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Posted: 7 years ago
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Amazing looking forward for further parts!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Beautifully written. one wants him to heal as life dishes out fresh wounds every now and then. The Chotti Maa who stepped in to save him from his tormentors as his Papa looked on. His own mother wishing the festering wounds keep the feeling of revenge alive in his heart. Two mothers two different responses. Two conflicting perspectives and emotions within him.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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What a fabulous piece, Shreya


That scene and Narottam being physically abused by Pujan and Avdoot while Baldev turned his back to him, was so heart wrenching that if Narottam decides to take the bait and get even with Baldev, I would not mind it.

And Satrupa did step in to be the saviour.

You have penned down the emotions brilliantly.

Well done !!

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Sudha is manipulating him and causing him deeper pain. The men folk in LM have spared no effort in hurting Narotham and when you are a victim of such humiliation and the man you look upto as your father turns his back on you and allows such abuse of you , Narotham has every right to be bitter.
What happened thereafter though could signal the beginning of change. Change of Satrupa...change for and of Narotham and change of the rules of LM.
If the change is complete we might have Satrupa willing to adopt Narotham if it is prooves Baldev is thdeed the father.

Shreya atleast in our predictions we can hope for that. Narotham has suffered much though a lot of it was caused by others. When he realised and began to lie and cheat he has been responsible for the share of pain.
If he does not change I'm sure if Sudha continues to manipulate him and Anami Satrupa will toughen.
Remember she had been sympathetic to Sudha once and had been betrayed though we are to learn when how and in what manner.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wonderful work...👏

Very well written satrupa & narottam's monologues.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Shreya diii
Hiii!!!! How are you?!

Btw, really nice part!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: MsPrez

Shreya diii
Hiii!!!! How are you?!

Btw, really nice part!!



Lol very few people call me that now. Meaning you know me. 😆 But I don't recognize your UN. 😕

Thanks!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Athene




Lol very few people call me that now. Meaning you know me. 😆But I don't recognize your UN.😕

Thanks!


😆 That's because I changed my UN.
We're in HNLHS forum, GauShi AT 😊
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