RKC: The Future (OS # 2 pg. 2) (Baldev-Anami, Anami-Poonam)

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Divi.C

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

i would like to have satrupa baldev scene n of course anami adi and anami baldev...

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ammu3

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Posted: 7 years ago

#12

@Athene ! Oh Wow ! This is marvelous ! Beautiful ! Perfection ! I have no words to say.👏
My god - Every character is just etched to perfection. It is like we are getting to read the manuscript of a future episode.
The way Baldev's conflicting thoughts are portrayed, Anami's acknowledgement of the truth behind Narottam yet sticking to his friendship - everything is just so true. This is exactly how they would be.

While as of now Anami is couldn't be more carefree to Baldev's indifferent attitude. We all saw the anguish in her eyes, when Baldev mentioned that dialogue he spoke when he first met Anami ( you mentioned it towards the end) - and while he will be nowhere next to Murari Pathak - she has no hatred towards him as a father ; maybe somewhere regret for supposedly betraying Sudha - but no qualms as a dad as of now.

I am eagerly waiting for more. Again, I have no words to say - except today's episode is very word-action packed ; and it is v good the fact that it plunges the audience right onto the middle of the story.

P.S : Is your real name Shreya ? I need to know. 😆 Although your pen name is true to you. I'm hoping Athene-Athena ?😳

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Evil Dramebaaz

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Posted: 7 years ago

#13

^ Ammu, thank you so much for the kind words!

Yes I'm Shreya. I like changing my UN each year. This year I chose Athene since Athena wasn't available. 😆

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Anjali

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Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Wow baldev is melting

Hope baldev and anami begin a good friendship and relationship

Hope she helps him heal

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lina.pushpa

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Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Please do continue the story .. coz truth be told after sudhas entry I guess I prefer your story than the actual serial...

And man you are such a awesome writer ..i mean seriously man.. you are damn good ..

So do update soon ..

Eagerly Waiting for the next chapter..

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Evil Dramebaaz

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Posted: 7 years ago

#16

^ Thanks but these are just OSes that I will periodically add more to. They won't always be a continuation of what I started writing but based on the show where I feel the story could go next. 😊

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Ecrivain

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Posted: 7 years ago

#17

A very happy and blessed belated Diwali to you.

This one makes up for a fabulous read and its heartening the way its written.

Kudos to you for penning this so well.

Keep them coming !!

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Nandini

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Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Sorry Shreya i saw your PM now

Actually i am less active rhese dsys

And you can distirb me any time😆

I will definately read it on weekend and comment

Though i know nothibg about this show lol

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Srividya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#19

Both parts are very well written Shreya. The complex dynamics of the relationship of Anami with her family is explored a bit deeper.the vulnerabilities that prompts each of them to act in certain ways ...the underlying care and affection which is forcefully restrained and not expressed.