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mrs_weasley

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Posted: 7 years ago

Yeah I know that we already have this topic's 2nd part... but this is gonna be a new story line... uska conclusion Ayesha banane waali hai... So let's start a new post here...

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mrs_weasley

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Posted: 7 years ago

Now since I'm a Karan Johar and Zoya Akhtar fan toh story toh boss bade scale par hogi... ;)

Here it is...

Diya couldn't even put into words the calm that she felt in the lap of the serene scenery of Greece... She stood outside the ruins of the temple to Hera - the Greek Goddess if family and of marriage; also the queen of heaven - and the aura of the place overwhelmed her... She couldn't decide if this was because of the nature of the shrine - the whole marriage and it's piousness thing- or was it just the fact that she was away from all her regular issues and with Ratan... For one last time...

Ratan had recently faced many issues and had finally proved his identity to the world... After that when Diya addressed the 6 month waiting period before their divorce and how she wanted to leave the house for those months; Ratan had begged her to not go away and insisted that they give the marriage one last try... So he had planned this week-long trip for them where they'd give one last chamce and see if things could somehow work out between them... Diya saw no positive outcome from the trip but she couldnt say no and just boarded the plane...

Btw mere pass iski zabardast story ban gayi hai dimaag mein toh aage antakshari khelni hai yaa should I write a full FF on this????

Edited by mrs_weasley - 7 years ago

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surbhimathur

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Bro WOW!!
Make it as an FF _/\_
Literally continue this angel.
Its awesome ❤️

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mrs_weasley

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: surbhimathur
^
Bro WOW!!
Make it as an FF _/\_
Literally continue this angel.
Its awesome ❤️

Thank you so much Surbhi :)❤️

Chalo toh phir thik hai ab iss FF ka pehla part upload kar dungi... I hope yeh impromptu waali story sabko acchi lage.. :)

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surbhimathur

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: mrs_weasley

Thank you so much Surbhi :)❤️
Chalo toh phir thik hai ab iss FF ka pehla part upload kar dungi... I hope yeh impromptu waali story sabko acchi lage.. :)

Definitely they will love it angell!! ❤️ 😳
Ek kaam karo
Make an individual thread tumhari story ke liye
Aur waha pe post karlo proper
Yaha pe fir log confuse ho jynge and frankly they will not read much.

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surbhimathur

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Posted: 7 years ago

New Situation for Scene Antaakshri 2-

"Really sorry diya...shayad hum raasta bhatak gaye hai..'

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Ratan and diya were soon to be a divorced couple, she wanted to reveal the news to her parents on her own but ratan had insisted to come along as never in his wildest dreams he could've let diya bear the grunt of his irresponsibility.
But as their divorce date came closer he had started getting anxious and more protective about diya, his feelings were making him act silly. He was caught looking & smiling at himself in the mirror many times by chote thakur...and amidst all of that drama, one day diya decided to go to surajgarh on her own...and in an instant ratan convinced her to take him along...seeing him requesting so sweetly her heart skipped a beat...yet again!
But he came up with a weird idea of them reaching surajgarh by taking an enroute...to which diya agreed as this was supposed to be her last journey with ratan and she wanted to live it up...but least she thought that they would lose their way...and it was getting dark now...diya looked at ratan and he managed to force a smile..."really sorry diya...shayad hum raasta bhatak gaye hai..'

story build up krne ke liye I wrote itna saara, now whoever continues can write just small parts! No pressure of writing big parts!

Edited by surbhimathur - 7 years ago

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Carry

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: mrs_weasley

Thank you so much Surbhi :)❤️
Chalo toh phir thik hai ab iss FF ka pehla part upload kar dungi... I hope yeh impromptu waali story sabko acchi lage.. :)

My God Angel!!!! This is HEAVEN!!!

I beg you to write it as a separate FF... exactly as it is in your mind.. Please baby.. This one is going to be awesome.. Mujhe abhi se buht hi acchi feeling aarhy hai iske baray mien.. 😊❤️

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Carry

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: surbhimathur
New Situation for Scene Antaakshri 2-

"Really sorry diya...shayad hum raasta bhatak gaye hai..'

~~~~~~~
Ratan and diya were soon to be a divorced couple, she wanted to reveal the news to her parents on her own but ratan had insisted to come along as never in his wildest dreams he could've let diya bear the grunt of his irresponsibility.
But as their divorce date came closer he had started getting anxious and more protective about diya, his feelings were making him act silly. He was caught looking & smiling at himself in the mirror many times by chote thakur...and amidst all of that drama, one day diya decided to go to surajgarh on her own...and in an instant ratan convinced her to take him along...seeing him requesting so sweetly her heart skipped a beat...yet again!
But he came up with a weird idea of them reaching surajgarh by taking an enroute...to which diya agreed as this was supposed to be her last journey with ratan and she wanted to live it up...but least she thought that they would lose their way...and it was getting dark now...diya looked at ratan and he managed to force a smile..."really sorry diya...shayad hum raasta bhatak gaye hai..'

story build up krne ke liye I wrote itna saara, now whoever continues can write just small parts! No pressure of writing big parts!

😃😃 Surbhi meri jaan, jungle mien mangal kerwane ka irada hai? 🤣

Great start bro...👍🏼

Mien sochty hun iss azeem situation ke baray mien.. 😉😉 buhhht sari possibilities hain, you know! 😉😆😆

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surbhimathur

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Woh kal raat ko meri inspiration kuch alag hi th 😉 😆
I hope ye situation thik h?
Yes yes aaram se socho!

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Carry

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: surbhimathur
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Woh kal raat ko meri inspiration kuch alag hi th 😉 😆
I hope ye situation thik h?
Yes yes aaram se socho!

Haan dude.. the situation is awesome. 👏 will definitely pitch in.. But i really want other members of the forum to tak part too... Why is everyone so silent?

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