😆 Maan gaye ki bhakti gaanon mein koi power hai..........😆😆😆...will put more effort into my diction and throw.........After ur spendid effort with the lyrics last time ,I am thinking of taking lessons from u(seriously)........😊.......i know u must be thinking "isiliye main is thread se door rehta tha" 😆
Really glad that u liked my performance 😃



See last round nahi diya as I hardly understood most of the songs. 😆 Woh Dia ne kaha thha native language. 😆 Except for evilseye and Mala I had no idea who is singing what and jhoot nahi bolunga. Did not feel like listening to the original and then comparing. 😳😆

Taking lessons from me for what??? Writing the lyrics? 😆


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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bhaskar.T

See last round nahi diya as I hardly understood most of the songs. 😆 Woh Dia ne kaha thha native language. 😆 Except for evilseye and Mala I had no idea who is singing what and jhoot nahi bolunga. Did not feel like listening to the original and then comparing. 😳😆

Taking lessons from me for what??? Writing the lyrics? 😆


achcha ,chalo last round maaf hai 😉......ab aage aage to contestants kum hi hote jayenge,is liye aage theek se fb dena(ast least jab tak main contest mein rahun 😆😆😆)
taking lessons from u on diction yaar.....😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Usually I dont give feedback but do listen to all the songs and have been helping few via PMs.. Thought this time I will give feedback for all 😆

kiti:

Great choice of song.. Technically you were really good except that you were sounding nasal in the high notes.. This is your standard problem in all the songs.. Your voice is also cracking in the high notes.. With proper riyaz, you definitely can solve this problem.. You need to practice the sargam on regular basis and also follow the advice which Ashaji gave in one episode.. You need to hold your tongue with a towel and then practice, this will help you in getting out of the nasal twang.. Otherwise you have done a great job 👏👏👏

Mala:

I have a strong feeling that you have chosen a wrong song... Your voice does not suite to this song because we are used to listening this song in a soft voice.. Most of the bhakti sangeet yes are very soft, but you could have chosen some song is very popular and we have heard so much that we are feeling the difference.. You could have chosen a song like O Duniya ke rakhwaale or Sukh ke sab saathi... But even then in this song, your tempo is too less compared to the usual song.. You are stretching each word too much.. Some places you were even flat.. but sure, it was a great attempt 😊

Mini:

Mini, you are loosing sur many a times.. You are not maintaining the scale as well.. The scale is changing frequently from one word to another.. So many jumping notes as well.. You could have done a lot lot better... For maintaining scale, you need practice with a harmonium or Tanpura.. But if you done have one, practice the sargam and do the riyaz atleast 2 times daily.. There are many online teaching institutes were they give you some samples to practice.. You should sing along with them which will help you in maintaining the scale.. Most importantly, you need to sing along with the song as many times as possible, which will help you in maintaining the scale, sur everything... You are much capable and a good singer as well.. So, just follow it up and you can do much better 😊

Lavanya:

You know very well that you have breathe problem.. You loose breathe at many places.. For this you will have to do breathing exercise.. Pranayam will help you do this.. You should work a little more in the murkhiyaan.. For this again you need to do proper riyaz morning and evening.. You always have the problem in "R" diction... For this you can do Ram Ram jap.. You need to keep saying Ram, Ram atleast for 2-3 minutes.. This may help you in getting out of that diction problem.. Not sure, but you can try it out.. But surely, great attempt 👏

Anita:

Great choice of song... 😊 And technically you are very good.. The only problem is your energy level and the way you pronounce every word.. You put too much of energy into the song that your throw gets disturbed.. Also you are not opening your mouth and pronouncing the words.. Every Aa word is sounding like Ae.. There is nothing much you can do except that you need to open your mouth properly while singing.. And yes, try reducing your energy level as much as possible.. You are not opening your mouth and putting too much of energy because of this your throw is having a problem.. Otherwise you did a great job.. Technically you are very good 👏

Evilseye:

You were flat through out the song.. Nice choice of song, but you are a much capable singer and can do much much better than this 😊 Usually you are not flat, but this time you are totally flat.. And most importantly, you started off with a very low scale.. You should have kept a scale higher and that could have also solved a little bit of the problem.. But nice attempt 😊

A common feedback for all the participants:

You all need to do riyaz regularly and also try doing Pranayam every morning.. This will help in breathe control and also you can maintain your scale through out the song... 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Just a question why aren't the original song links posted?

It would allow for easier comparison.
Edited by Megha25 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Megha25

Just a question why aren't the original song links posted?

It would allow for easier comparison.



The original songs of all the contestants have not been given and moreover these songs are famous ones and we have heard of it.. During Sufi or regional rounds, they were uncommon songs so all original songs were collected from mentors and posted..

If anyone wants it, then can collect it and post it.. 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#18
Hey Kirti,
I am fianlly listening to you sweetie! .... and kicking myself for missing out on your previous performances😭
I loved this bhajan. You did wonderful👏 Keep up the great job🤗
@Bhaskar: Thanks for sending the link, bro🤗
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Posted: 17 years ago
#19
Rock&Roll, you also sound very sweet. The judges will have a hard time judging y'all.
I am hoping to catch everyone's performances, at least for this round, soon.
Bhaskar, tum bhi na...... you got me hooked to another section here😡
Edited by Gauri_3 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: Anuradha

Usually I dont give feedback but do listen to all the songs and have been helping few via PMs.. Thought this time I will give feedback for all 😆

Anita:

Great choice of song... 😊 And technically you are very good.. The only problem is your energy level and the way you pronounce every word.. You put too much of energy into the song that your throw gets disturbed.. Also you are not opening your mouth and pronouncing the words.. Every Aa word is sounding like Ae.. There is nothing much you can do except that you need to open your mouth properly while singing.. And yes, try reducing your energy level as much as possible.. You are not opening your mouth and putting too much of energy because of this your throw is having a problem.. Otherwise you did a great job.. Technically you are very good 👏

thank u for uf very detialed fb Anu......really appreciate it 😃...Will work on the things pointed ut by u 😊

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